oh, the irony!!!!! wow you really are good!!!!! the fight was nicely pulled off a couple chappies back by the way . to improve...i dunno, you could do it from james' POV? like the same thing but from his POV?then he goes looking for her to apologise and they bump into a corroidor , looking for each other? keep it up!!! u r so good!!!
Hey, your story is so good! It is now on my favorites list! I love that Lily is starting to fall for James, and I felt so bad for him when she yelled at him. I know it will be hard with th efiling you were telling us about, but update as soon as you can!
Very good!!! I love where this is heading... Please update soon, please? Keep it up!
Your story is a very good rendition of Pride & prejudice, and I love it. (I've been writing a similar story, but its on fanfiction.net as Metamorphosis, and thats how I could make out the similarities.) I love the characterization of James as "typically content". And I also love the story title. Keep up the gr8 work~!!! Dr. Fawkes
.....WOW.....:) Please update soon!!!!!!!10000000000000000/10(ofcorse)
I love it so much, she finally admitted she had feelings for James, but admitted them to herself. Haha, well update soon!
I love your story so much!!!!! Please update soon, I'm dying to know what happens next!!! I'm giving you a 10!!!! Great job!!! :)
ACK! KEEP GOING!
Ok, i have to admit, i wasn't impossibly impresssed with yur 1st chapters. No, i liked them alot! but i LOVED this chapter! it juts-- i dunno, something about the way James was saying how vunerable he was....it was so perfect!
I love this story!!!!!!! It's wonderful, you are so talented. :) I feel really sorry for James, though. But that's going to change, isn't it? ;) Great job!!!
Yo, anyone there?? considering there is only one chapter left...I think we would consider it...If only if you would....not to push or anything... UPDATE SOMETIME IN THE NEXT CENTURY? Thankyou for your time :D
this story is awsome...your other one-shot stories are great too. i really like the plot and everything about this story
love it. update!
I loved it! Wen I saw that the chapter title had not 'part 1' or 'part 2' in it or whatever I thought your story was finiched. I'm glad it's not 'cause I really like it! Great job update soon!
Update soon!! Great Story! I love it!
A nice interpretation about the years! Really like it. Can't give you a real high rating, because it's not really a stand alone and i think, you could give it sometimes a bit more deph. BUT GJ!
this was really really awesome...i hope you have a Part 2 to this one. but if this is the end, great job!
Hi...great great chapter...i'm not sure if i reviewed before but I have been reading. Please take a look at my fics that can be found in my profile.
UPDATE....PLEASE! I really love this story!
I love Pride and Prejudice, too. It was great to see the Lily/James version of it. I'm glad someone wrote it. Great job on the story. I can't wait to read the ending.