That was fabulous! (sp?) Update soon!
I totally agree that it flows very nicely.
Positively enjoyable. I love how your story flows so nicely with the diverseness between dialogue and description. Looking forward to read chapter 3.
That was a really good chapter and I'm definitly looking forward to the next one. It was very well written and didn't move to fast forward which is a problem with a lot of fictions. Well done!
Author's Response: LOL - it's hard to keep the brakes on - more chapters coming soon.
That was really good! Keep writing, please, because I would like to know what happens next.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. I've got 7 chapters drafted, but they all need a good wash and polish ;-)
Loved the story! Ginny seems like she will MAKE Ron listen to her no matter what. Can't wait until the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks - they needed a catalyst, and Ginny's in just the right place. The next chapter is waiting for approval. D'you think it would speed things up if I sent some chocolate to the mods?
Author's Response: That last question was a joke, of course. I wouldn't DREAM of bribing mods. :)
It's about time someone made Hermione take things into her own hands. Know if we can just get Ron to stop being so thick.
Author's Response: Thanks - I think she needed a nudge. Not as big a nudge as Ron, though!
Ooooooooooo, Ginny's gooing to hurt Ron!
Very enjoyable chapter. Ginny'll show Ron a thing or two. The chapter had a nice balance between description and dialogue. Too much dialogue is a problem in some stories, but yours is perfect. There were just a couple errors, and I'll send you my ideas on it in an email.