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Name: FantasyFanatic (Anonymous) · Date: 02/08/05 9:52 · For: Ways and Means
That was fabulous! (sp?) Update soon!


Name: FantasyFanatic (Anonymous) · Date: 02/08/05 9:49 · For: The Angel
I totally agree that it flows very nicely.


Name: Ron Weasley (Signed) · Date: 02/05/05 19:42 · For: The Angel
Positively enjoyable. I love how your story flows so nicely with the diverseness between dialogue and description. Looking forward to read chapter 3.


Name: JessicaH (Signed) · Date: 02/04/05 8:54 · For: The Train
That was a really good chapter and I'm definitly looking forward to the next one. It was very well written and didn't move to fast forward which is a problem with a lot of fictions. Well done!

Author's Response: LOL - it's hard to keep the brakes on - more chapters coming soon.


Name: Fleur91 (Signed) · Date: 02/03/05 18:46 · For: The Train
That was really good! Keep writing, please, because I would like to know what happens next.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. I've got 7 chapters drafted, but they all need a good wash and polish ;-)


Name: Kate Mari (Signed) · Date: 02/03/05 17:54 · For: The Train
Loved the story! Ginny seems like she will MAKE Ron listen to her no matter what. Can't wait until the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks - they needed a catalyst, and Ginny's in just the right place. The next chapter is waiting for approval. D'you think it would speed things up if I sent some chocolate to the mods?

Author's Response: That last question was a joke, of course. I wouldn't DREAM of bribing mods. :)


Name: Huskers (Signed) · Date: 02/03/05 7:58 · For: The Train
It's about time someone made Hermione take things into her own hands. Know if we can just get Ron to stop being so thick.

Author's Response: Thanks - I think she needed a nudge. Not as big a nudge as Ron, though!


Name: FantasyFanatic (Anonymous) · Date: 02/01/05 17:00 · For: The Train
Ooooooooooo, Ginny's gooing to hurt Ron!


Name: Ron Weasley (Signed) · Date: 01/31/05 18:45 · For: The Train
Very enjoyable chapter. Ginny'll show Ron a thing or two. The chapter had a nice balance between description and dialogue. Too much dialogue is a problem in some stories, but yours is perfect. There were just a couple errors, and I'll send you my ideas on it in an email.


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