Reviewer: phoe_gurl
Date: 05/24/06 11:26
Chapter: The Deal, the Lie, and the Kissy Song

hahahahahaha. ha! brilliant!

Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie
Date: 03/21/06 19:45
Chapter: Appendages and Apologies

Wow. After many months was this?....I kinda forgot the plot, but then I remembered. Hehe. Good chapter, and Such prompt updating! I applaud you!!! Sorry, I have a problem with sarcasm. Good job, and I will have to go back and reread thought. *smiles* Poor characters.

Reviewer: potteronpotluvhim
Date: 03/19/06 21:56
Chapter: Appendages and Apologies

Woot! Woot! an update freakin hilarious i kinda want clay and marti to get together instead of andran and marti realy good chp cant wait for next chp

Reviewer: HarryPotter is my LIFE
Date: 03/19/06 20:49
Chapter: Appendages and Apologies

Hurah! An update! I am super-psyched. And it was well worth the wait! I loved the part about Marcia bursting into the Common Room and Andran accusing her, pure hilariousness.

Reviewer: HarryPotter is my LIFE
Date: 03/19/06 20:49
Chapter: Appendages and Apologies

Hurah! An update! I am super-psyched. And it was well worth the wait! I loved the part about Marcia bursting into the Common Room and Andran accusing her, pure hilariousness.

Reviewer: ginny_babe92
Date: 03/19/06 19:58
Chapter: Appendages and Apologies

Finally! I thought you'd abandoned the story or something. It's really good to see an update! I loved it, especially the part about Marti losing her finger hehe. But is Marcia in Gryffindor? I thought Alice was and she was in... I don't know lol. It said Marcia burst in and they were in the common room, so... Ah well. Still, good writing. ^_^

Reviewer: goth_gal
Date: 03/19/06 6:46
Chapter: A Sorting and Flying Shepard's Pie

uh oh oh shit that aint good hehe lol ummmm so yer i noticed that u used some ppl from harrys year as professors lol soo who else did u use and most important did u use harry!!!???!!??! lol pretty gd

Reviewer: goth_gal
Date: 03/19/06 6:35
Chapter: Gryffindor, Insults, & Bertie Bott's: What a Beginning

hehe guess wat i noticed??? lol hermione an lavender brown are professors at hogworts!!!!! am i right or am i right??? lol jj any way gd story so far....

Reviewer: gryffindorgirl180
Date: 03/18/06 8:19
Chapter: Gryffindor, Insults, & Bertie Bott's: What a Beginning


Reviewer: Wings of the Morning
Date: 03/17/06 23:24
Chapter: The Great Hogsmeade Weekend!

Dangit. I wish I could write humor this good. Whenever I try, it ends up all insanity and pointlessness, but you don't have that, which is saying something when you have two characters get into a fight with personal hygiene products. *cough* That paragraph just sounded really stilted... Anyway, loves and kisses. Awesome story. I want to see more. Now. Ignore the impossibilities, just *magic* it onto the site. ...And please make no comments about my really crappy puns.

Reviewer: Splatteh
Date: 03/13/06 20:32
Chapter: The Great Hogsmeade Weekend!

Please please please update! Pweeze, pweeze, pweeze? You havn't updated for months. Have you forgotten your tale? Your story was so funny and hilarious and interesting and plotful and riveting and wonderfully perfect that I MUST READ on! So I leave thee with two words: UPDATE. NOW.

Reviewer: potteronpotluvhim
Date: 02/26/06 20:51
Chapter: The Great Hogsmeade Weekend!

ur stories really god when will u update! plz hurry -Rita

Reviewer: ginny_babe92
Date: 02/24/06 0:02
Chapter: The Great Hogsmeade Weekend!

Great Chappie! Funni stuff! I think it's hilarious what happened in the closet, about Zinny's shoulders, and I'm really worried about Marti! Will she be Okay? I hope so, but in the meantime I had a bit of a giggle at the things she said. I'm still looking for Marti/Andy! Great work, update soon!

Reviewer: ginny_babe92
Date: 02/23/06 0:09
Chapter: The Plan, the Paddock, and the Duel to Remember

That was great! Okay, somehow you managed to change my mind, I'm now fully in support of Marti/Andy! I just hope Zinny can get over it. I loved your analogy with needing to put the book on a shelf, it was clever and I liked the was it kept popping up. I also loved the way you brought Ginny into it. Woohoo go Ginny and Harry! Brilliant, absolutely. This is great and the duel was funny too, but I can't believe she thought it was a shut up kiss! Arghh! I hope everything works out! lol. Fantastic writing :) 10/10

Reviewer: ginny_babe92
Date: 02/21/06 1:25
Chapter: Wake-Ups and Wonders!

You spelt Secret wrong again! Sorry, It just annoys me. I loved this chapter and I really want Zinny to be happy and get with Andy, but I want Andy to be really happy and get with Marti, but I REALLY want Marti and Clay to be together! Marti is such an idiot, Clay obviously likes her, and he asked if she'd smack a bludger at him on the pitch! I would have said NO WAY! Either she's an idiot or she totally doesn't like him in that way. I love Clayton! So adorable! Andran's funni, Zinny's nuts but I think it's nice how shes in love with Andran, and I can understand the things she does (except the bubotuber pus, that was horrible). Marti's annoying. She seems so... mean, you know? Like, I just wish she'd get over herself a bit. It was good to see her cry over the bubotuber pus, and to see how emotional she was about her violin (why was she so emotional about it, by the way?) but I want her to be... more normal! You know, play pranks and everything, but she doesn't seem to understand anything! Okay I didn't describe that very well, but anyway... Also, I love the way you mentioned Ginny! It is Ginny thats the professional Quidditch Player, right? She's one of my fave characters, and I love seeing her mentioned. I still can't believe so many of them grew up to become teachers, and what a coincidence they all came from the same year lol. I'm enjoying the romance, but I'd love to see a little more funny stuff! I really love funny stories that are actually going somewhere, and aren't stupid, OOC and completely impossible. Some of the things in this story are unbelievable, but in a good way! I think you've got the characters LIke Ron and Hermione down good, but Harry just seems... perfect! Like, he's got a temper and problems and things like that! I can tell all the girls in your story Idolise him, I can see why! Who wouldn't adore a guy that's cute, nice, perfect and famous!? Also, where's Avery? If he's not at Hogwarts, I'm gathering he's either too old and left school, something happened to him or he stayed back in Salem. I have many more questions but this reviews already too long, and I'm sure some of my questions have been or will be answered. Great writing! 10/10

Reviewer: ginny_babe92
Date: 02/21/06 0:45
Chapter: Gryffindor vs. Ravenclaw

Great! Andran fnally realised he likes Marti! I still have to say I want Marti/Clayton though. I'm not liking Zinny so much now, she's going totally nuts in her hate of Marti. Just wanted to say, I love Deanne! She's so wonderful, the sort of friend everybody wants! And you've spelt Secret wrong at least three times now. Secrete? I'd like a little more goss on the Ron/Hermione situation, but other than that! I love Clayton!

Reviewer: ginny_babe92
Date: 02/21/06 0:17
Chapter: Quidditch and Cuties

Okay, changed my mind! Now I want Zinny/Andran and Marti/Clay! He sounds so totally gorgeous! And it's obvious Zinny is in love with Andran, so there is NO other possibility! Juts because Andran and Marti are the main characters doesnt mean they have to be together! Anyway, good chappie. Can't wait for the first Ravenclaw/Gryffindor Qudditch Match!

Reviewer: ginny_babe92
Date: 02/20/06 23:48
Chapter: Man, I feel like a... Hula Dancer?

Great! It was really funny and I loved it. I still can't believe all these things are happening lol, so unlike the Hogwarts Harry knew. Great! I want Zinny/Andran! But I also want Marti/Andran! Arghh! I can't choose! Great writing :D

Reviewer: ginny_babe92
Date: 02/20/06 2:54
Chapter: Revenge and Ransoms

Woohoo! A cliffhanger! Gotta luv em :). I can't wait to see what Andran put in Marti's Violin case hehe. I love the bit about the owl! it's so clever! "It was most impolite, he knew, for any owl to screech that loud. how very rude." Fantastic! Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: ginny_babe92
Date: 02/20/06 1:44
Chapter: The Deal, the Lie, and the Kissy Song

THAT, was SO FUNNY! I loved the idea of the kissy song! Way clever! Ohhh, go Ron and Hermione! I'm rooting for Zinny and Andran now, I reckon she likes him! Great great great, anything that really makes me laugh deserves a ten!

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