Reviewer: HPhehehe
Date: 03/23/05 8:12
Chapter: Man, I feel like a... Hula Dancer?

OMG i love ur story its so awesome! i'm totally for Andy/Zinny! keep up the great work! i love ur story!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it!!! Thanks for the review! A/M:2 A/Z:2 EVEN MONEY!!!

Reviewer: Lobuskie Shnuckles
Date: 03/21/05 18:15
Chapter: Man, I feel like a... Hula Dancer?

oooops! i mean every1 is for Andy/Marti!

Reviewer: Lobuskie Shnuckles
Date: 03/21/05 18:14
Chapter: Man, I feel like a... Hula Dancer?

Gosh i'm losing everyone is for Andy/Zinny waaaaaaaaaaaaa i'm soooooooooooooo alone but my word of advice DO WHAT YOU WANT TO DO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 put whoever you think goes together better together! ~wink wink nudge nudge~

Author's Response: Don't worry, Lobuskie! It's pretty much even money for the moment... only 2 to 1... and I still have to introduce a few more characters before this tally becomes even remotely official. Well... you can always tell others to read and review...*hint, cough, hint* that way, we'll have more input on it.... I am so shameless. =)

Reviewer: Carolinaluna13
Date: 03/21/05 8:15
Chapter: Man, I feel like a... Hula Dancer?

that was funny, but poor marti

Author's Response: I'm so bad, I love to embarrass my characters. hee-hee.

Reviewer: Carolinaluna13
Date: 03/21/05 8:15
Chapter: Man, I feel like a... Hula Dancer?

that was funny, but poor marti

Reviewer: Lobuskie Shnuckles
Date: 03/20/05 17:22
Chapter: Man, I feel like a... Hula Dancer?

I'm with Andy/Zinny- 4got to put in my review

Author's Response: A/M:2 A/Z:1

Reviewer: Lobuskie Shnuckles
Date: 03/20/05 17:21
Chapter: Man, I feel like a... Hula Dancer?

Hey awesome Chapter lol i've been singing that song alllll day now..Anyways keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Isn't that song the best? I have to dance to it, whenever I hear it!

Reviewer: Ella Norman
Date: 03/19/05 16:16
Chapter: Man, I feel like a... Hula Dancer?

Oh, my goodness. Your OCs are flawless. Not only is Marti quirky and hilarious, but she's also spazzy and impulsive. She's one with whom I can really identify, and that's a really great quality in an OC. Andran and Owlery all the way! Yeeee! Oh, they make me so excited. I would so make somebody do something like that ... *devilish laugh* Good shot, great job!

Author's Response: Yeah, I love Marti's spazzy-ness. A/M:2

Reviewer: caren_the_hpfan
Date: 03/19/05 15:18
Chapter: Man, I feel like a... Hula Dancer?

Good job! Here's my favorite ship: Andran/Marti! Please put them together, that would be so cool. Also, I liked the way you put "Listener" for Audierus' name, that was clever! Even I didn't catch that, even though I obviously know who had sent the letter. Also, the scene with Bailey and Marti was very well described. "DEMON SPAWN!" I love Marti, she is so funny and real.

Author's Response: Hee hee, I'm glad you like Marti. She's my favorite to write. I enjoy making her somewhat excentric, I don't know why. Alright, Let's begin the offical tally" A/M:1

Reviewer: hpmaniac666
Date: 03/18/05 12:50
Chapter: Man, I feel like a... Hula Dancer?

Wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh!!!!!! How much do I love this story????? Oh that was well funny! Heehee....MAN i FEEL LIKE A WOMAN!!!! BA BA BA BA BA BA!! let's go girls!!!!! Tee hhe, I'll shut up. seriously I LOVE This I think it would make such a funny film. teeee heeee. Am I a loyal reader???????????? Hope so!!!!!!!! LOVES!! Chaz (First review?)

Author's Response: You are most definitely a loyal reader! And the first to review! I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: i_luv_padfoot
Date: 03/16/05 6:01
Chapter: Revenge and Ransoms



Reviewer: scribbler
Date: 03/13/05 19:53
Chapter: Revenge and Ransoms

lol... very nice

Author's Response: Thanks!!

Reviewer: magic_pen
Date: 03/12/05 21:14
Chapter: Revenge and Ransoms

OH MY GOD THIS ROCKS!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't even begin to tell you how much this rocks. geeze, are you a liturature genius or what!!!!!!!! Hurry up with the next chapter, so that i can find out what the note said. once again, THIS TOTALY ROCKS!!!!!! A nice big *10* for you.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm working on the next chapter, and working on getting the mods to accept it! lol!

Reviewer: elderbreath
Date: 03/08/05 6:48
Chapter: Revenge and Ransoms

arrrghh i cant blieve you left things there!! Seriously though i love the ideas in this, malfoy as a snape like teacher, H,H & R as teachers but not overdone characters. I find the POV changes a bit confusing though even with all the asterisks seperating, you need to try and early on in the para with the POV change say something which also establishses it. But this is cool

Author's Response: I'm sorry, I hate cliff hangers too! But, the idea of where the next chapter takes off was too funny for me to resist! And thanks... I'll try to be more clear on the pov breaks.

Reviewer: caren_the_hpfan
Date: 03/07/05 20:15
Chapter: Revenge and Ransoms

Hey Miss Bowers, excellent job! True, it was a while before it got posted, but worth it. Ersatz... doesn't that mean fake? Ah well, keep writing!

Author's Response: Yes, ersatz means fake... I just happen to be obsessed with the Snicket books, and I needed a word that started with 'e'... Oh, no! my great secrete is out! I just look for words!! AAAHHHH!!! Oh, and thanks! I'm glad you like it

Author's Response: Oh, and I just thought of this: the charm on the door doesn't reflect accuracy in what it echos, therefore it's a fake echo... okay so some things only make sense in MY head...

Reviewer: Ella Norman
Date: 03/07/05 15:31
Chapter: Revenge and Ransoms

Ah, Ron and Hermione ... oh, even in an older generation, I love them to do death! Anyway, I'm very glad you've updated ... yay, I can see it coming to a close, with Marti and Andran. Mua ha ha ... things are starting to heat up ... YES!!! Excellent chappie.

Author's Response: Yay! I was hoping you'd review it! (you're my best reviewer!) I love Ron and Hermione, I really do. Though, I do have some evil plans for later... oops, did I say that? heh, heh....

Reviewer: hpmaniac666
Date: 03/07/05 15:20
Chapter: Revenge and Ransoms

HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE Lovin' it! Have to go do ma homework! Update soon! Read n review ma fics! LOVES!! MOOSE xx

Author's Response: So glad you like it as much as I do!

Reviewer: Hermione1215
Date: 03/07/05 13:05
Chapter: Revenge and Ransoms

Wow! Lots of secrets! Are Ron and Hermione in love? I want to know!!! Keep it coming! Great job!!!

Author's Response: Good question. Are they? Well... you have to wait and see.

Reviewer: Lobuskie Shnuckles
Date: 03/03/05 15:42
Chapter: Gryffindor, Insults, & Bertie Bott's: What a Beginning

OMG! i luv ur story! i no u have a life but still when r u gonna make the next chapter i'm dying here! i wanna see wut Andy does to Marti! and i think that Zinny and Andy (srry i can't spell his real name) should get together instead of him and Marti NO OFFENSE! but still i really like ur story can't wait to read the next chapter!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! The next chapter is submitted, and should be up soon. You know, I never said that Marti and Andran would hook up... I think you'll like the next few chapters... but I'm debating on if/when/who will hook up. It's a big deal, I think. And no offense taken... I love criticism and ideas! Always!

Reviewer: skittlz4life
Date: 02/23/05 22:11
Chapter: The Deal, the Lie, and the Kissy Song

I have that song stuck in my head... I love your ideas! Why is Marti so evil? I love it! But I feel bad for the other guy... Andran? I can never get his name right... I can't wait for your next update! Please do it sOoOon! *10*

Author's Response: Nah, Marti isn't evil (Bailey is the evil one) she just likes to prank alot... and yes, it's Andran. Andy for short. Next update coming soon!!!

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