Very interesting. The characterizations of each of the Weasley's seems well thought out. I felt for Errol. Good job!
Yeeeesssss! My reviews are FINALLY sent in! Yipeeee!
You're not the only one who's sympathetic to Errol and Percy, but you are one of the few who are. :) :O :P Wheeeeee!
Ohhh. Poor Percy.
Re-reading the review I left that last sentence should say I hope you do some more fan-fiction, your very good.
I loved your unusual view of the Weasley's. You write Errol very well too. Hope you do something else if this is your usual standard of writing.
Like your version of Percy, and totally agree with the way the owl is treated. Most wizards don't seem to treat their animals well - especially in transfiguration. I must stick up for Molly though - having that many children must be hard!
This was great! Very interesting view of things, I've never seen anything like it, and it's refreshing to see a well-written story like this with an original storyline (at least, as far as I can see). Keep it up!
Author's Response: thanx
Yay I'm your first reviewer! That story was amazing, keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanx soooo much GinnyRox. I wasn't sure people'd like it, I'm the only one I know who's sy,pathetic to Errol and Percy