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Reviews For The Sweetest Sin

Name: Ginny_Tonksatrix (Signed) · Date: 09/08/08 16:22 · For: The Promise
what?? nooooo! depressing chapter!!! loved it.
And actually, Iris, the googoo dolls, that was the song I happened to be listening to when i opened that other chapter that it started. crazy, right?
love that song sooo much!

Name: Ginny_Tonksatrix (Signed) · Date: 09/08/08 16:14 · For: Written in the Flames
Ohhh wow. he's gonna find out....

Name: Ginny_Tonksatrix (Signed) · Date: 09/07/08 22:01 · For: A Terrible Crime
Wait... how come she can't use magic, she has before...

Name: Ginny_Tonksatrix (Signed) · Date: 09/07/08 21:19 · For: Numb
aww. did draco save her? yay!

Name: Ginny_Tonksatrix (Signed) · Date: 09/07/08 21:12 · For: The Story of a Girl
I don't know what to say except the obvious. You are an amazing writer. This story is amazing.

Name: Ginny_Tonksatrix (Signed) · Date: 09/07/08 20:47 · For: Mudblood Town
I loved this chapter and I can feel everything that Hermione feels. It's pretty much amazing.
Why did Draco bring Hermione with him though? I don't get it......

Name: Ginny_Tonksatrix (Signed) · Date: 09/07/08 20:31 · For: Iris My Love

Name: Ginny_Tonksatrix (Signed) · Date: 09/07/08 20:25 · For: His Hidden Heart
wow. hair...? eek. I fan't stand not having a wand and I've obviously never had one, I can only imagine how hard it would be for Hermione, top witch to have lost hers. Good idea to include that.

Name: Ginny_Tonksatrix (Signed) · Date: 09/07/08 20:05 · For: No Idea
I think it makes plenty of sense that she would tell pansy at this moment. She just can't keep it in and sometimes its easier when the other person wouldn't expect it, to tell a dark secret, easier when they are hurting too. omg, Zabini. huh. Hadn't seen that, nice choice.
This is the first Dramione fic where I've seen Pansy as more than a slut, I actually really like it.
Well done.

Name: Ginny_Tonksatrix (Signed) · Date: 09/07/08 18:25 · For: The Only One
another great chapter, but the second to last sentense doesn't make sense, you prolly just worded it wrong or something.

"She waited for him to respond, but he did and said nothing."

he did what?

Name: Ginny_Tonksatrix (Signed) · Date: 09/07/08 18:16 · For: The Beauty in the Breakdown
She was so distracted by her thoughts that "the pain of the salt in her tears rubbing into her cut was barely noticeable."
Wow... I get that. physical pain means nothing next to that emotional pain.
"If I died that night,I would've saved myself."
Would she have been saved by death? from the pain and shame of the lost war?

This last section in the garden was beautiful. "she never would have expected such a formidable house to hold such beauty behind it." The garden is Draco! beauty behind terror. The baby bunnies! its just so beautiful. and the butterfly beautiful but when you reach out it flies away. hmmm...

This chapter was really dinamic from utter hopelessness to pure joy. nicely done. I really feel like a part of the story.


Name: Ginny_Tonksatrix (Signed) · Date: 09/07/08 17:57 · For: Her Own Secret
hmmm. unreadable light eh? interesting. I hope we get to learn more bout Tommy too.

Name: Ginny_Tonksatrix (Signed) · Date: 09/07/08 17:51 · For: No Amount of Pressure
Ouch... poor Hermione, I bet they all really bond though.
btw, I forgot to mention how I loved the last chapters symbolism of the color red (esp the candel and flame). Voldemorts eyes and blood are red, but it can also mean love and with a flame, that could mean passion or violence and I think thats cool because it fits so well to Draco/Hermione.

Name: Ginny_Tonksatrix (Signed) · Date: 09/07/08 17:41 · For: Crimson
Huh? scared and a bit confused is me.

Name: Ginny_Tonksatrix (Signed) · Date: 09/07/08 17:34 · For: Up to Something
oh god... I don't want Draco to be a rapist....
And I love the voice you've given Hermione, it is so in charector and I hope I see more of the mirror.

Name: Ginny_Tonksatrix (Signed) · Date: 09/07/08 16:56 · For: Meeting the Malfoys
Wow. I can see already why this is in the top 10 favorates. Its soooo interesting and well written. perfectly iincharector. Is she eating dinner with the family? why?

Name: MistyStorm (Signed) · Date: 08/28/08 14:47 · For: Epilogue
I have to admit, I was not a big fan of where this story was taking me. The beginning and middle did not seem to flow for me, however I could stoop reading. Something kept telling me it will get better. I just had to know how this would end. I am glad to say I was overwhelmingly surprised. I am utterly captivated by that sad yet beautiful ending. (Bravo). I feel that the growth in your writing is truly reflected in this piece. I may be a late comer to this MNFF, but I am thrilled that there is a place where all of these wonderful stories can be brought to life. Thank you for letting us in to the continuing world of Harry Potter as seen through your eyes. And Thank you to JK Rowling for giving us such a magnificent world to play in.

Name: kmb86 (Signed) · Date: 08/25/08 12:21 · For: The Beauty in the Breakdown
is the title of this chapter based off of the song let go by frou frou? You know, beauty in the breakdown?

Nevertheless, your descriptions are amazing. I am really enjoying this story.

Name: MysticalMayhem (Signed) · Date: 08/22/08 13:40 · For: Meeting the Malfoys
You brought me to tears with this fic, it was so amazing. I really wish they could have stayed together..but i guess that's just how things are. You are very talented, I loved it. :D

Name: blackmagic94 (Signed) · Date: 08/15/08 16:01 · For: Unexpected
What's 'punishment of release'?

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