Reviews For The Sweetest Sin
Reviewer: Ginny_Tonksatrix
Date: 09/08/08 16:14
Chapter: Written in the Flames

Ohhh wow. he's gonna find out....

Reviewer: Ginny_Tonksatrix
Date: 09/07/08 22:01
Chapter: A Terrible Crime

Wait... how come she can't use magic, she has before...

Reviewer: Ginny_Tonksatrix
Date: 09/07/08 21:19
Chapter: Numb

aww. did draco save her? yay!

Reviewer: Ginny_Tonksatrix
Date: 09/07/08 21:12
Chapter: The Story of a Girl

I don't know what to say except the obvious. You are an amazing writer. This story is amazing.

Reviewer: Ginny_Tonksatrix
Date: 09/07/08 20:47
Chapter: Mudblood Town

I loved this chapter and I can feel everything that Hermione feels. It's pretty much amazing.
Why did Draco bring Hermione with him though? I don't get it......

Reviewer: Ginny_Tonksatrix
Date: 09/07/08 20:31
Chapter: Iris My Love


Reviewer: Ginny_Tonksatrix
Date: 09/07/08 20:25
Chapter: His Hidden Heart

wow. hair...? eek. I fan't stand not having a wand and I've obviously never had one, I can only imagine how hard it would be for Hermione, top witch to have lost hers. Good idea to include that.

Reviewer: Ginny_Tonksatrix
Date: 09/07/08 20:05
Chapter: No Idea

I think it makes plenty of sense that she would tell pansy at this moment. She just can't keep it in and sometimes its easier when the other person wouldn't expect it, to tell a dark secret, easier when they are hurting too. omg, Zabini. huh. Hadn't seen that, nice choice.
This is the first Dramione fic where I've seen Pansy as more than a slut, I actually really like it.
Well done.

Reviewer: Ginny_Tonksatrix
Date: 09/07/08 18:25
Chapter: The Only One

another great chapter, but the second to last sentense doesn't make sense, you prolly just worded it wrong or something.

"She waited for him to respond, but he did and said nothing."

he did what?

Reviewer: Ginny_Tonksatrix
Date: 09/07/08 18:16
Chapter: The Beauty in the Breakdown

She was so distracted by her thoughts that "the pain of the salt in her tears rubbing into her cut was barely noticeable."
Wow... I get that. physical pain means nothing next to that emotional pain.
"If I died that night,I would've saved myself."
Would she have been saved by death? from the pain and shame of the lost war?

This last section in the garden was beautiful. "she never would have expected such a formidable house to hold such beauty behind it." The garden is Draco! beauty behind terror. The baby bunnies! its just so beautiful. and the butterfly beautiful but when you reach out it flies away. hmmm...

This chapter was really dinamic from utter hopelessness to pure joy. nicely done. I really feel like a part of the story.


Reviewer: Ginny_Tonksatrix
Date: 09/07/08 17:57
Chapter: Her Own Secret

hmmm. unreadable light eh? interesting. I hope we get to learn more bout Tommy too.

Reviewer: Ginny_Tonksatrix
Date: 09/07/08 17:51
Chapter: No Amount of Pressure

Ouch... poor Hermione, I bet they all really bond though.
btw, I forgot to mention how I loved the last chapters symbolism of the color red (esp the candel and flame). Voldemorts eyes and blood are red, but it can also mean love and with a flame, that could mean passion or violence and I think thats cool because it fits so well to Draco/Hermione.

Reviewer: Ginny_Tonksatrix
Date: 09/07/08 17:41
Chapter: Crimson

Huh? scared and a bit confused is me.

Reviewer: Ginny_Tonksatrix
Date: 09/07/08 17:34
Chapter: Up to Something

oh god... I don't want Draco to be a rapist....
And I love the voice you've given Hermione, it is so in charector and I hope I see more of the mirror.

Reviewer: Ginny_Tonksatrix
Date: 09/07/08 16:56
Chapter: Meeting the Malfoys

Wow. I can see already why this is in the top 10 favorates. Its soooo interesting and well written. perfectly iincharector. Is she eating dinner with the family? why?

Reviewer: MistyStorm
Date: 08/28/08 14:47
Chapter: Epilogue

I have to admit, I was not a big fan of where this story was taking me. The beginning and middle did not seem to flow for me, however I could stoop reading. Something kept telling me it will get better. I just had to know how this would end. I am glad to say I was overwhelmingly surprised. I am utterly captivated by that sad yet beautiful ending. (Bravo). I feel that the growth in your writing is truly reflected in this piece. I may be a late comer to this MNFF, but I am thrilled that there is a place where all of these wonderful stories can be brought to life. Thank you for letting us in to the continuing world of Harry Potter as seen through your eyes. And Thank you to JK Rowling for giving us such a magnificent world to play in.

Reviewer: kmb86
Date: 08/25/08 12:21
Chapter: The Beauty in the Breakdown

is the title of this chapter based off of the song let go by frou frou? You know, beauty in the breakdown?

Nevertheless, your descriptions are amazing. I am really enjoying this story.

Reviewer: MysticalMayhem
Date: 08/22/08 13:40
Chapter: Meeting the Malfoys

You brought me to tears with this fic, it was so amazing. I really wish they could have stayed together..but i guess that's just how things are. You are very talented, I loved it. :D

Reviewer: blackmagic94
Date: 08/15/08 16:01
Chapter: Unexpected

What's 'punishment of release'?

Reviewer: blackmagic94
Date: 08/15/08 15:18
Chapter: The Story of a Girl

I really like the intensity of this story, and I think the writing is excellant. However, I just can't understand how Hermione could even begin to like Draco. After what he did to her, it seems unrealistic that she would even be able to look at Draco, much less doubt that she is not in love with him.

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