Reviewer: Lobuskie Shnuckles
Date: 06/19/05 22:14
Chapter: Wake-Ups and Wonders!

awwwwwww awesome chapter. i feel bad for zinny can't wait for u 2 update!!! 10/10 plus i'm sitll zinny/andy marti/clay

Author's Response: I absolutely love Zinny... I've been in her shoes... Updates are on the way, I promise! Don't give up on me! a/m:20, a/z:10, z/c:6, m/c:9, a/mc:1

Reviewer: rgfawkes
Date: 06/18/05 11:56
Chapter: Wake-Ups and Wonders!

Oh this was such a good chapter! The only thing I didn't like was the fact that everyone liked someone who liked someone else. It is like one big love square or something. And just in case you can still vote I vote Andran/Marti and Clayton/Zinny.

Author's Response: Well, the polls are still open for the moment, though as soon as I reply to all these reviews, they'll be closing... just because, hey, life has to go on, right? Don't worry, the love-square will be clearing up soon - it's bothering me too... funny, and I am the author! HA! a/m:20, a/z:9, z/c:6, m/c:8, a/mc:1

Reviewer: padfoot36212
Date: 06/18/05 8:01
Chapter: Wake-Ups and Wonders!

Oh, this is SO good. Please update soon!

Author's Response: And I SO will!

Reviewer: miss padfoot
Date: 06/18/05 2:20
Chapter: Wake-Ups and Wonders!

Wow! First to review! You've got a great story but seems like you're concentrating on romance than humour. Hope the next chapter is posted soon, with lots of humour!

Author's Response: Ah, yes, the plot does seem to get in the way. Don't worry, I've got loads of funny stuff coming up - all the plot does is make it so it's not a nonsensical (my own word there, hee hee) comedy. It has to have a point, at least if I'm going to write it. Next chappie comming soon!

Reviewer: NutMeag
Date: 06/16/05 11:21
Chapter: Gryffindor vs. Ravenclaw

I'm loving the story so far. It's great having a story in the same world, but having different characters (although I love the back story of Hermione and Ron--you should add to that one). As for for ships . . . I'm torn. Andy is a funny guy, but the love-hate relationship between him and Marti may be just a bit too cliche-ish (their fights are hilarious, though). I'd have to go with Marti and Clay. I'm glad you finally put him into the story. He seems like a great character and good for Marti. I don't know that I'd want an Andy/Zinny 'ship either. Once again, a bit too expected. But hey, I'm just a fascinated and involved reader, not the author! I can't wait to read more. Good luck in writing.

Author's Response: Excellent Review! I love long reviews... though, hey, I don't complain about short ones, either. Thanks for the input... a/m:19, a/z:9, z/c:5, m/c:8, a/mc:1

Reviewer: Splatteh
Date: 06/12/05 5:38
Chapter: Gryffindor, Insults, & Bertie Bott's: What a Beginning

It was really good!! In the last VERY mean (for the readers) cliffhanger, was that Zinny's point of view? I was just a bit unsure.

Author's Response: Yeah, that was Zinny. I thought I'd spice it up a bit, and let everyone in on what she was thinking. But, don't worry about Zinny. I am not one for an unhappy ending... though the ending is a long way off yet.

Reviewer: Splatteh
Date: 06/11/05 2:33
Chapter: Gryffindor, Insults, & Bertie Bott's: What a Beginning

I really loved it!! I think: Andran/Zinny (Hey, that song gave it away!) Martie/Clay

Author's Response: I'm glad you loved it! I love it when people say they love it.... yup, a lotta love going around... a/m:19, a/z:9, z/c:5, m/c:7, a/mc:1

Reviewer: Lobuskie Shnuckles
Date: 06/07/05 18:36
Chapter: Gryffindor vs. Ravenclaw

Hey update soon! i'm checking almost everyday! lol i no helpless o well update soon please!

Author's Response: As you wish! The update has (finally!!!) been submitted!!! Man, I am so sorry it took so long! That was long, even for me!

Reviewer: madford222
Date: 06/07/05 15:26
Chapter: Gryffindor vs. Ravenclaw

I love this story, I was bored, and I turned on the internet, decided to pick a fanfiction to occupy my mind, and you had me hooked right away! PLEASE update soon, and I want Marti and Andy together!!!!! I give you ten stars!

Author's Response: That is awesome!!! Thank you so much!!!

Author's Response: a/m:19, a/z:8, z/c:5, m/c:6, a/mc:1

Reviewer: CookieMonster1331
Date: 06/06/05 18:44
Chapter: Gryffindor vs. Ravenclaw

This is an excellent story! Im really enjoying it and cant wait until you update.. And I also love the fact that Marti is trying to be 'normal' for once! And as far as ships go, Id say A/M..All is fair in love and war, right?

Author's Response: Right you are! a/m:18, a/z:8, z/c:5, m/c:6, a/mc:1

Reviewer: Ella Norman
Date: 06/01/05 17:17
Chapter: Gryffindor vs. Ravenclaw


Author's Response: Okay, okay! I was stuck on how to connect where I had ended the last chapter to the next idea I have, but I finally pushed through it, and it's been submitted! Yay! At last! Now, on to the next chapter.... *grins evilly*

Reviewer: ilovehp
Date: 05/21/05 10:03
Chapter: Gryffindor vs. Ravenclaw

hey! i love your story! its so cute and it's like a break from hp but in the same world! ok, my favorite ships are a/z and m/c cuz zinny and andy r cute and so r marti and clay! hurry up and update! its been amonth!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm hurrying.... Now, our polls stand at: a/m:17, a/z:8, z/c:5, m/c:6, a/mc:1

Reviewer: magic_pen
Date: 05/13/05 21:52
Chapter: Gryffindor vs. Ravenclaw

Oh, my gosh!!!!! THis totaly rules, I an loving this soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo.................. much it's unbeleivable!!!! hurry up with the next chapter please. *10*

Reviewer: falling_leaves
Date: 05/08/05 17:11
Chapter: Gryffindor vs. Ravenclaw

I love you story. (sigh) you're thinking up a great plot. Even better than I thought up. (though that doesnt say much cause I'm really not very good with ideas) But this is sooo awsome. please write more... and soon!

Author's Response: I am so working on it, and don't worry - even if I leave it for awhile, I will finish out the school year! In the fic, I mean...

Reviewer: Lobuskie Shnuckles
Date: 04/30/05 19:14
Chapter: Gryffindor vs. Ravenclaw

wow o-m-g it worked i no i no 2nd time reviewing but i must say i thought *it hurt my brain* anywho i'm gonna go cry with zinny because me and her are gonna be depressed about this whole andy/marti thing. so i can't wait for this whole fate thingy! but please update! i can't wait i love this story!

Author's Response: Ah, don't worry Shnuckles, fate has a way of making things right. Thanks for being such a faithful reviewer!!!!

Reviewer: Ella Norman
Date: 04/30/05 14:29
Chapter: Gryffindor vs. Ravenclaw

Ah, I see it now. I'm not voting anymore, I really like the direction this story seems to be going. There was something so tender about the way that Andran held her, but I do feel bad for Zinny. Only in books and stories are love triangle-squares good things, and you've made it work splendidly. Do exactly what you're doing. I love this story. :)

Author's Response: :D I'm so happy that that scene turned out well! Don't worry, I'm not very fond of love triangles... I'm working that out, though I'm having issues... eh, nevermind. Anyway, thanks for the awesome review!!!

Reviewer: skittlz4life
Date: 04/30/05 11:53
Chapter: Gryffindor vs. Ravenclaw

Another great chapter! But I really hope this story won't be a love triangle thingy e__e I thik you already know my views on ships: A/M, C/Z. Your point of veiw changes are interesting, too. But what Zinny did in Herbology? That was kind od cruel, even though it was probably crucial to the plot. You were right when you said Zinny had a sick sense of humor. But I would've made Andy and Zinny give each other the cold shoulder a little bit longer. Am I right in guessing that Zinny and Marti will have more clashes later on? But that last part in Zinny's veiw was a very smart wy to clue slower people *coughcough* in on what was happening between Andy and Marti ^_^ 10!

Author's Response: never a fan of unhappy endings.... and, yes, you can bet that Marti and Zinny will clash after what has happened! a/m:17, a/z:7, z/c:5, m/c:5, a/mc:1

Reviewer: hpmaniac666
Date: 04/30/05 6:06
Chapter: Gryffindor vs. Ravenclaw

A/M Z/C !!!!!!!! I love this story it's well good!!! Awwwwww so cute! I really loved this chapter I didn't want it to end A/M all the way! ALL THE WAY!! (This isn't a very coherent reivew but I am ill so :P. READ MY FIC)

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the story!!! a/m:16, a/z:7, z/c:4, m/c:5, a/mc:1

Reviewer: Lobuskie Shnuckles
Date: 04/29/05 16:35
Chapter: Gryffindor vs. Ravenclaw

PLEASE!!!!! I no Zinny likes andy and i no it so don't tell me she doesn't! i was so happy i danced! lmao ok ADD anyways back to the whole please thing i need andy/zinny to hook up!!!1 i hate you all if u like mari/andy! boooooooo! add kicking in again soooooo please and i think marti/clay should soo get together!!!!!!!!!!!! waaa please pwease!

Author's Response: Ah, yes, Zinny likes Andy... but who can say what fate has instore? We shall see... a/m:15, a/z:7, z/c:3, m/c:5, a/mc:1

Reviewer: rgfawkes
Date: 04/28/05 16:11
Chapter: Gryffindor vs. Ravenclaw

this chpt was awesome! please let zinny be with clay! i love the andran/marti in this chpt! please update soon!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it!! Thanks for the review, and for the vote!!! a/m:15, a/z:6, z/c:3, m/c:4, a/mc:1

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