Reviewer: JewellPotterFan
Date: 11/13/06 9:24
Chapter: A Sorting and Flying Shepard's Pie

oh, how rude of me! I didn't review this chapter either. what happened to me? terrific, luv the food fight.

Reviewer: solitud21
Date: 10/19/06 15:15
Chapter: The Masquerade: Part One: Dates

Finally! thanks for the update... but don't kill me from waiting

Reviewer: muziclover
Date: 10/11/06 4:20
Chapter: The Masquerade: Part One: Dates

hey this is a real good fic and all but (no offense or any thing) i am getting really tired of waiting for an update!!! so plz update sooooooon!!


Reviewer: Draco_Lovur
Date: 10/03/06 22:31
Chapter: The Masquerade: Part One: Dates


Reviewer: JewellPotterFan
Date: 09/09/06 15:14
Chapter: The Masquerade: Part One: Dates

Sorry, have to review again. I've been thinking again, I want Peeves! Maybe someone getting him mixed up with Marti, and Malfoy makes it so the other teachers can't see...I don't know, wild theory and you're probably (hopefully!) about done by now. Oh well. :-) UPDATE SOON!

Reviewer: The9ProchecyKids
Date: 09/03/06 11:24
Chapter: Appendages and Apologies

thank the ;lord the chappie has been posted it took forever!!!! Reallly good!!!

Reviewer: intr87
Date: 08/31/06 17:02
Chapter: The Masquerade: Part One: Dates

I absolutly adore your story! I stumbeled iver it while browsing this site over the summer and have never read anything quite so amusing:) I just can't wait for the chapters come fast enough! Please help a desperat fan out and make an update soon? and yes I'll still be here faithfully waiting for the next chapter;)

Reviewer: phoe_gurl
Date: 08/27/06 5:01
Chapter: The Masquerade: Part One: Dates

yeah, update update! i love this story, but i'm half forgetting the story. i guess i'll just have to read it again. oh dear ... heehee.

Reviewer: JewellPotterFan
Date: 08/24/06 13:02
Chapter: The Masquerade: Part One: Dates

LOVE IT! Thinking...theories...something to do with Peeves would be appreciated.

Reviewer: JewellPotterFan
Date: 08/24/06 13:00
Chapter: The Plan, the Paddock, and the Duel to Remember

I love the R/Hr tidbit, It's obvious it's them, so why not put a little in there?Just wondering, why don't Marti and Andren ever clean up with their wands? why do they have to transfigue sinks and stuff?

Reviewer: flyinwithdragons
Date: 08/21/06 13:22
Chapter: The Masquerade: Part One: Dates

yay! you updated! i love this chapter. The plot is now thickening. what will happen next? i love the masquerade ball idea. anything could happen at one. its brilliant i tell you! 10/10 update soon!

Reviewer: HarryPotter is my LIFE
Date: 08/10/06 22:27
Chapter: The Masquerade: Part One: Dates

No! Ack! So confusing!

Clay likes Zinny, but asked Marti. Everyone likes Marti, but she said yes to Clay. No!

Why must you capture my attention with each chapter and then take months to update! Arg! LOL

Reviewer: vv_the_author857
Date: 08/08/06 15:17
Chapter: The Masquerade: Part One: Dates

don't worry; were still here!!! aaargh! i cant wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie
Date: 08/08/06 11:47
Chapter: The Masquerade: Part One: Dates

Sheesh...You really did take your tiem with this one. Haha. It was well done though. The whole Zinny-Clay-Andran-Marti triangle (square?) is really crazy. i hope it gets resolved soon. I liked the cahpter, and had a few laughs. :-)

Reviewer: dragon_heartstring
Date: 08/08/06 7:17
Chapter: The Masquerade: Part One: Dates

I just want to see what happens at the ball... i imagine you have some lovely mishaps in store for us! Update soon(er than you did last time) XxX

Reviewer: potteronpotluvhim
Date: 08/07/06 21:05
Chapter: The Masquerade: Part One: Dates

wow i really hope u update sooner i had to re-read a couple of chapters i completly forgot whta happened so yes quicker updates would be better anyway i really like this chapter

Reviewer: FaunaCaritas
Date: 08/07/06 19:55
Chapter: The Masquerade: Part One: Dates

Yay! Yay! Yay! You updated! You're awesome!

I'm so glad your keeping up with this story, thank you. It is the best humor fic, bar none, that I've come across on this site.

I liked this chapter, but it did seem like more of a transition chapter then anything else. Don't get me wrong, that doesn't have to be a bad thing, but I hope you've got some of your outrageous humor up your sleeve for the coming dance (another way-cool food fight maybe? just kidding.) There were a few funny lines in this chapter, but it wasn't as packed with laughs as usual.

I still love your stuff, keep it coming yo! This is one faithful reader who is still going nowhere, nohow, noway. Your story ROCKS!


Reviewer: FaunaCaritas
Date: 07/16/06 17:46
Chapter: Appendages and Apologies

Oh my gosh, this was such an awesome fiction! I laughed so hard I got stitches! I was just randomly browsing the titles list (starting with Z and going to A) and this one caught my eye—very catchy, funny-right-off-the-bat kind of title, I might add— so I started reading. Wow. It was hysterically funny, no… legendarily funny, no… heck, I don’t know, but dang, it was funny! I kept getting this goofy happy grin whenever I got to the bottom of a page and saw there was still a little next button (I almost cried when I really did finish the last chapter you have posted.)

Now, to list off the reasons why I thought the fiction was so funny. 1.) You have an awesome imagination (stuff like the names Aviary and Owlery, Nina the broom packed next to the wand and getting a personality, I could keep going but I’ll just put a little ‘etc.’ and move on to #2) 2.) Your characters are super. Many humor fics don’t manage to make their characters, well, characters. You did. Everyone has a serious side, which improves the story immensely because it makes the funny parts twice as good. I love these guys so much already! Marti and Zinny are my favorites (I hope things start looking up for poor Zinny soon.) 3.) You make dear old Hogwarts feel just like it should. I admit I’m still having trouble adjusting to the trio and co being teachers; doesn’t seem to fit exactly because I never really thought about it that way. No problem though. 4.) The food fights!!! Yay! I love food fights. I’ve been in my fair share of ‘em. I’m dating a guy who doused another friend of mine in milk after she doused him in pepsi shortly after launching whipping cream at a third friend… ahhh…*floats off into a nostalgic dream* 5.) You rock because you wrote such a good story. 6.) You’re totally cool because you make me laugh till I cry. 7.)… I think I’m getting side-tracked…

Ok, now that I’ve gushed like a melting glacier I’d like to offer a little bit of CC. Since you’ve chosen to pretty much write in first person and switch between characters (which, BTW, is probably my number 8 reason why I love this fic—so original) try to avoid leaving your reader in the dark about whose thoughts we’re seeing. There is a temptation to use this tactic for effect, but it usually just annoys the reader. Ex.: during the seen where Marti is practicing her violin in the paddock it took forever to figure out who had followed her. I had finally convinced myself it was Zinny before we found out it was Andran. (I know I’m being picky…) Along the same lines, you might want to go back and look at the scene in chapter 1 when Andran shares the train compartment with Marti. There is a very confusing exchange of dialogue between them. I read it like three times but I still can’t figure out what is going on. Anyway, I love your style, but just be careful since there are so many more occasions to confuse your readers when you write in first person and switch between characters.

Sorry about the huge review. Hope it doesn’t scare you (I get the impression you’re not that type, but I thought I’d just apologize in advance just in case.) Please, please, please keep updating this story as fast as is humanly possible. No pressure… exactly. Well, maybe a tiny bit. I can’t wait to see what comes next! This story is definitely going in my favorites and I’m off now to see if you’ve written anything else. Cheers!

Pax from your friendly neighborhood animal-lover.

Reviewer: gazellia
Date: 07/10/06 15:35
Chapter: Appendages and Apologies

I love this story!!! It's the reason I still read fanfiction. It's so funny. Keep up the good work! (and please update...)

Reviewer: dragon_heartstring
Date: 06/18/06 16:18
Chapter: Appendages and Apologies

oooh pleeeeeeease update!!!!!! i can't wait much longer!!!

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