Great! Andran fnally realised he likes Marti! I still have to say I want Marti/Clayton though. I'm not liking Zinny so much now, she's going totally nuts in her hate of Marti. Just wanted to say, I love Deanne! She's so wonderful, the sort of friend everybody wants! And you've spelt Secret wrong at least three times now. Secrete? I'd like a little more goss on the Ron/Hermione situation, but other than that! I love Clayton!
Okay, changed my mind! Now I want Zinny/Andran and Marti/Clay! He sounds so totally gorgeous! And it's obvious Zinny is in love with Andran, so there is NO other possibility! Juts because Andran and Marti are the main characters doesnt mean they have to be together! Anyway, good chappie. Can't wait for the first Ravenclaw/Gryffindor Qudditch Match!
Great! It was really funny and I loved it. I still can't believe all these things are happening lol, so unlike the Hogwarts Harry knew. Great! I want Zinny/Andran! But I also want Marti/Andran! Arghh! I can't choose! Great writing :D
Woohoo! A cliffhanger! Gotta luv em :). I can't wait to see what Andran put in Marti's Violin case hehe. I love the bit about the owl! it's so clever! "It was most impolite, he knew, for any owl to screech that loud. how very rude." Fantastic! Can't wait to read more!
THAT, was SO FUNNY! I loved the idea of the kissy song! Way clever! Ohhh, go Ron and Hermione! I'm rooting for Zinny and Andran now, I reckon she likes him! Great great great, anything that really makes me laugh deserves a ten!
Yay! I love Luna, and even though I'm not sure I like the other ppl as Professors, I think she'll make an awesome one! I'm glad Marti likes her too. But theres this bit where she says they're feeling sorry for her, they probably thought she was a first year. McGonagall announced at the feast that she was in sixth year, so they'd have to be pretty stupid to think that. Also, this part. She looked up at me, “Well I couldn’t very well take it out in front of Malfoy and the others? Just because I do these things in front of you doesn’t mean I’d do it in front of the snarkiest teacher we’ve got?” What's with the question marks? Other than that, I luved it! I also lurved the Conga Line! Nice to see Marti has such a strong personality, and to think, at the start I thought she was going to be the new Hermione! (not that Hermione doesn't have personality!) Great job!
That wasn't dull! Don't say that! It was really good! Except I don't see why they didn't just threaten the school with veritaserum, it's just as easy, they'd still be totally freaked out. Also, I don't like how you have Hermione, Ron, Harry and Malfoy all teachers. It's really unlikely they'd all become teachers, especially since malfoy is sort of a death eater, even though they could be stupid like Dumbledore with Snape. They'd probably get on with their lives and stuff. It's good to see the real Marti in this Chapter, in the last one she sort of seemed very... well shier and quieter than in this one. Andy's annoying, he needs to get over it! Good writing!
This storie's really good! Lots of humour fics are just a whole bunch of nonsense and gags, but yours is well written and funny! 10/10 and I'm adding this to my favourites!
amazing story. It's very original and fun. Keep up the good work!
Sorry for the last review, it was utterly thick-headed of me to ask the question when it was right in the reading. I thought it was rather funny putting the owl's perspective in. :)
I love your story. It has the perfect blend of everything but still stays mostly humorous and true to the category it was put in. I love the Marti/Andren. Keep it up.
wow...I just stumbled on this. I really like the idea of new characters with Rowlings' in the background. It has a few weak spots (the hula dancing bit- hillarious though it was), but overall this is awesome! Keep up the good work. Oh by the way, do you think you could add a bit more R/H encounters?
This was hilarios, I was recently at a gymnastics meet after originally reading this and someone was playing this song, I burst out laughing and no one could figure out why!!!!
Author's Response: Whooohoo - I'm going wide-spread! I love it - I am now in your head!!! MUAHAHAHAHA!!!! I love to hear this kind of thing!
Wow! I can't wait for the next chapter! I love to read this over and over again- It keeps me laughing!
Author's Response: Wow, I can stand the funny-test of time! Thanks!
I, Splatteh, believe to have reviewed already, but.... THISSTORYWASSOFUNNEHANDIWASLIKE ROFLMAO! And for those of you who don't speak jabberwocky: This story was hilarious!! By the way, remember it's quality, not quantity, BUT: Pweeeeze update soon! (I know it's the mods fault it's taking so long. I submitted a story like, two weeks ago and am still....waiting.....*snore*) I just want someone to whine to, yeah? Anyway, sorry about the long review, but a good story always deserves a review. *wink* ;) Big, Froggy, Splatty Number.... !!!*10*!!!
Author's Response: Loveya, Splatteth! I've officially updated! Enjoy!
take as long as you need hun. This was soo... hilarious. pies, toothpast... need I say more. I can't wait, but I don't want to rush you.
Author's Response: Oh, please rush me. It keeps me on my toes... though usually there's nothing I can do about it :P Thanks for the review!
hey ur story is SOO cool lol u really got imagination update soon pliz i loved it everywhere so please update!! im gonna die if u don´t
Author's Response: Well, if your going to die... okay, I'll update! *rolls eyes, just a little*
oh my gosh! tHAT was hilariosly funny! I HAVE NOT laughed that hard in so long. I think it's kinda funny how Harry and Ginny keep getting caught. this sitory has all my favorite ships in it. just curiuos but... who is neville married to? (assuming he is by his kids)
Author's Response: Hee... I know, I'm bad about Harry and Ginny... very naughty, sneeking around like that. But, for what it's worth, I am not an immoral person, and I think in the next few chapters a big secrete will come out about them... maybe. I'm still debating... And about Neville... yes, those are his kids, and he is married... I'll probably never say who to, though. She's not in cannon. See, most of the people who were in the books were tired of fame and fortune, except for Ginny, who wants to be seeker more than anything, but Neville probably wouldn't have thought himself good enough to be a teacher. I figured that he'd be the first one to settle down to a quiet life and start a family, probably right after school... Harry, to me, would hold off on that, mostly because he'd want to deal with his issues first... urgh, I'm getting too involved with this rely...
Oh I saw knew it from the begining...Zinny likes Andran! hA! *10*
hilarous next chapter? after break whn is that 4 u? -imapcient person
Author's Response: Well, my break was until Jan. 9, but not to worry, the next chapter is up!