Reviewer: potters4ever
Date: 08/19/09 19:57
Chapter: Prongs, Thoughts, and McGonagall: Part IV.

thats it?

Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer
Date: 06/23/09 14:04
Chapter: Enter the Marauders

uhh, you portraided the marouders perfetly!!!! NICE!!!

Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer
Date: 06/23/09 13:51
Chapter: Black

i don't know, this chappie seemed ind of cliche...i've read similar ones in other fics, although maybe they were also based on this one, like with the beginning...
i still love it, though!

Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer
Date: 06/23/09 13:41
Chapter: Familiarity

very good so far (:
and sorry if i'm being annoying, but shouldn't htere only be one of the line things ( - ) here: But---”
not 3?...whatever...

Reviewer: potterchick14
Date: 10/14/08 0:01
Chapter: Wormtail's Tale

this chapter actually makes you feel pity over Peter!even if he deserves none!SINCE LILY AND JAMES ARE DEAD BECAUSE OF HIM!I HATE HIM! anyways! great chappie!

Reviewer: potterchick14
Date: 10/13/08 20:56
Chapter: Starry Night

This is Sweeeet! loving it!

Reviewer: potterchick14
Date: 10/13/08 0:05
Chapter: Talks and Tunnels

awwww that's soooo sweet!

Reviewer: potterchick14
Date: 10/12/08 23:51
Chapter: Enter the Marauders

nice!!i think it was kind of sweet the whole," I wish i could call you Lily-thing!

Reviewer: potterchick14
Date: 10/12/08 23:37
Chapter: Black

I like the story it's really good!

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 09/09/08 23:01
Chapter: Prongs, Thoughts, and McGonagall: Part IV.

aaaawww!!! that was soo romantic!! and lily is taking all the blame!! how sweet...

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 09/09/08 22:31
Chapter: Prongs, Thoughts, and McGonagall: Part III.

so, McGonagall caught lily and prongs, then lily broke the window, then McGonagall tried to stun prongs, then prongs took McGonagall's wand, and ran out the window? oh, and anne is in love with someone besides remus. cool. ;)

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 09/09/08 22:23
Chapter: Prongs, Thoughts, and McGonagall: Part II: Endymion Lucent.

sirus is wwwwwwwaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyy hotter than this endymion guy!!!!!!!!!!!!! i bet he's even in slytherin.

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 09/09/08 22:07
Chapter: Prongs, Thoughts, and McGonagall: Part I.

thats so funny that peter and anne kind of connected. and i hope McGonagall doesnt find out about james! although, he probably just turned back into a human in the nick of time.

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 09/09/08 19:42
Chapter: Confusion

that is just so bizarre. the whole thing is just creepy.

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 09/09/08 19:34
Chapter: Reunion

so their cuts and everything was gone? thats so weird! at least everyone is ok, though.

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 09/09/08 19:23
Chapter: Shattering Dreams: Part IV.

wow, what?! i think that that really all happened, but thats just so weird and cool!!

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 09/09/08 16:19
Chapter: Shattering Dreams: Part III.

firenze? cool!! and i hope anne and remus are alright!!

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 09/09/08 16:12
Chapter: Shattering Dreams: Part II.

goodness, that forest is terrible!

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 09/09/08 16:05
Chapter: Shattering Dreams: Part I.

it was confusing, but thats ok. i know it will all be explained. and it was definatly suspenseful!!

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 09/09/08 15:57
Chapter: Wormtail's Tale

the pre-dance comptetion thing was very funny. and i felt a bit sorry for peter.

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