HORRIBLE! HORRIBLE, I TELL YOU! I'm absolutely heartbroken! These kinds of fics are too much for me, it seems. I'm probably going to mourn silently to myself for the rest of the day. Anyway, brilliant job, and I loved it. Your writing is profusely bittersweet, and the endings of each chapter leaves a reader wallowing in pity. Even though, I couldn't stop reading. Good job. :]
I loved it! You're writing is very good. I could clearly picture most of the story in my mind. I'm a fan of Draco/Hermione fics and I have to say, this was probably one of the best I've read.
I LOVE this story as I said before...but I don't understand. How come the rain put out the fire? Draco loved her as much as he did Iris...but Hermione still loved him when she walked away...so why did it go out? Keep writing I love your stories!
I love this story. My favorite chapter was deffinetly the epologue (I have no idea how to spell that). It was amazing. I like how her tear missed the flower. I'm so supper sad that this story ended. I love it so much.
twas who i suspected, and in another universe, it would make agreat smut thing, i' sure... but i like your story because it's emotional without being annoyingly angsty. good job.
This is a fantastic fic and i really enjoyed reading it
Nice job i like the start of this already
good story =)
I have recently started reading HPFF's and this is by far one of my favorite stories...This story was amazing...I loved it from the beginning to end...Although I would have wish that Draco [Who had suffered soooo much] would have ended up alive some how and could have been with Hermoine, I think this ending would have been more suitable for this story...sad, but it was great...You have done an amazing job and I'm looking forward to reading your other stories...
did you have to kill him? im crying
So Im on chapter 18 now...and the suspence is unbearable! haha..I know you posted this story up forever ago but I think its amazing! :D
This has been one of my favorite fics for a long time, and I've only recently reread it, and I was glad to once again discover the reasons for why I loved - and still love it so much. It's not perfect, some chapters are stronger than others, sometimes it seems that you've either hurried too much with finishing them, or forgotten to pay real attention to your characters, their surroundings and details. But the thing is, the chapters you've succeeded in, they're not just half-good, they're heartbreaking. Especially at the times when you give an extra thought to the emotions evolving around Hermione or Draco, it becomes a really intense experience to read.
I could have wished that you've made them older, I know it would have meant for you to change some of the characters past lives, but I think it would have made it more realistic all together. I've got to say though, as cliché as your story may be, it works and that I think, is almost an even greater accomplishment than if you had decided to come up with some entirely unseen and different. As your clever mirror says, clichés are there for a reason, they must work if repeated so often, and I think your fic is a proof of that. A tearjerker indeed. And one that makes my heart melt and crumble with grief and glee for every word I read.
The story, especialy this particular chapter reminded me a little of the film 'The Duchess'- "There were three people in her marriage". The duke also had affaires with a couple of servants which corresponds with Malfoy and the Raven haired girl (as they are not part of the plot really)...I really like it, it's very inteersting. Although at first it seems a bit strange that Pansy opened up to Hermione. But war changes people and how things turned out in the story might be very realistic.
You have me hooked, by the way. I'm supposed to be studying for exams and here I am reading a Harry Potter fanfiction. It's very nice!
i loved that chapter!!and all your fanfiction, actually i'm reading in french and i couldn't wait to read the next chapter!
I've read this story beofre, and I still Like it ALOT! But I have one really random question: What was Poenaletum? It like made Draco get all scared and stuff But i couldn't figure out what it meant....b29;
wtf!... wait, hold up! this is a little too much for me... i'm trying to absorb this whole concept...
*inhales deeply*... okay this is quite interesting... i think i'll give it a go...
great writing by the way. good grammar and all that.
Wow... that's all I've got to say, wow...
at first I thought it was terrible that they fell in love but I understand that for them to heal they needed each other. I am sad but it's good that your work envokes such emotions. Thank you for beautiful and elegant writing. Good job.
Does she Stockholm syndrome, she shouldn't be considering wether she loves the person who raped her.