Reviewer: FantasyFanatic
Date: 02/08/05 9:52
Chapter: Ways and Means

That was fabulous! (sp?) Update soon!

Reviewer: FantasyFanatic
Date: 02/08/05 9:49
Chapter: The Angel

I totally agree that it flows very nicely.

Reviewer: Ron Weasley
Date: 02/05/05 19:42
Chapter: The Angel

Positively enjoyable. I love how your story flows so nicely with the diverseness between dialogue and description. Looking forward to read chapter 3.

Reviewer: JessicaH
Date: 02/04/05 8:54
Chapter: The Train

That was a really good chapter and I'm definitly looking forward to the next one. It was very well written and didn't move to fast forward which is a problem with a lot of fictions. Well done!

Author's Response: LOL - it's hard to keep the brakes on - more chapters coming soon.

Reviewer: Fleur91
Date: 02/03/05 18:46
Chapter: The Train

That was really good! Keep writing, please, because I would like to know what happens next.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. I've got 7 chapters drafted, but they all need a good wash and polish ;-)

Reviewer: Kate Mari
Date: 02/03/05 17:54
Chapter: The Train

Loved the story! Ginny seems like she will MAKE Ron listen to her no matter what. Can't wait until the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks - they needed a catalyst, and Ginny's in just the right place. The next chapter is waiting for approval. D'you think it would speed things up if I sent some chocolate to the mods?

Author's Response: That last question was a joke, of course. I wouldn't DREAM of bribing mods. :)

Reviewer: Huskers
Date: 02/03/05 7:58
Chapter: The Train

It's about time someone made Hermione take things into her own hands. Know if we can just get Ron to stop being so thick.

Author's Response: Thanks - I think she needed a nudge. Not as big a nudge as Ron, though!

Reviewer: FantasyFanatic
Date: 02/01/05 17:00
Chapter: The Train

Ooooooooooo, Ginny's gooing to hurt Ron!

Reviewer: Ron Weasley
Date: 01/31/05 18:45
Chapter: The Train

Very enjoyable chapter. Ginny'll show Ron a thing or two. The chapter had a nice balance between description and dialogue. Too much dialogue is a problem in some stories, but yours is perfect. There were just a couple errors, and I'll send you my ideas on it in an email.

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