Reviewer: k_muffin
Date: 03/18/05 20:40
Chapter: Everything Has A Begining

...it's not really believable that her mother would just say, "dear, i saw you turn pink at the table" and then she would burst right out with it. It's not realistic.

Author's Response: she was best friends with her mother and she had been holding all this in all of her life.

Reviewer: k_muffin
Date: 03/18/05 20:40
Chapter: Everything Has A Begining

...it's not really believable that her mother would just say, "dear, i saw you turn pink at the table" and then she would burst right out with it. It's not realistic.

Author's Response: not exactly. her mother wouldn't come out and say these things. how do you know what a made up charater would do? that's for the author to choose

Reviewer: Parvatis_Rose
Date: 03/06/05 13:09
Chapter: Everything Has A Begining

are you about to update really

Reviewer: draco_babe
Date: 02/05/05 15:14
Chapter: Everything Has A Begining

hey i loved it!!!! but you can't leave me at just i chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!! write MORE!!!!

Author's Response: i'm trying, but the silly people are being picky! they have no imagination

Reviewer: pinayshortcake
Date: 01/29/05 11:28
Chapter: Everything Has A Begining

i really like this story! please continue it...thanks!

Author's Response: no probelm, just waiting for the next chapter's ecceptance

Reviewer: LaDy_GeM
Date: 01/27/05 22:08
Chapter: Everything Has A Begining

kool! it's interesting that you're making Harry the evil one and Draco the innocent one, and not the other way around. I like that! Keep writing!

Author's Response: i love that, it shows a whole new side of each of them and that was my intitial goal

Reviewer: Amilia Navarre
Date: 01/26/05 6:14
Chapter: Everything Has A Begining

This is good! I really like the whole best friend approach your story is really refreshing!

Author's Response: thanks. i tried to show draco's better side. and the best friend thing was the best approach for me

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