Reviewer: Natajess
Date: 10/11/11 14:28
Chapter: Snape's Counsel

Defintely not what I was expecting. Great way to make Snape appear.

Reviewer: Natajess
Date: 10/11/11 14:21
Chapter: Snape's Counsel

Defintely not what I was expecting. Great way to make Snape appear.

Reviewer: LeeMH
Date: 12/02/10 9:30
Chapter: Death Eaters' Council

Oh! and one more thing: i like the way u relate yourself into the story; i meant by using 1st person. I never used to like such stories (for example Twilight; sorry if you're a fan) but this moves me^^ I mean, anybody who reads it can imagine themselves as Hermione and explores the wizarding world, right? =)

Reviewer: LeeMH
Date: 12/02/10 9:16
Chapter: Completion of the Prophecy

it would've been more entertaining and enjoying if you make it longer; also mentioning why and when Draco starts to fall in love with Hermione..yet it still nice! good job^^

Reviewer: Seventh
Date: 10/19/09 17:22
Chapter: Completion of the Prophecy

I believe that in plot and story, it was a decent enough attempt, but that things moved far too fast and weren't explained throughout the story.

Reviewer: BLAHGAL
Date: 03/13/09 10:10
Chapter: Completion of the Prophecy

i really liked the story! in the battle part i thought hermione or draco was gonna die....but i was wrong! YAY!!

Reviewer: Love_Snape
Date: 07/08/08 20:16
Chapter: Memory and Urgency

Why did you kill Dumbledore? I am really pissed. But it happened in the book.

Reviewer: fabLily
Date: 06/20/08 14:03
Chapter: Completion of the Prophecy

dumbledore died,,, *sniff* but i'm sorta ok, since i got used to the idea in *sniff* book 6...*sniff* *goes to cry in a corner*

Reviewer: winxcharmx
Date: 05/10/08 21:33
Chapter: Completion of the Prophecy

He should not have died
*sob sobitty sob sob*

Reviewer: winxcharmx
Date: 05/10/08 21:29
Chapter: Memory and Urgency

u should make a sequal

Reviewer: winxcharmx
Date: 05/10/08 21:27
Chapter: Snape's Counsel

Pansy should have said Gryffindork not Gryffindor

Reviewer: winxcharmx
Date: 05/10/08 21:23
Chapter: Death Eaters' Council

it was realy good
i loved it
but then again
i am easy to please
as long as it is
or potter-granger

Reviewer: groteskq_fatality
Date: 04/24/08 1:17
Chapter: Completion of the Prophecy

that was sooo quick.
hmm draco's too sweet. :D

Reviewer: thomasandrewfelton
Date: 01/10/08 6:37
Chapter: Completion of the Prophecy

WOW THATS KINDA SAD CUZ THey actually died in the book. good story

Reviewer: blondeastudent
Date: 08/20/07 7:20
Chapter: Completion of the Prophecy

I was sad Dumbledore died but I would rather it be him than Lupin, cause Lupin is the last of the Mauarders.

Author's Response: Yeah, Moony's my fave...Not that my penname makes that obvious or anything!

Reviewer: dracoweasley
Date: 06/18/07 1:23
Chapter: Death Eaters' Council

I'm a completely die-hard Dramione shipper, but this story would be even better if you wrote it in 3rd person(he/shethey) rather then 1st person(I/me/us), It would amke it more professional.

Author's Response: Professional? D'you mean novels? I like novels in third person and fan fics in first. *shrug* It's just a personal preference.

Reviewer: lupins_girl2006
Date: 05/23/07 15:21
Chapter: Completion of the Prophecy

omg... that was so surprising in the ending. i didn't think you would get them engaged...

Author's Response: hope you liked it!

Reviewer: MJ_Padfoot
Date: 05/16/07 21:02
Chapter: Completion of the Prophecy

No! Not Dumbledore! I'm so sad! But I really love that Draco and Hermione ended up together. Is their a sequel? Please? Pretty Please?!!? ~MJ

Author's Response: I'm glad they're together too. No sequel; sorry, but I'm flattered that you want one!

Reviewer: MJ_Padfoot
Date: 05/16/07 20:55
Chapter: Memory and Urgency

I like the story! I can't wait to see what happens next and also if Draco and Hermione end up snogging infront of Ron. Oh, I sure hope that they do. =D MJ

Author's Response: Sorry to disappoint a happy reader, but I barely include Ron because his shallowness irritates me.

Reviewer: MJ_Padfoot
Date: 05/16/07 20:51
Chapter: Snape's Counsel

Oh my! This is great! I can't wait to see Ron's and Draoc's friend's reactions! Cool chapter! MJ

Author's Response: I really appreciate the encouragement! I briefly mention how the friends feel about it, but mostly I go into the details of the Malfoy family.

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