Reviews For The Sweetest Sin
Reviewer: blackmagic94
Date: 08/15/08 15:18
Chapter: The Story of a Girl

I really like the intensity of this story, and I think the writing is excellant. However, I just can't understand how Hermione could even begin to like Draco. After what he did to her, it seems unrealistic that she would even be able to look at Draco, much less doubt that she is not in love with him.

Reviewer: WeirdoGoddess
Date: 08/09/08 13:17
Chapter: Meeting the Malfoys

Wow. What an absolutely wonderful story this was. It pulled me in from the start and had me captured all the way through. You displayed the characters and their emotions in such detail that it stunned me.
Thank you. Thank you for offering me, and us all, a wonderful opportunity to read a story like this.

Reviewer: izzymalfoy
Date: 08/06/08 21:09
Chapter: Epilogue

wonderful story..and very touching...:'( :) *sob*

Reviewer: dark00
Date: 07/27/08 1:11
Chapter: Epilogue

o my god i cant belive that this story acctualy made me cry!!!!!!!!!
it was so sad but still an awsome story i hope that you writte mora draco&hermione fics!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Silver Lioness
Date: 07/25/08 11:06
Chapter: Epilogue

aww i really wish they could have stayed together :( but it doesnt matter =, i still love the story reminds me of the plain white tee's song LONELY SEPTEMBER kind of

Reviewer: Silver Lioness
Date: 07/25/08 11:06
Chapter: Epilogue

aww i really wish they could have stayed together :( but it doesnt matter =, i still love the story reminds me of the plain white tee's song LONELY SEPTEMBER kind of

Reviewer: jd_always
Date: 07/21/08 0:55
Chapter: Epilogue

wow annie you are a fantastic author

i hope you are proud of the fact that you created such a masterpiece

Reviewer: Emily_Anne
Date: 07/20/08 14:57
Chapter: Meeting the Malfoys

Oh my goodness.
This story was awesome.
And I think I got the metephor.
I loved it.
It was amazing.
I can go on forever lol.
=). Thank you for the beautiful lesson.

Reviewer: SmithsonianGirl
Date: 07/18/08 21:17
Chapter: His Hidden Heart

I have a little correction for you: sedo capillus is grammatically incorrect. Basically, the direct translation for your spell is "I calm/smooth" and "hair", although your form of capillus means singular nominative. What you want is capillum sedare, which means "to flatten hair". For second declension (the category capillus falls under) accusative singular is the ending um. Also, re signifies "to verb here". I'm a Latin student, just wanted to clear that up because the endings and order bothered me.

Reviewer: Fawksfriend
Date: 07/15/08 10:27
Chapter: Epilogue

I'm a particularly sensitive guy but your story has me reaching for a tissue. Thank you for sharing somthing so beautiful with us.

Reviewer: HPFangirl71
Date: 07/12/08 14:36
Chapter: Epilogue

Such a tragically beautiful love story, i loved every bit of it but was saddened when Draco died even tho i kindve had an inkling it would happen in the end, having him reunited with his beloved Iris was a romantic touch.......

Reviewer: pikachu
Date: 07/10/08 12:30
Chapter: Meeting the Malfoys

hey d story is just awsum
really i dont have words
but why is it that at the end of your stories they both get separated
u dont like them united?
neways grt work

Reviewer: malfoys girl
Date: 07/07/08 13:30
Chapter: Epilogue

Aww! I loved really showed all the different sides to malfoy.well done! made me cry!

Reviewer: littlefrogger
Date: 07/07/08 2:19
Chapter: Epilogue

Absolute brilliance! I've never read a non-cannon story that I actually liked but this was just amazing!!! Kudos to you :)

Reviewer: Ravenclawrox3
Date: 07/05/08 8:12
Chapter: Epilogue


Reviewer: anna_kate
Date: 07/04/08 6:03
Chapter: Epilogue

of all the stories, of all the chapters, of all the fanfics on earth.... this one makes me cry..... you have a gift.... really

Reviewer: Eshon
Date: 07/03/08 9:27
Chapter: Epilogue

truly awsome!!!!!!!!!!!......... I LOVED IT! especially the ending........... it almost made me cry. You are a really mature writer.......... truly appreciate your work

Reviewer: phoenixgurl321
Date: 06/28/08 10:36
Chapter: Epilogue

I have read this story to the bitter end and I LOVED IT! The fact that you made Malfoy so real just captivated me. You have a gift. You inspired me to write my first ever Hermione/Draco fanfic on this site, so thank you.

Reviewer: phoenixgurl321
Date: 06/27/08 16:23
Chapter: Meeting the Malfoys

Oh shoot Hermione is such a bad ass at the end.

Reviewer: Wishbear
Date: 06/26/08 21:05
Chapter: Epilogue

hey, i really like your story, although it is strongly reminiscent of beauty and the beast in some parts, but still...

and i liked how you showed what would have happened if voldemort won. i kinda wanted harry to lose just so we could find out (yes i know that sounds twisted and evil, but whatever), but to the point...

thanks for writing this! i enjoyed reading it

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