Reviewer: MarauderLuver779
Date: 11/24/06 17:05
Chapter: If Only

I think I'm going to need another box of kleenex...

Reviewer: abbycadabra
Date: 05/13/06 11:12
Chapter: If Only

You are such a great writer. I love the stories where they are kind of pushed into realization. Kind of like in Good Will Hunting, at his last therapy session. Great job, the onlything I didn't completely understand is that he realized not to be guilty and all of that (just like the "It's not your fault" part), but when he sees his parents' graves, he feels guilty again. Maybe he didn't - that's just the way I saw it. Great story - I want more!!! *Hands chocolate cake over*

Reviewer: crazy_purple_hp_freak
Date: 05/01/06 10:29
Chapter: If Only

*wipes tear away* Wow...what an atmosphere....*sobs* This is really really good!

Reviewer: maria_taglioni
Date: 04/22/06 7:24
Chapter: If Only

Very powerful. You definitely have a way with words.

Reviewer: lightning_crashes11
Date: 04/16/06 0:48
Chapter: If Only

perfect. you captured everything so well. the grief. just so perfect. did like the last line. it is true. the boy who lived... well he is meant to live.

Reviewer: HanilarLion
Date: 02/20/06 15:20
Chapter: If Only

That was so good it gave me the chills. I'm sad that the Weasley women died; in my opinion, they're two of the best characters. James and Lily's gravestones almost made me cry, and that last sentance was perfect.

Reviewer: ProngsPrincessLexi
Date: 06/07/05 14:50
Chapter: If Only

I loved your story, it was recommened to me by e friend and it is sooo tragic, but very well written. I only hope that they dont really end this way! Excellent, i'm off to read 'Fate' now, (this is the fic was recommended to me)! This was really really good. I wish Ginny hadn't died though! *sobs* (I am an H/G shipper, you see) Well done, and if you like time travel fics, give my fic a read! (I am warning you that its time travel cos not everyone likes them). I'm off to cry now.....if I break down tommorow it will be all your fault! (of course that would also mean revealing my Harry Potter obsesssion to my friends and/or family....they think I like the books yes, but they are oh so naive when it comes to fanfics....) I feel so sorry for Mr Weasly, and the bit at the end; I can imagine JK taking Harry to visit his parents graves at the end of the books.

Reviewer: Rose
Date: 04/23/05 15:37
Chapter: If Only

that is possibly the sadest thing I have EVER READ. I was litterally in tears, and I absolutly loved teh ending even tho it was completly depressing, it was really true tho I have to say I really hope the really books don't end it that way, it;s just too sad.... 10/10 tho. Great job!

Author's Response: I also hope the books don't end like this, but there's always that gut feeling that JKR's going to kill of SOMEONE else I love ::sniff::....::sigh:: well, anyway, glad you enjoyed my story (even though it was depressing, which it was kinda supposed to be :p ) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: iahp_mom
Date: 02/23/05 22:08
Chapter: If Only

Truely this is the only fanfic I've read that has made me cry. Congrats. You made it real, you kept the characters dead on. You should be proud. 10/10

Author's Response: oh, wow....thank you very much. Really, those words are really very kind. Glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: chica91
Date: 02/05/05 20:24
Chapter: If Only

I read this on fanfiction and again now! It is a wonderfully sad and great story!! i actually cried the first time I read it! :( It perfect! :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it, even a second time :) you're too nice ^_^

Reviewer: marrianna
Date: 02/05/05 13:19
Chapter: If Only

Well that just wrenched my heart out and threw it on the ground. I could tell that was very heartfelt and even though it was dark, there was a sense of peace in it to, that just because so many of the ones that he loved are dead, life still goes on. Great work.

Author's Response: wow, this story is affecting people a lot more than I thought it would, btu I guess that's great :) That's what I was shooting for and I'm glad you felt it!

Reviewer: The Mafia
Date: 02/03/05 17:26
Chapter: If Only

well you reduced me to tears. your story is dark and heart felt and i felt every last beat of it.

Author's Response: wow, you're great, thank you for your very kind words ^_^

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