Reviewer: Mione the bookworm
Date: 03/05/05 17:11
Chapter: The Train

this is one of my favorite fan fictions i love the story and everything please read me fanfiction if you want to it is not on here it is in the prosses to though well i'll say it again i liked yuor store and the suspence of it you should also read some one to die for to

Reviewer: Mione the bookworm
Date: 03/05/05 17:10
Chapter: The Train

this is one of my favorite fan fictions i love the story and everything please read me fanfiction if you want to it is not on here it is in the prosses to though well i'll say it again i liked yuor store and the suspence of it you should also read some one to die for to

Reviewer: Kalira30
Date: 03/04/05 16:43
Chapter: A pair of bright green boxer shorts

Umm Just saying, I seriously doubt that Ron would be at St. Mungos for very long and that anyone would baby him like that seeing as whenever they get hurt at Hogwarts, Madame Pomfrey has them out of the hospital wing in like ten minutes tops. But otherwise, its really really good :)

Author's Response: Thanks everyone for your feedback. Constructive criticism is always welcome :-) The last chapter is currently waiting on approval.

Reviewer: vanillasweety
Date: 03/03/05 21:00
Chapter: A pair of bright green boxer shorts

heehee thats a funny story. Is there more? (some times you can't tell with fan fiction when the ending is, but it is a clue when youve been checking for updates for 3 months) Its great though please dont say that is the end. Its probly not I hope not! *tootles*

Reviewer: FantasyFanatic
Date: 03/03/05 19:40
Chapter: A pair of bright green boxer shorts

Funny boxers!

Reviewer: kecort
Date: 03/03/05 16:21
Chapter: A pair of bright green boxer shorts

what does she have planned?? lol cant wait to find out funny very funny. sweet to the one part. cant wait 4 more ~tasha~

Reviewer: HPF
Date: 03/03/05 14:47
Chapter: A pair of bright green boxer shorts

Wicked! lol, funny boxers! Plz upadate soon!

Reviewer: Burrowbrat
Date: 03/03/05 14:40
Chapter: A pair of bright green boxer shorts

Great story! It's a really nice read. One thing though, Hermione seems to cry an awful lot. Don't you think she's a bit stronger than that. (I don't know, just my thoughts) I liked it that you threw in some fun with the boxers. Nice touch.

Reviewer: Huskers
Date: 03/03/05 7:28
Chapter: A pair of bright green boxer shorts

That is just cruel, evil, wrong, nasty, but then what do youe expect out of a girl?

Reviewer: beattle button
Date: 03/03/05 6:58
Chapter: A pair of bright green boxer shorts

Love the boxer short bit! Only one problem Chuddley Cannon's color is bright orange not green. I can't wait for the next chapter you have me hooked. Kepp up the good writing.

Reviewer: manderz_b
Date: 03/01/05 15:36
Chapter: The Wronski Feint

i really want to see what happens next. fun story :)

Reviewer: kecort
Date: 03/01/05 9:51
Chapter: The Wronski Feint

amen to the prievious review. love the chapter and the story cant wait to c what happeneds next ~tasha~

Reviewer: Huskers
Date: 03/01/05 8:49
Chapter: The Wronski Feint

This is a lot of fun. It always happens though, the guy tries to show off in front of the girl, next thing you know, hello hospital

Reviewer: Emilius
Date: 02/27/05 13:16
Chapter: The Wronski Feint

I like it a lot! You can clearly see that Hermy loves Ron. She cries for a broken leg. Please, write more!!

Reviewer: missblack
Date: 02/26/05 15:23
Chapter: The Wronski Feint

that was very good..cept hermione seems extremely worried about a broken leg..i mean, it's not that bad! but im sure it's prolly scarier when it's happening to you or someone you love.

Reviewer: DarkMarkGirl
Date: 02/24/05 23:53
Chapter: The Train

ok, i haven't even read the whole ch. only to the point where they just started fighting, but one problem i see is a common one in lots oh h/r fics: i know that ron and hermione fight over stupid stuff, but i don't think that they flare up so fast... even though their tempers might be strained, still, idk good though keep going

Author's Response: Thanks for your comments - I agree, it happened rather quickly. I promise to do it better next time!

Reviewer: Nina Weasley
Date: 02/24/05 21:52
Chapter: Chapter 5 - Walking and talking

Oh... I really like this story.. I think it's one of the best Fan Fic I've read so far. Love how the story flows nicely... Am a huge fan of Ron/Hermione pairing and I can't wait for the following chapters!

Reviewer: hogwartsadult
Date: 02/23/05 19:07
Chapter: The Angel

Love it! One of the best R/H stories I have ever read. Great writing skills too!

Reviewer: Mione_Bookworm
Date: 02/22/05 19:27
Chapter: Chapter 5 - Walking and talking

Oh! It's a grat FF! Keep it up I really liked it! I love FFs like this...DOn't forget to update!

Author's Response: I won't forget, I promise! LOL - All the chapters are drafted, but I can only submit one at a time. It takes a couple of days to get each chapter read and corrected by my beta (thanks again to Ron Weasley), then submitted and approved by a moderator. The betas and mods do a great job, and they're the main reasons why this site is one of the best. Chapter 6 is waiting for approval, and chapter 7 is with my beta at the moment. (P.S. Chapter 8 is the big finale!)

Reviewer: igotbannedfroma2k
Date: 02/22/05 17:17
Chapter: Chapter 5 - Walking and talking

FINALLY! An update! I've been waiting forever! Good chapter... a bit more realistic... cept the tree thing... o.O Please update sooner next time...

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and for your feedback. The "tree thing" is borrowed from another author (can anyone guess? - a virtual butterbeer for the first correct answer!), so it's a bit AU. I figured that if the potterverse can have a whomping willow, then why not have some other types of semi-sentient trees?

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