This was so epicly written. I mean, the rain and the screaming person for love's lost souls. Oh, so Shakespeare. And I could here sad piano music playing in the background. He he, good job.
Wow. Definitely a tear jerker. I was really sad he killed himself, cuz well I'm really against that but whatever. You painted a very emotional picture. Now I'm off to find the tissue box!
That was so sad!!!! I almost cried, which is very rare for me!
wow very touching and well written
but why would he leave hermione and ron? but i geuss it was too much
i give it a ten for affect because that even made me cringe when you described the cut
very well done
That was so sad. Definitly needa tissue box for this one. Keep up the good work!-ginnyaustin101
Aw, this is so sad! Very emotional, I was sure it was Sirius over James' grave until you mentioned "he left for me"etc etc. Great work, I'll check out your other stories.
most intriguing. it definately provoked an emotional response. cheers.
Holy moly!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was so completely awesome! I had no idea who it was, and what was happening but then when the final revelation comes it was so amazing tears were spilling out of my eyes. You will be the next JK!!
that was really really good. I couldn't work out who everyone was at first, but that made it batter! *10*
omg. this was one of the few stories that actually made me cry. i hated it when jk killed sirius. u should definitely consider a career in writing
I-you-b-w- Excellent. That is all that I have to say on the matter. That is pretty much where Harry is headed. Beautiful. Deep. Moving. Heart-wrenching. It made me cry, I hope you're happy. One thing though- How did Sirius have a grave- if they don't have his body? i mean it just fell through the veil and that was it, right? I loved it. Great, awesome, super, excellent. It paints a vivid picture- I can just see Harry kneeling in front of a grave with rain, tears, and blood running down his body- staining his clothes- a silver dagger glinting in his hand. Definitly a ten.
wow that was really good. there are hardly words to describe it! it was very powerful and your description of everything was very vivid and clearcut. great job!
Mysterious again (I love mystery in fics, so you wonder who you are talking about). Bittersweet ending. Great angsty fic! They suit your strengths well. Keep writing!
Very well written! had me on the edge and all the way in! I love how you didn't try to mention any names until around the end. It added more emotion.
Horrblily powerful, although i was a bit surprized I would have that with Harry feeling that way that at least Ron or Hermione would have died too. But overall I liked it
aww that story is too sweet
Now I'm depressed... It was a very good story though, the emotion really comes through. I like that it's not necessarily a happy ending, but it's realistic. I hate reading stories where Harry kills Voldemort, Sirius comes back alive and everyone is happy. I personally think Harry's going to during the battle, but I like your version too. Lovely. You get an A++ and a Gold Star.
please please please write a sequel! or you can let me do one.. i want Ron and hermione to go the same way as harry with depression! awsome
Author's Response: i'm not so sure about a sequel for this one, it's kind of a stand alone thing... and having ron and hermione go the way harry did doesn't fit in at all. i might write something about them, like a little ending with the mourning their dead friend, but i don't want them to kill themselves. in my world they will live happily ever after with dozens of kids ;)
That was some awesome writing. Very.. erm... graphic and descriptive of the surroundings. I cried at the end.... But that was truly some amazing writing.