Reviewer: semisco
Date: 01/28/07 2:50
Chapter: The Vault of Hogwarts

Nice cliffhanger

Reviewer: semisco
Date: 01/28/07 2:10
Chapter: The Welcome Feast

Again very well written I like it a lot

Reviewer: semisco
Date: 01/28/07 1:44
Chapter: The Closing of Gringotts

Very well written and I am ready for more.

Reviewer: Ginny Guerra
Date: 01/27/07 22:51
Chapter: The Unexpected Development

Uffff! Finally I got to the last available chapter. You've kept me from homework for days!
It's a nice story. I good turn on the theory of the Half blood prince. I guess you started the tale just after the title came out, didn't you (I wasn't a fan then, so I'm lost with some dates).
Love your story. Other than a couple misspellings (stupefy is the right spelling), I think it's a great one. Please update soon and give us alittle more Ginny-Harry, will you?

Author's Response: Well, I'm glad I've contributed to someone not doing homework. I did start the story back when all we had was a title and a few hints from Jo. I tried to come up with what I thought (or wanted) to happen in the real book 6. Turns out I was completely wrong. Oh well. As for Ginny and Harry...you came at the right time.

Reviewer: gredandfordge4eva
Date: 01/20/07 13:01
Chapter: The Unexpected Development

another great chapter. what pray tell, was unexpected and how many chapters to go. mendel.

Author's Response: Hi Mendel. Actually Crazyhpgirl was the winner. Once the current chappy is approved, we have 9 chaps to go. If this was an actual Rowling book, we are just about to the catharsis where everything takes off.

Reviewer: insanitea
Date: 01/17/07 19:17
Chapter: Romance and Ravenclaws

return of the slugs! :-)

Author's Response: Eh?

Reviewer: insanitea
Date: 01/17/07 18:38
Chapter: Grishelda Grendelhall

hmm.. damien abernathy related to dinbell abernathy and/or damien quilpe? eh, im sure this question will be answered eventually..

Reviewer: Reader24
Date: 01/17/07 18:30
Chapter: The Unexpected Development

This is like the first review i've ever written :P What would be cool would be that the Secret Cave, is non other than the one that Sirius hides in when the Trio go to meet him in Hogsmeade

Author's Response: That would be cool, wouldn't it?

Reviewer: MankyOldBoot
Date: 01/17/07 17:08
Chapter: The Tower Room

I know why they can't get the book - they're using the wrong incantation - it was a different one...

Reviewer: VB StaR 08
Date: 01/17/07 16:57
Chapter: The Unexpected Development

OMG once again AMAZING !!!! you should feel honored bc this is the first non-romance story that i have fallen in love with !!! can't wait for the next chapter ! xoxo

Reviewer: insanitea
Date: 01/17/07 12:33
Chapter: Bloodlines and Ancestors

your description of the cave/tree is quite vivid... and of course i've enjoyed the rest of the story as well.. just wanted to let you know that your readers appreciate the details you include.

Reviewer: Ginny5282
Date: 01/17/07 7:32
Chapter: The Unexpected Development

I reckon the unexpected development is that Dumbledore seems to be sharing all the information with everyone. He was so particular about making sure that Harry could do occlemency to make sure no one else found out about the diary and the vault and now he's taking McGonagall, Grisdela and the librarian down to find the last one! Bit suspect if you ask me....

Keep 'em coming

Reviewer: Ginny5282
Date: 01/17/07 7:31
Chapter: The Unexpected Development

I reckon the unexpected development is that Dumbledore seems to be sharing all the information with everyone. He was so particular about making sure that Harry could do occlemency to make sure no one else found out about the diary and the vault and now he's taking McGonagall, Grisdela and the librarian down to find the last one! Bit suspect if you ask me....

Keep 'em coming

Reviewer: CootiePatootie
Date: 01/16/07 23:44
Chapter: The Unexpected Development

So...is the unexpected development Harry's reaction to Ginny's subterfuge with Michael & Cho? I wouldn't mind - your Ginny is a good match for our Harrykins. :-)

Do you know how cool this story is????? Well, I hope you do because you ARE writing it, after all...

Anyway, I look forward to ch. next (forgot what number we're on; doesn't matter so much to me as long as I get the next one, and the next one, and the next one...)

Oh, and I think I've decided what my favorite part of this story is - even though I am really enjoying all of the twists and turns of the plot, my favorite part is the secret places of Hogwarts. I mean, come on, it's a 1000+ year old MAGIC castle. It's got to have secret places!! But you really don't see them too much, in canon or in fanon. So your secret places are fun. Like a treasure map that leads to literal lost treasure - Rowena's diaries. Like I said before, SO COOL.

Cheers,

CP

Reviewer: CootiePatootie
Date: 01/16/07 23:44
Chapter: The Unexpected Development

So...is the unexpected development Harry's reaction to Ginny's subterfuge with Michael & Cho? I wouldn't mind - your Ginny is a good match for our Harrykins. :-)

Do you know how cool this story is????? Well, I hope you do because you ARE writing it, after all...

Anyway, I look forward to ch. next (forgot what number we're on; doesn't matter so much to me as long as I get the next one, and the next one, and the next one...)

Oh, and I think I've decided what my favorite part of this story is - even though I am really enjoying all of the twists and turns of the plot, my favorite part is the secret places of Hogwarts. I mean, come on, it's a 1000+ year old MAGIC castle. It's got to have secret places!! But you really don't see them too much, in canon or in fanon. So your secret places are fun. Like a treasure map that leads to literal lost treasure - Rowena's diaries. Like I said before, SO COOL.

Cheers,

CP

Reviewer: crazyhpgirl
Date: 01/16/07 21:32
Chapter: The Unexpected Development

Hmm. Could the Unexpected Development be that bit about Ginny grabbing Harry's hand?

Author's Response: It's actually how Harry reacts to Ginny grabbing his hand, but you're close enough. Congrats, you're the big winner! Your prize is...uh...this link to my favorite Strong Bad e-mail: http://homestarrunner.com/sbemail78.html Are people in the UK into homestarrunner.com I wonder?

Author's Response: That last question was actually directed to any UK readers, not you.

Reviewer: Obsessive
Date: 01/16/07 17:12
Chapter: The Unexpected Development

Cool. Thanks for the quick update! The story seems to be going nicely, well done on the good writing!

Reviewer: gredandfordge4eva
Date: 01/15/07 8:42
Chapter: The Third Diary of Rowena Ravenclaw

brilliant once again. i like the last sentence from the diary. it really seems to fitinto rowenas charachter. 10/10. mendel.

Reviewer: Ginny5282
Date: 01/15/07 6:15
Chapter: The Third Diary of Rowena Ravenclaw

Riverting as usual! I wonder what the fourth diary if about and where it is hidden. Maybe that one has been moved too. I'm guessing it will talk about Wulfric's birth etc and finally explain how he can still be alive. Keep going!

Reviewer: Blackfoot
Date: 01/14/07 21:27
Chapter: The Third Diary of Rowena Ravenclaw

Ah, It was well worth the wait! The little things like the elves and house elves and centuars give it a nice touch too.

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