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Reviews For Innocent boy

Name: SnorkackCatcher (Signed) · Date: 02/14/07 12:31 · For: Part six
Interesting rewriting of the situation, but you certainly made it quite plausible!

Name: Emily_the_Poet (Signed) · Date: 07/07/06 19:09 · For: Part six
I was surprised by the turn your story took. It was dark and vague, leaving the story to go in several directions. The ending was a little flat compared to the rest of your story. I felt it could've been further explained, with much more detail than you gave. All in all it was an entertaining read and a different outlook on the way things could've gone.

Name: bluekiwibubble (Signed) · Date: 07/19/05 11:27 · For: Part one
Oooh, I've never seen anything about Barty before, which is a pity as I think he is(was) a really interesting charactor. Good so far, am looking forward to seeing how someone that naive and against the dark arts will turn Death Eater...

Name: rockinfaerie (Signed) · Date: 03/12/05 10:05 · For: Part one
Great writing... you stayed in character but made it interesting, and you didn't overload it with excessive description. Nice!

Name: Diamond Quill (Signed) · Date: 01/31/05 13:35 · For: Part one
This is good so far... cool!

Author's Response: I'll try to post a new chapter/part each week, but I can't promise you anything...

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