Reviewer: Narci Jones
Date: 06/17/06 0:12
Chapter: Memory and Urgency

I pulled out of my memory (which was about to become extremely pleasurable) haha!!!.......what happened to ron????..........well anywho....i think u got a little off character.....not as an insult........just a weeeee bit not believeable....still love ur writing!!...just a bit of condtructive critisism!!....DONT HURT ME!!!!!! ^ o ^ !!!!...GREAT STORY!!

Author's Response: I like that line and no one ever mentioned it before, so thank you!

Reviewer: Narci Jones
Date: 06/17/06 0:01
Chapter: Snape's Counsel

AWWWW!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!! cute!
sweetly done,

Author's Response: thx sooo much!

Reviewer: stormy_lovegood
Date: 06/16/06 2:38
Chapter: Death Eaters' Council

It's good, but went too fast. if they hate each other it really would take about 30 chapters just to get them together, and another 5-10 to get them married. it's just realistic. But anyway, maybe the words could have improved, you could have taken it slower. All in Al, i give you a 6. But im tough. Look for the only story i ever rated a 10- The unseemly proposal, pg 3 Draco/Hermionie!!!!!! Look for it, it's 32 chapters long and still not done, and it's amazing!!!!! Anyway, good story. It's definitely 1 to remember. Look for my story soon, Serene and lost, and The mudblood and the ferret!!!

Author's Response: Serene and Lost and The Mudblood and the Ferret? Well, you definitely have great titles! I'll read if I have time.

Reviewer: stormy_lovegood
Date: 06/16/06 2:34
Chapter: Completion of the Prophecy

Um.... Dumbledore DID die...i've cried plenty about it. But ay way, how'd you know the spell that would be used in the book to kill dumby?Still... Snape.... Anyway, i think you needed to take it a little slower, becasue it just doesn't seem realistic. Ok, A lot slower. Consider reading the Unseemly Proposal. Pg 3 Romance Hermionie/Draco. Read it, it's amazing!

Author's Response: This was obviously written pre-book 6.

Reviewer: malfoys_gurl_1234
Date: 06/01/06 22:11
Chapter: Completion of the Prophecy

that story was really good and i think you really should write more.this story could easily become a great novel!

Author's Response: That's a kind thing to say! Thank you very much!

Reviewer: dr324
Date: 06/01/06 7:32
Chapter: Completion of the Prophecy


Author's Response: Gracias! Merci!

Reviewer: ember
Date: 05/22/06 16:26
Chapter: Completion of the Prophecy

I am not upset that dumbledore died in your story because I am upset that he died in the 6th book of the Harry Potter series so seeing that he was already died i don't have any reason to be upset and by the way your story wass very good. Make sure to look for mine which is rona;d weasly and the love story. A r/hr ff

Author's Response: I'm really glad you liked my fic and I'll be certain to look at yours!

Reviewer: GoF_Lover
Date: 05/20/06 6:27
Chapter: Completion of the Prophecy

a wis upset but nice endin

Author's Response: yay! thanx!

Reviewer: Pottersangel
Date: 05/01/06 20:06
Chapter: Completion of the Prophecy

YES I was upset that Dumbledore died I almost cried! But I liked your story you're a really good author :)

Author's Response: I'm a good author? Aw, thanks; that brightens my day!

Reviewer: iheartdracomorethanudo
Date: 04/29/06 8:47
Chapter: Death Eaters' Council

aww, draco saved her life! well not life, but pain or somethin

Author's Response: Indeed he did. Thanks sooo much for reviewing!

Reviewer: samiseriouslyam
Date: 04/28/06 16:05
Chapter: Completion of the Prophecy

I'm crying as I type this. *wails loud enough for you too hear in England* You killed off Dumbledore! That's not nice! I hate Snape! And Voldermort! And Dumbledore! Why'd he have to die? And you, letting him die in your story? Any ways, good job again. (Ron should have been the idiot who went to attack the Death Eaters single handedly tho'.) WAH! *sniffs* HOWEVER (I've stopped crying now) I FOUND HUMOR IN THIS! OH, YES! (just so u no, i wasn't using caps lock. Not that it matters, but..) "I think we should fight them," came Lupin's pleasant suggestion.

"Why, Remus?" inquired Dumbledore curiously.

Snape muttered maliciously, "Animal instinct?"

"Actually, no," Lupin answered mildly. "I think we should because bold, young Harry has almost reached the door, and I would rather not let him go into there unaided." None of us needed more coercing. We caught up to Harry as quietly as possible and entered a large room that was empty of everything save Dark Wizards and Witches.
*grins* (Am I having mood swings or what?) HILARIOUS! :D Brilliant, as usual!

Author's Response: lol You certainly are having mood swings! I like it when grim moments have slight humour to them, so I'm glad you picked up on that. :.)

Reviewer: padfooyroxmysoccks
Date: 04/06/06 18:26
Chapter: Snape's Counsel

How dose Snappey knoww all this. Hmmm. Well we can safeiy say that they found out if they like eachother;)10/10

Author's Response: Snape is very insightful. Surely, everyone noticed that when reading the books? *tickles 10 happily* Thank you!

Reviewer: padfooyroxmysoccks
Date: 04/06/06 18:24
Chapter: Memory and Urgency

Oooo, very interesting. hmm.'And'? what, may i ask comes after and. Hmmm. and alone. interesting. great chappie:)

Author's Response: So very, greatly, immensely, extremely happy you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: padfooyroxmysoccks
Date: 04/06/06 18:21
Chapter: Completion of the Prophecy

WHAT NOOOOO!?!?! Not Dumbledore. come back Dumbiy-dore COME BACK!! *sobs uncontrolably* Awww yeay!! droco&Hermione get married. WOHHOOO!! *dose happy dance* 10/10

Author's Response: *does own happy dance with the 10* Many, many thanks for taking the time to say such nice things about each chapter!

Reviewer: padfooyroxmysoccks
Date: 04/06/06 17:59
Chapter: Death Eaters' Council

He called her aWHAT!?!? .....whats that suppose to mean "..only i can call you mudblood".....Awwww he jumped in front of her how sweet.:) 10/10

Author's Response: I liked it when Draco said that too, thanks!

Reviewer: padfoot_girl
Date: 03/26/06 14:22
Chapter: Snape's Counsel

oh wow. i didnt expect things to start picking up that fast! i'll have to read the rest to

Author's Response: After I read fan fics for a year I decided that I wanted to write one, thus I wrote it quickly so I would be able to post it. I considered rewriting it, but I prefer writing about the Marauders; therefore I decided not to bother. Thank u for reviewing!

Reviewer: padfoot_girl
Date: 03/26/06 13:55
Chapter: Death Eaters' Council

hey ladylupin! im reading ur Legacy of the marauders, and its great. but u noe that already cuz i review as much as i can lol. well, i think this is great. i agree w/ the reader before me that draco doesnt suddenly go all lovey-dovey on us. lol. good job so far. gonna read the next few chapters and review them too! i noe u like it wen we give u feedback! keep it up! xD

Author's Response: Thanks! I love reviews! If you like Legacy of the Marauders you most likely would enjoy Classified Marauders Information more than this fic. Meant to Be and Get One Thing Straight, I'm Not have a similar sense of humour to Legacy, but I don't know if you're oppossed to slash or not, so do not read those if you are.

Reviewer: sara_potter
Date: 10/19/05 5:52
Chapter: Completion of the Prophecy


Author's Response: Thx so much, sara_potter!

Reviewer: Foxtrot
Date: 06/29/05 18:29
Chapter: Completion of the Prophecy

Good Fic. Nice idea for the final battle... maybe J.K. Rowling will have to steal it from you! But, I'm afraid that there are two things in desperate need of improvment. 1)You kind of spent more time on Harry and the battle and that stuff than you did with Hr/D. 2) The ending didn't give us all "closure". I half expected another chapter. It deserves more. Other than those minor blunders, you are a preety good author, keep it up!

Author's Response: The idea of JKR stealing my ending is flattering and your critism was constructive; I shall take what you said into consideration. Thanks!

Reviewer: Evilpersonified
Date: 03/22/05 16:30
Chapter: Completion of the Prophecy

oooo, drama! I love the idea of the final battle, although I always imagnined it to be longer...go figure. Lupin was wondefully in character! I love Lupin! And the little banter between Lupin and Snape: Loved it. The dialogue was a little static and seemed a little forced. Try to make it flow more. The line I thought was the most static was Moody's line about the prison cells. I think it just needs a bit of rewording. Anyway, great job on keeping the plot together, and the ending was wonderfully fluffy!

Author's Response: I like the bit between Snape and Remus as well. I can't keep the dialogue fluent in this fic because I am too lazy to rewrite it, however, I shall keep it in mind in the future. Thanks! You liked the ending? I am so pleased because I didn't!

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