Reviewer: Ron Weasley
Date: 02/22/05 13:05
Chapter: Chapter 5 - Walking and talking

I just love how this story sticks to the summer between Years 5 and 6. A writer can't go wrong then, because--I don't know about other people--I feel like a doofus when I write something and the complete opposite actually happens.

This story just has a great balance between dialogue and description (I don't know how often I can say that). It's great. You've written their conflict and reactions nicely, and I'm sure the resolution will be just as great.

Keep it up!

Reviewer: jenseeker62442
Date: 02/21/05 15:50
Chapter: Chapter 5 - Walking and talking

Yes, I agree, update soon!!

Reviewer: vanillasweety
Date: 02/21/05 15:45
Chapter: Chapter 5 - Walking and talking

wow great chapter please update soon this chapter didnt come for a long time and i want to read more

Reviewer: Niffler80
Date: 02/21/05 10:30
Chapter: Chapter 5 - Walking and talking

Yay! New Chapter! Not bad...I was hoping for more info, it's been so long since an update. Oh well, Keep 'em comin'!

Author's Response: Thanks - chapter 6 is in the queue.

Reviewer: Hermioleen
Date: 02/17/05 15:24
Chapter: Swish and Flick

I really liked it a lot. :) Please hurry with the next chapter! :)

Reviewer: kecort
Date: 02/16/05 15:24
Chapter: Swish and Flick

THAT IS NOT NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u o not leave ur readers with that big a cliffhanger!!! now u better update soon!!! ~tasha~

Author's Response: It's a bit of a tease, isn't it? I love putting readers into suspense - LOL. Chapter 5 (and the rest) are almost ready.

Reviewer: kecort
Date: 02/16/05 15:19
Chapter: Ways and Means

brilliant, amazing, stupendous, (i cant spell if u didnt getit by now, but ur story is teriffic!!) keep writing ~tasha~

Reviewer: kecort
Date: 02/16/05 15:12
Chapter: The Angel

one of!!??? (in referince to lower review) this is the best i have ever read!! i absolutly love it!!!!!!!!! ~tasha~

Reviewer: FantasyFanatic
Date: 02/16/05 15:11
Chapter: Swish and Flick

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: kecort
Date: 02/16/05 15:03
Chapter: The Train

just started ur story, first thing that hits me is the amazing ginny portrayal, love the little hint of the twins in her, and the side comment bout the twins luggage. And how u were true the the r/h relationship w/ the fight, i could contine but i want to keep reading do u keep writing, loving it ~tasha~

Reviewer: hpgurl2121
Date: 02/13/05 18:14
Chapter: Swish and Flick

This is awesome! SO great! UPDATE SOON!

Reviewer: missblack
Date: 02/13/05 10:09
Chapter: Swish and Flick

ooohhh lovey dovey lol..update soon!:)

Reviewer: Hermione_Clone7
Date: 02/12/05 19:12
Chapter: Swish and Flick

oooh, this is going to be good...

Reviewer: Curieux
Date: 02/12/05 9:52
Chapter: The Angel

This is one of the best RonHermione fics I've ever read! I love your style of writing! Definately a 1010!

Author's Response: Thank you very much, and a virtual box of chocolates to you! I'm currently working on some "issues" in chapter 5.

Reviewer: Niffler80
Date: 02/10/05 18:08
Chapter: Swish and Flick

Not bad, not bad! I look forward to getting into this story :o)

Reviewer: HPF
Date: 02/10/05 14:33
Chapter: Swish and Flick

Very good!! Just one thing, I don't think Ron would have to do chores while he had company. Plz update soon!

Author's Response: LOL - you're probably right - I wanted to show Ron being resentful about being separated from Hermione. Thanks for your review - the next chapter is "in the queue".

Reviewer: jenseeker62442
Date: 02/10/05 9:33
Chapter: Swish and Flick

Its great! I love it! update soon!

Reviewer: Ron Weasley
Date: 02/09/05 17:57
Chapter: The Train

Awesome chapter. I've told you countless times, but I love the flow. :)

Reviewer: Tiffany
Date: 02/09/05 16:15
Chapter: Swish and Flick

Awesome! Update soon

Reviewer: CassandraTrelawney
Date: 02/08/05 15:36
Chapter: Ways and Means

Oh wow! Wonderful! Please update ASAP!

Author's Response: Thanks everyone for reading and reviewing. All 8 chapters are drafted - they're being reviewed and fine-tuned as fast as I can ! Thanks again to my betas - Ron Weasley and cryst malfoy.

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