haha thats so awesome! a huge house!!
that tree was so cool!!! and its also really cool that harry's related to godric gryffindor!!
that is so cool! and i bet something really interesting is in that rock, er, uh, cave.
lol! that was so funny! Tolks was very in charactor and her making herself look like vernon was so funny!
i wonder what was in vernon's letter? cuz its very strange that he doesnt want harry to leave.
OoOOOooo!! a letter!! i wonder whats in it!!
aw! poor harry! but at least he's going to do something.
lol i dont really like physical fighting, but that was awesome! dudley arrived at the perfect time.
draco?! ohmygosh! in private drive? and u said this story has some romance? does it involve harry/ginny and ron/hermione?
I wouldn't be so sure that you couldn't do a better job than JK Rowling. I found your story exceiting and engaing. Very visual and colorful. The characters are interesting and filled out very nicely. I am a Snape fan so felt his absence very much. Other than that small detail I congratulate you on a very fine story. It was a nice lonf week spent reading it. I enjoy long stories.
*sniffing* I wish if I could make a family tree like that.
But I don't know 5% of my family so...
I really love the family tree
It brings a sense of ....
well idk but I love the idea of it
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the inscription is "i show not your face but your heart's desire". you got it wrong.
I Think that was one of the best FanFics I have read so far. I really got stuck into it, it was definatly worthy of a J.K plotline. I just could not stop reading it, i got told off for staying up so late one night because i wouldn't turn off my laptop. thankyou for giving me some enjoyable reading, I think you, just when i am feeling upset that there are no more books I read smoething like that and it Makes me feel alot better. there is someone else who wants more and I have a chance to read more.
I do hope you continue writing more stories because you are a very acomplished writer.
That was awesome!!!!
Yeah, and it's too bad Hogwarts is divided, isn't it? thanks for the update!
Awww! Poor Harry!
ooooooo! Snap! You did that on purpose!
Darnell Clearwater? Um, you said, "He was just about to point them out to Ron when the last first year, Darnell Clearwater, was sorted into Slytherin" about half way down through this chapter, but if it's going in alphabetical order, either there are very few people this year, or there's a mistake here. Other than that though, I enjoyed this chapter! As did every other one.
Ha ha! Nice Birthday ideas: I loved 'em!
You know, I don't think anyone understands Vernon Dursley....much less me...