Hehe ^___^ That was so cute! And the writting style was wonderful. Sirius and Remus really stayed in character. Can't wait to see where this goes...
Author's Response: I'm not sure it's going anywhere, but it's reiews like yours that make me rethink my decisions! Thanks for reading.
that was pretty good but it confused me espcially the rabbits i mean who was mrsweasely talking about
Author's Response: Sorry, it was a bit confusing. She wasn't actually talking. It was just Sirius and Lupin's idea of what she would say if she ever got wind of the fact they were, you know, in a relationship.
This is really good. Is it a oneshot? I think it's well written but I dont think that Sirius and Remus wil be a ship in the book because it's meant to be a kids book and there would be a total uproar if they were.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, and yes, for now it is a one-shot. There would be a total uproar? Really? Well, if it doesn't bother you and it doesn't bother me, perhaps more people would be okay with it than we give credit to.
That was very cute and funny. Good job at keeping them in character. Sirius/Remus are 1 of my 3 fav. couples and they're the only slash couple I like. I know, tis rather odd I like to think of S & R as gay when I'm in love with Remus myself. Oh well, I'm just insane. I'm gonna go read your other fics now.
Author's Response: Thank you! They're the only slash couple I ship, too. Review my other, too, please!
Lol, sure you shouldn't have put this in the humor section? The last few sentences were funny. It's crazy to think about Sirius and Remus together, especially when we suspected that Sirius was something of a ladie's man in school. Now he doesn't even know how to tell Harry about women!
Author's Response: Humor section?! NEVAH! This is ROMANCE, baby. Crazy to think about Sirius and Remus together? "Crazy" meaning "Brilliant"? And Sirius isn't depicted as a lady's man at school--He pays the only girl giving him attention no mind whatsoever. Exactly. He has no idea what to tell Harry about women! Thanks for reviewing!
I love the whole reality setting in. Great job on keeping it real!
Author's Response: I try! Thank you muchly.
no it didn't offend me i think its REALLY funny that inuendo but now everytime i think of it i get a relly big grin on my face or start giggling
Author's Response: I'm glad!
o m g!!!! how crude is the end bit? i must admit i like the story so far and i hope you update it soon :D
Author's Response: You like it despite the crudeness? I'm glad. Sorry if it offended you. Really, one bit of innuendo shouldn't be TOO bad...Thanks for the feedback!
Alas, it seems that our dear hero /was/ dense enough not to get the hint... I love this story. It has them perfectly comfortable with each other, and the setting of it in their bedroom showed the perfect intimacy of their relationship, especially for the discussion they were having.
Author's Response: Stupid Harry! Only kidding. Heh, thanks for the R&R!
.....Mr. Padfoot accepts this request and will certainly do so, and dearly hopes it will not be the only thing blown tonight.... *laughs* Oh I love that line ^.^ This is a cute little fic, I especially love Sirius and all the stuff he came out with, and the way you have written this makes you imagine that it really could have happened in canon. Personally I would like to imagine that it did, and will only reluctantly dismiss the idea if Jo directly dispells the theory...Anyways I'm off to read your other fics *gives this one a 10*
Author's Response: I try to be as canonically (is that a word?!) possible as I'm able to write. Glad to make you laugh! I'm surprised you like Sirius in this fic; I'm pants at him, usually. Let's pretend this DID happen in JKR's canon...Yay! "The Mourning After" is the only good bit of fiction I've written, I believe. Thanks for the review!
Very deep, and funny (when it was supposed to be). Makes you think: whats there to stop something like that going on in the real books? who'd know?
Author's Response: That's my goal! Thanks for recognizing it. I think something like this COULD go on in the canon. I'm glad you found it both deep and funny.
Lol! That was hilarious! I love Sirius/Remus...the only slash couple I like. Sirius's lines were pretty funny, too. Sigh, I love them so much. 'Dear Harry, Merry Christmas! From Sirius and Remus...oh, and in case you haven't figured it out, we're GAY! Have a nice holiday!' And I agree with Sirius on that last line...
Author's Response: They are the best of the slash couples, fo' sho. I'm glad you found it funny! Sorry I can't write the smut to finish it...
I actually choked on my drink at the end...Beautifully written, and the characters are perfectly captured. They really are just good mates who happend to fall in love...-sighs dreamily- Thy hath renewed my love for the PadMoon pairing! -Bows- Keep p the astounding work hun! *10*
Author's Response: Heh! Thank you. I try; I draw my inspiration just from canon, to make it seem as real as fiction based on other fiction CAN be... :) I'm quite flattered. I'll try to write more!
It was good...not the best i-ve read, but it was still good! Oh, and it's spelt Dolores.....i hate that woman....GRRRR!
Author's Response: It's "I've". And I don't consider it the best I've written, so we agree on one thing! Apologies for the spelling error.
I Loved that last sentance! It was HILAROUS! PLEASE write more sooooooooooooooooooooooon. I can't wait to see how this one turns out!
Author's Response: Thanks, but I rarely continue stories. Please, please, please read my others!
oh and to add to that i just realized ur one of my favorite authors...sorry to cause fan mail and r/s forevah!
Author's Response: dude. fan mail is awesome. go fanmail my better stories plzkthnx. Heh. I kid. Unless you want to.
ha ha this is very very cute and quite entertaining. Please write more!
Author's Response: Oh, great! I'm glad it was entertaining. Basically my first attempt at fluff.
This is so one of my favorite stories. I love it! Still laughing at that end part. hehe! You must update soon or i will just die!! :) :) Awesome story! p.s. please review my story Texas Witch if you don't mind . :) Update!! :)
Author's Response: okay i will. thanks, im glad you laughed. i probably won't update so you should read my other stories!
i love this story so far, well actually i don't think i've read a story of yours i didn't like. i can't wait to read more. great job!
Author's Response: Thank you! I really don't like this one, so it's good to hear positive reviews.