Defintely not what I was expecting. Great way to make Snape appear.
Defintely not what I was expecting. Great way to make Snape appear.
Oh! and one more thing: i like the way u relate yourself into the story; i meant by using 1st person. I never used to like such stories (for example Twilight; sorry if you're a fan) but this moves me^^ I mean, anybody who reads it can imagine themselves as Hermione and explores the wizarding world, right? =)
it would've been more entertaining and enjoying if you make it longer; also mentioning why and when Draco starts to fall in love with Hermione..yet it still nice! good job^^
I believe that in plot and story, it was a decent enough attempt, but that things moved far too fast and weren't explained throughout the story.
i really liked the story! in the battle part i thought hermione or draco was gonna die....but i was wrong! YAY!!
Why did you kill Dumbledore? I am really pissed. But it happened in the book.
dumbledore died,,, *sniff* but i'm sorta ok, since i got used to the idea in *sniff* book 6...*sniff* *goes to cry in a corner*
He should not have died
*sob sobitty sob sob*
Pansy should have said Gryffindork not Gryffindor
it was realy good
i loved it
but then again
i am easy to please
as long as it is
malfoy-granger
or potter-granger
that was sooo quick.
hmm draco's too sweet. :D
WOW THATS KINDA SAD CUZ THey actually died in the book. good story
I was sad Dumbledore died but I would rather it be him than Lupin, cause Lupin is the last of the Mauarders.
Author's Response: Yeah, Moony's my fave...Not that my penname makes that obvious or anything!
I'm a completely die-hard Dramione shipper, but this story would be even better if you wrote it in 3rd person(he/shethey) rather then 1st person(I/me/us), It would amke it more professional.
~Claire
Author's Response: Professional? D'you mean novels? I like novels in third person and fan fics in first. *shrug* It's just a personal preference.
omg... that was so surprising in the ending. i didn't think you would get them engaged...
Author's Response: hope you liked it!
No! Not Dumbledore! I'm so sad! But I really love that Draco and Hermione ended up together. Is their a sequel? Please? Pretty Please?!!? ~MJ
Author's Response: I'm glad they're together too. No sequel; sorry, but I'm flattered that you want one!
I like the story! I can't wait to see what happens next and also if Draco and Hermione end up snogging infront of Ron. Oh, I sure hope that they do. =D MJ
Author's Response: Sorry to disappoint a happy reader, but I barely include Ron because his shallowness irritates me.
Oh my! This is great! I can't wait to see Ron's and Draoc's friend's reactions! Cool chapter! MJ
Author's Response: I really appreciate the encouragement! I briefly mention how the friends feel about it, but mostly I go into the details of the Malfoy family.
