Oh my god. I love it. it's so serine.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad you liked it.
Oh! Sorry, I forgot, I took that poem out of sonnet form (it sounded better that way) and now it only has 9 beats on a few lines.
Author's Response: Oh, okay - I'll go read it again!
Absolutely Beautiful writing. Sonnets are difficult, I know, and hardly anyone understands that -since the sonnet is tied to Shakespeare- his language needs to be used in the poetry. Perfect 10. Did you read mine? I know you read my story, but my sonnet is called "Savoring Snape".
Author's Response: Thank you so much - that was a lovely review, I really appreciated it! I did read your poem - it was wonderful.
Poor Remus, tortured every 28 days, no end to the anguish. Very melancholic, but beautiful.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you, that was a beautiful review. I want to hang it over my bed!
Wow --- very good. I greatlyu enjoyed it, though I'm going to have to go with another reviwer and obnoxiously guess that the poem is about --- Remus Lupin! I really do like your poetry, though, the Shakespearian style here is great. Cheers!
Author's Response: Thank you very much, so glad you like it! Okay okay, I see I have unwittingly dug myself into a hole here by signing the poem 'Remus Lupin', but I wanted people to guess what it had to do with him, rather than who it was by...ha ha ha, very funny. YAY Shakespeare!
It's kl. I guess its a bout REMUS LUPIN!!! am i right? lol. I really like your snape one btw. And i agree with the read and run thing. I once posted a fic and i got 60 reads and 3 reviews. So i guessed it might be bad and i deleted it.
Author's Response: It's supposed to be by Remus Lupin....ha ha, look who's being smart with me! Glad you liked it, and the Snape one - YAY!....aww I wish I could have read your fic, I think if you're going to read a fic you should at least let the author know what you thought! It's the whole point of it being in the internet.
good. i'm off to read snape's now.
Author's Response: Hurrah! But you didn't leave a review for Snape's one. Did you like it?
that was so good!
Author's Response: Thank you so much.
Author's Response: Congratulations on being my first reviewer - and for giving me 5 stars, wohoo!!! Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.