Reviewer: Wildklymr
Date: 05/11/05 23:01
Chapter: Making Amends

Wow! Just wow! I absolutely loved that story; it seemed so real. I haven't read any of the sequel to this, but I will. I noticed you havent updated it in a long time and it's not finished, please finish it...

Author's Response: Yeah, I haven't updated because they won't approve the next chapter...I've tried to tell all my readers to e-mail me or visit my homepage, to read the entire story. You can also find it at i'm so glad you enjoyed it!!!

Reviewer: Aimless Hexes
Date: 12/03/04 9:38
Chapter: A Clean Slate

Wonderful story - look forward to reading the rest. ~_~

Reviewer: thestral horse
Date: 11/29/04 18:10
Chapter: Making Amends

wait aminute that was the end (tear) wow i feel really oblivious right now. oh i'm so sad. I'm going to read the year 6 one.

Author's Response: lol! it's ok, it's been approved by a moderator, so check it out!

Reviewer: Sad4Sirius
Date: 11/28/04 14:08
Chapter: Making Amends

o is their any more? if do please update soon!

Author's Response: yes of course!! the next part of the story is throughout time, year 6, and it's called 'The Price of Responsibility''s been submitted, just waiting for it to be accepted!

Reviewer: thestral horse
Date: 11/27/04 13:40
Chapter: Making Amends

yeah, they made up i'm sooooooo happy!!!!!!!!!!! can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: thestral horse
Date: 11/27/04 13:32
Chapter: Making Amends

ok this is just so i can get to this chapter

Reviewer: Sad4Sirius
Date: 11/27/04 13:08
Chapter: New Interests

wait it says that it is completed, but we dont get to find out what happend.... can you please add more because i want to know!

Author's Response: it is completed, the last chapter of this part is chapter 16, i don't know why they haven't linked it yet..... hopefully it'll be up soon!

Reviewer: Sad4Sirius
Date: 11/27/04 0:31
Chapter: New Interests

i like it alot so please update soon!

Reviewer: thestral horse
Date: 11/26/04 16:45
Chapter: Flirtations

cool chapter. colin sounds hot!!!!!!!!!!!!! can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: Sad4Sirius
Date: 11/26/04 0:22
Chapter: Quidditch Cup

ooh this is a really good story so pleas update soon. k

Reviewer: Sad4Sirius
Date: 11/25/04 23:29
Chapter: Keeping Secrets

ok smakk corection.. James was a seeker not a chaser,, other than that good so far

Author's Response: actually, James WAS a chaser, not a seeker...they messed up in the movie, but JKR has stated that James was in fact a chaser.... but i'm glad you like the ficcy!

Reviewer: thestral horse
Date: 11/24/04 10:00
Chapter: Quidditch Cup

I can't believe they lost the cup!!!!!! oh well, can't wait for the next chapter

Author's Response: yeah, well if Sirius wasn't being such a dolt, they might have won it!! just kidding! next chapter is on it's way, just waiting for the moderators to approve it!

Reviewer: thestral horse
Date: 11/22/04 21:24
Chapter: Commitments Remembered

good chapter!!!!! can't wait till they get back together :-) they are getting back together right?????? update soon please!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: i'll update just as fast as the moderators approve the chapters! and as for them getting back together, you'll have to wait and see!

Reviewer: LisaK
Date: 11/21/04 23:41
Chapter: Nightmares

Awesome!...Please write more soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! Like i said, i've already got tons written, this is just the beginning! I'm just trying to get it all on this site! If anyone has any questions, don't hesitate to e-mail me, and i'd be happy to answer them!

Reviewer: Ravyn Shardae
Date: 11/21/04 18:05
Chapter: A Clean Slate

This is one of the best fanfictions I have ever read. I am totally addicted! Please keep writing!!!

Author's Response: wow, thank you so much! i really appreciate that! and don't worry, i've got lots already written, and there's no end in sight!

Reviewer: mel
Date: 11/21/04 9:19
Chapter: Broken Heart

hey its really good!! cant wait for the next update! keep up the good work! :)

Author's Response: thanks for the review, hope you enjoy reading it!!

Reviewer: thestral horse
Date: 11/20/04 20:55
Chapter: Broken Heart

ohhhh!!!!!! now i want even more desperate to know what wrong with neolle (lol). thanks for updating quickly :-), can't wait for the next chapter

Author's Response: lol.....i get that alot.....everyone wants to know what's wrong with her...i'll let you in on a secret...i was well into the next part of this story, year 6, when i finally figured it out, and it's my ficcy!

Reviewer: thestral horse
Date: 11/19/04 21:11
Chapter: Mistakes

oh what did noelle do that for? can't wait for the next chapter to find out

Author's Response: You'll see! It may not be totally explained in chapter 9, but chapter 10 will give you a much better idea of why Noelle is the way she is....and the burdens she must bear.

Reviewer: Sara
Date: 11/17/04 13:36
Chapter: Wishes

Ahhhhhh! WHAT HAPPENS!!!!!

Author's Response: Read on to find out!!! glad you liked the cliffy, lol!

Reviewer: Lovely Fatima
Date: 11/15/04 21:06
Chapter: A Clean Slate

I'm enjoying this greatly! I especially liked Sirius' tumble over the couch. Classic drunk boy move! I look forward to seeing more of this story. If you'd like to read my fic about Sirius, I'd welcome any comments.

Author's Response: Thanks alot! i actually watched my boyfriend do that one night, so i had to work it in! I'll definitely check out your ficcy!

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