Augh! How do you manage to predict his love for Lily?
I loved this story and will treasure it forever. ;) poor Severus... I wish sometimes that he had actually gotten Lily.
"Potter seems to be enjoying himself tonight. Never mind, he thought, I’ll fix that tomorrow."
in a terribly sad story, i indecently burst out laughing. sorry. but the rest of it was beautifully sad. perfect mixture of everything!
Awe! This story is really sweet. It shows that Snape is not evil; just misunderstood. I think that is the way it should be. But if Lily told him to kiss her, why did she go back to James? I guess I'll never know. Good Job!
Author's Response: thank you so much :-) For some reason I myself can't see Snape as a completely evil, for me he is just misunderstood as you put it. That was my first fic, they will be many more to come, maybe I'll write some kind of continuation, since other reviewers asked me to.