please Please PLEASE update...i really like this fic you can write so good keep it up!!:):) cant wait for new chapter :) 10/10
please Please PLEASE update...i really like this fic you can write so good keep it up!!:):) cant wait for new chapter :) 10/10
please Please PLEASE update...i really like this fic you can write so good keep it up!!:):) camt wait for new chapter :) 10/10
one of my favorite lily/james reads! cute story, i cant wait until the next chapter!
:) This is really good! I love it! Please update!!!
just when it was getting to the REAL action i come to find that the next chapter isnt up yet....please do the next chapter real soon. im getting anxious to know wat happens. awesome story so far
Author's Response: haha - well, the next and final chapter is submitted, it's been in queue for about a week now...
I love your story please update soon. I think this is one of the best L/J stories I've read and I've read a lot of them. Thanks for writing this one.
I just want to say I love your story. I am fully in love with James, and you make him so wonderful. Keep up the good work--update soon!
This is one of the best Lily/James stories I've read. Good job!
Great chapter! It's about time lily falls for james. lol
This is a really good story, straight on my favourites list!! The writings really good, you could give several good writers a run for their money!! The most original Lily/James story I've read yet, though I dont know exactly why...it just is!! One hint though, see if you can put more spaces in the paragraphs, coz it hurts alot of people's eyes reading chunks of writing on the computer!! 10/10
(sigh) i just love your story so much, lol, thanks for updating! you rock! again...good story!!! i just want to go hug james....and steal him...and marry him...and runaway with him...teehee ;)
I love really this story! It shows how a boy can keep being in love and that's funny and so cute and lovely! I love it! Continue like this, it's awesome!
wow. this is such a good story, i escecially love this chapter when lily finally realizes her feeling for James. It is really great and I'm so happy that you up-dated so quickly. excellantly great job, keep it up.
awsome i agree w/ maruder by midnite awsone story!
I hope you don't get tired of having lots of fans gushing about how wonderful your chapters are because that's all you'll ever get if you continue like this. Once again, I must post exactly how charming and attractive your James Potter is. *sighs* If only someone would make Lily undeserving of him and I could have him :K Ah well, you made it close. I don't think Lily deserves him here. How many chances did she have to apologize and she never took the initiative? Pretty proud, isn't she? ;) Update soon. I sincerely wish for them to get together; but only the strongest of forces can bring me to accept that Lily does deserve poor Potter's love here in this story - MM
i love the story! james is so sweet! "every time he teased her to go out with him it was only a cover so she wouldn’t see how vulnerable he was, how desperately in love he was." please update soon! i can't wait to see how this all wraps up!
this is a reaally good chapter, i love the feeling in it. and dont worry, ur readers havnt deserted you!
Author's Response: Thank you, I really appreciate it!
Really cool story I can't wait for the next part.
