That was so sad. I'm so depressed. I haven't even the will to use an exclaimation mark. I think what Harry said will help, not by taking any pain away, but by letting Ginny know someone else understands. Lucius Malfoy was a hateful being who could never have been a father to Draco, sadly there are people like that. I suppose if Draco had lived there would be those who'd never trust or forgive him so perhaps it's best.
Why couldn't Ginny ask Kermione for help in potions, why would she go anywhere near Malfoy, why would she write in a diary after Tom Riddle? Sorry, just finished reading a Ginny/Draco fic and am trying to warm up to the idea that Malfoy is a nasty scheming slytherin again. Who knows, perhaps he'll turn out to be OK here too. Lucius is vile though and that dream Ginny had was chilling because it could so easily happen. Great fic!
Author's Response: Ginny didn't ask Hermione for help because if she did, this story wouldn't have happened lol The diary idea... well, let's face it, as long as the diary didn't write back, she was fine. The diary is actually being written out of the revised version of the story though. Ever since the seventh book, I have a whole new outlook on the Malfoys, so there are a lot of things that may change in the re-write.
"she admitted to herself that he was rather handsome, even if he was a despicable git."
You should have put in your little fanfic summary that this was D/G.
Author's Response: Thanks for the suggestion... I think I will :)
Awww.. That actually made me cry :(
Great story though!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Be sure to check out my other works.
thats kinda sad.....u know.........but what i cant get over is the swords.......i mean come on these people have wands and spells which are MUCH more efficient tho less dramatic.......other than that i thought this was really well written and good.......
Author's Response: I figured that a sword would be a handy weapon to have by their sides incase anything happened to their voice or wand. Plus, yeah, much more dramatic.
I loved ur story though the fact of draco dying in the end didn't go with me!!! u shldn't hv killed him but anyways i say that coz i like draco.....UR STORY WAS GR8!!!
Author's Response: Draco's one of my favorites as well, but it just seemed like the right ending to go with the story.
okay okay okay.... i always leave a little review of my feed back of a story after reading it and i can only supply you with knowledge from a reader and not a writer. Well one thing i thought is that you established a great exposition qith the diary and then not to far along you abandoned the diary until the end... in the beginong it seemed as if the diary was going to be a main part of the story Also, the broom thing ... you never came right out and said who gave it to her even though it was pretty obvious , and ginny kinda never mentioned it agian and that was kinda wierd... well thats all i got to say ... it was over all a good story i really enjoyed reading it
Author's Response: Yes, I know. There were a lot of loose ends with this fiction. As my first HP fic though, I didn't think it was too bad. I've definately improved since then, and I definately won't be trying to throw every little idea into a fiction again. lol
You need to change the layout. I can't read the left side.
Author's Response: I think that was a site issue. I hope it's been cleared up since then.
whoo...im cryin here...that was wonderful
how much like lucius is it to stab his son in the back...literally as a dying with!!!
i always hated that bastard....
anyways...truly wonderful story...amazing, i loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you. It felt like something Lucius would do, so I went with it. :)
Ok, I have to admit it...this story is great.Not much of a fancy writer, so I'll end it here(short and sweet)- Great Job!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I'm glad you liked the story.
Excellent story.......I almost cried....Really Good and eye glueing...Keep up the good work!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you and I promise I will. There are more plot bunnies floating around in my head so you never know what I'll come up with next.
*Cries out* This is so sad! *Tears run down my face* Poor Ginny! Poor Draco! *Takes deep breath* OK. ~Godess!~ This story is awesome! Still cant belive Draco dies. ~By the dark lady.~ *Shudders* I give you a 10! Wicked story! :}
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you like it and hope you check out my new story, Bedknobs and Broomsticks.
I really enjoyed this one.Your a bit fast though in getting to the fight.Other than that and Draco dying it was well done.Also who says Draco has to be dead?I see a encore in your future.Wink.
Author's Response: lol Sorry, no encore for this fiction, but I do have others that are just as good... :)
how sad....dam lucius!!!!i thought this was very cute but i am totaly mad that draco died. how can any1 kill their own son? thats just dispicable.
Author's Response: Well, Lucius is fairly ruthless, and I think he would take down anyone who was on the side of Dumbledore, even his own son.
touching story but you might want to slow down the speed of the plot next time you right. It seems like you're rushing into each bit of the story in each chapter. nice job though
Author's Response: Yeah, I think I was too. Since I've written this, I feel that I've gotten much better. Check out my upcoming fiction, Bedknobs and Broomsticks.
I LOVE THIS STORY! it is one of my favorite draco/ginny story ever! i think you shoul keep on writing, and dont stop with the amazing work!!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad that you like it so much.
(Single tear rolls down face) This story is so toching, plus while im reading the last chapter, i'm listening to launch and when I get tot the part where Lucius kills Draco, 'Alive' by P.O.D comes on. Ironic.
Author's Response: That is ironic. I'm glad you liked the story. There is much more to come with other works I have in the queue. Hope you check them out.
I really enjoyed this story, but I wish it was longer. I'm very sensitive so this story made me cry and i wish it was more emotional cause it was lovely. I wish Draco didn't die cause i love him. I hope you write another story that is as touching.
Author's Response: I'm really glad that you liked it. Check out "I Will Always Love You". Same pairing, and a lot of people really liked it as well. :)
That was really sad! I don't know how I didn't cry! 10
Author's Response: Thank you for the review.
Tear. . . :.(
Author's Response: I'm sorry it was sad, but it was the only way I found it could end properly.