yeah cliffie, let me guess is cliff a deatheater or just a casanova?
its not fair -why must lily always cut james down to size, interesting though
i guess this was about lily in wonderland , i'd have liked more fireworks though
nice . james is both brash & vulnerable & i feel soooo sorry for him
i love it ! i can't wait to read on & find an older (and wiser?) james
awe, i love it
It was really good.
I loved it!!!
great story! I'm re-reading it, now, and I just thought I'd mention...aren't Sirius's eyes gray? Or am I wrong? Anyway, nicely done!
Wow, I just read this story after doing a search, and I thought it was the cutest idea ever! So I just wanted to say good job. =]]
I really love this story. It was so sweet and emotional, I actually cried a little. I wish Lily hadn't been so mean to him throughout most of the story, but I guess she had her reasons. I love your writting so much and I think you should keep at it. Love always...
I do adore it but isn't this second year? They can't go to Hogsmeade until their third year... Or do they mean outside of Hogwarts? Anywayz, good story!
Author's Response: Lily was just asking about Hogsmeade; being muggle born she would probably be curious. She starts to say "so only third years go?" but james cuts her off. And James was bragging that he and Sirius would sneak to Hogsmeade. Thanks for the reveiw!
cool Pride and Predjudice based love story. That's one of my favourite books too!
Whoa... that was so identical to Pride and Prejudice it's not funny... BUT I LOVED IT!
Very beautifully written!!!! Loved it great job!!!
first year rite?? doesnt that make them 11 yr olds??
Hello! I reviewed before, but I was going over my favorites list and read this last chapter for a third/fourth time, and wow. Blew me away....AGAIN! Perfect. And beautiful. And amazing. Thank you.