Reviewer: peacesmilepotter
Date: 09/20/09 17:43
Chapter: one shot

how happy… and sooooo sad!!!!! i don't know what to think...

Reviewer: Lairy_Fights
Date: 02/05/07 16:12
Chapter: one shot

OMG! That was so good! I love it. You really captured all the characters well in this short piece of writing.

Reviewer: lost_in_fantasy
Date: 10/03/06 18:28
Chapter: one shot

wow.....brilliant. that little speech from harry to ginny at the begining made me cry! your such an amazing writer, i think you got the final battle just PERFECTLY.

Reviewer: amy4rupert
Date: 06/01/06 8:20
Chapter: one shot

i really do like it and it is the best one-shot ive ever read.But i always find a fault in a story.To tell you the truth mine here is very minor.I just am commenting on the bit where Harry died,then suddenly in the same chapter you put "81 years later..."i just dont find that very practical.I only spotted that with thanks to my enlish teacher.I wrote a story once and then put 7 years later.My teacher thought i should add parts of what happened and then it would be much less sudden.

Reviewer: amy4rupert
Date: 06/01/06 8:15
Chapter: one shot

wow that is amazing!Im a little confused about the ending.Did Ginny die in her sleep?If so had all her family already passed away?Please reply.

Reviewer: misshaunted390
Date: 10/01/05 17:36
Chapter: one shot

hey, my first review! yay! wow, that was so cool! you know, i can really imagine book 7 ending like that. great fic!

Reviewer: phoenix_trills
Date: 09/17/05 19:59
Chapter: one shot

Oh man oh man oh man.... That was... I can't even think up a word good enough to describe how great this story was! Oh my gosh... I'm seriously at a loss for words. That ending of the battle is almost exactly how I think book 7 will end, and you did it so fantastically well! Thank you for writing this story so that I had a chance to read it!!

Reviewer: pinkpPotter
Date: 09/08/05 20:06
Chapter: one shot

Ooh that was a very good fic. You describe the last battle really well! I was wondering what the incantation Harry used means...I know amo means "I love," but what does "Immolo aetas" mean? I'm giving you 9/10 just because I can't stand the thought of Harry dying. I love him too much.

Reviewer: blondethunder
Date: 07/27/05 17:36
Chapter: one shot

this fic was great, one of the best i've read by far. keep writing, because you have a real gift! i loved it--this was the first fic that ever made me cry haha!

Reviewer: fog_on_the_water
Date: 06/21/05 23:42
Chapter: one shot

wow. just wow. the ending, oh my god, made me cry the pacific ocean. it was sooooo sweet...

Reviewer: hattiepotter
Date: 06/03/05 12:26
Chapter: one shot

Aww that was so sad and yet so happy. Thank you.

Reviewer: penname
Date: 03/25/05 4:28
Chapter: one shot

seriously don't make me cry ever again! did ginny die at the end, at that was them all in heaven? i loved it, i agree its a possibly that both harry and Voldermort will die... 10/10. but i hope you don't plan on killing harry in to the gates of hell? theres only so much i can take!

Reviewer: StarryNight
Date: 03/11/05 21:46
Chapter: one shot

Awwwwww...this story was soooooo sweet!!!!! It made cry...Ginny waiting all those years!! And then with everyone sitting at the table in the end!!! Awwwww!! Really great! I also like the way the final battle went down!! Excellent work.

Reviewer: madamerowling
Date: 02/26/05 13:48
Chapter: one shot

that was so sad...

Reviewer: SweeTLiLy
Date: 02/23/05 19:39
Chapter: one shot

omg i am crying so hard....this is so sad and beautiful i love it! o i cant stop crying!!!

Reviewer: stickm
Date: 02/22/05 15:30
Chapter: one shot

wow, what can I say that was fantastic! Extremely powerful and emotive description used in there, and a lot of research/forethought as to how Harry could eventually beat Voldemort. I'm off to read your next story now :)

Reviewer: come what may
Date: 02/08/05 21:14
Chapter: one shot


Reviewer: LaFee de Lys
Date: 02/08/05 21:05
Chapter: one shot i'm crying...That story is amazing! I'm in shock here! just....WOW!

Reviewer: Catana Snape
Date: 02/04/05 15:38
Chapter: one shot

This is an extremily beutiful story that can trigger emotion in the most insencitive of heats. In my mind I can see the picturesqe field that you describe. As I read it I seem to be on the sidelines of the battle. You are truly an amazing author and I hope you write more fan fiction.

Author's Response: Thank you...i am in fact writing another fic and will start posting it when i am satisfied with the direction it is taking.

Reviewer: scarlet and gold
Date: 02/04/05 13:53
Chapter: one shot

that was amazing. i was crying so hard when i read it. i love the ending. Immolo aetas amo... I sacrifice life for love?

Author's Response: Good translation...i know that i mucked up the tenses but the meaning was there. Thank you.

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