Reviews For Innocent boy
Reviewer: SnorkackCatcher
Date: 02/14/07 12:31
Chapter: Part six

Interesting rewriting of the situation, but you certainly made it quite plausible!

Reviewer: Emily_the_Poet
Date: 07/07/06 19:09
Chapter: Part six

I was surprised by the turn your story took. It was dark and vague, leaving the story to go in several directions. The ending was a little flat compared to the rest of your story. I felt it could've been further explained, with much more detail than you gave. All in all it was an entertaining read and a different outlook on the way things could've gone.

Reviewer: bluekiwibubble
Date: 07/19/05 11:27
Chapter: Part one

Oooh, I've never seen anything about Barty before, which is a pity as I think he is(was) a really interesting charactor. Good so far, am looking forward to seeing how someone that naive and against the dark arts will turn Death Eater...

Reviewer: rockinfaerie
Date: 03/12/05 10:05
Chapter: Part one

Great writing... you stayed in character but made it interesting, and you didn't overload it with excessive description. Nice!

Reviewer: Diamond Quill
Date: 01/31/05 13:35
Chapter: Part one

This is good so far... cool!

Author's Response: I'll try to post a new chapter/part each week, but I can't promise you anything...

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