i love the trick that ginny played
it was hilariuos to read and had a great ending
cant wait to next chapter
I think this was excellent. I thought it was quite typical of Ginny who is not afraid to push Harry when it is necessary. Keep them coming.
Lol, Harry's predicament was hilarious, and how he thought of actually sliding down the pole to freedom was quite typical of his stubborness.
I disagree with the previous reviewer, I thought it was a perfect Ginny behaviour, aggressive and stubborn. I didn't see an update for a while and was worried that you abandoned the story, glad you didn't, it's one of my fav.
Not the writing, it's written very well. So well that I'm reading it despite my dislike a bitchy, overbearing Ginny Weasely. Ginny in general, actually.
But if somebody pulled something like that on me, that would be it. I would have stayed up there and froze and made certain that little tart got what was coming to her when she went in with my wand and broom with me no where around. What a little b!tch.
What's the betting Ron saw Hermione in the Mirror of Erised? LOL
Good chapter 9.5/10
If I didn't know better I'd say JK Rowling wrote this THATS HOW GOOD IT IS!!!
Its interesting how you only show Rowena Ravenclaws perspective
OMG!!!!! dis fic is the best eva!!!!!!!!! amazin! unbelevable!!! pure genius!!
This is a great story. I just sat down and read all the chapters. I love the idea of the diary reading itself, essentially bringing the reader into another world where the reader can only see what the narrator wants to show--I guess it's a bit how I experience reading a regular book, except the "magic" is all in my mind. ;-) I like how you used the idea of Harry's parselmouth ability being the key to opening a mystery that had been hidden to the headmasters for centuries. Am curious, though, if Voldemort knew to send his deatheaters that that particular tomb, how he was tipped off. I'm suspecting that one of the old headmaster's portraits is slipping off to another frame somewhere and letting Voldemort know what is going on. After all, they were the only ones who knew exactly where Harry was going. Anyway, just wanted to say that I'm finding this a great read and have added you to my faves. Hope to see an update soon!
Please submit the next chapters soon. I'm going mad!
Author's Response: You got it.
hi i was wondering if you got my contact message asking you to mail me the not yet submitted chapters? my email address is email@example.com. please mail the chapters if you have the time. also the whole story was great! i really enjoyed it. i couldn't put it down. good work!
hmmmm this version is a bit better. I liked the shorter descriptions of Ginny. Still a bit overdone, but it can't be helped. You're trying to establish sincerity, just don't over lavish it. one thing more though...I realize that this chapter is to bring some warm fuzzies with Harry & Ginny, but it would've done well to slowly re-arc this to the original storyline. It's ok to have the romantic part of this story..just don't lose the reader on a tangent. A good revision. I truly wish that the next chapter meshes well with this one, but moves the plot along a bit. So far this story is my favorite among all the fan fics I read. Maybe if it could be worked, that you can bring the relationship of Ginny & Harry to the forefront of the plot...that might make a nice story, not to mention galvinzing the theme that we've all come to know so well already.
This is one of my favorite stories. Keep them coming. And if you could, would you e-mail me the new chapters at firstname.lastname@example.org?
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P.S. I love this story. I have it on my favorites!
anyone else notice harry is turnign into a much bigger git than snape? geez, he's disgusted with his own friend!! you obviously have to encourage guys, i mean sometimes we guys can get things complicated. oh well 10/10
have u completed the nxt chappy?????
if yes plz mail it to email@example.com
very nice. cruel. tnx 4 the update. mendel.
The story in itself has some good point, as in the "what if H/G didn't hook up in HBP". However, I found the story dragged a bit in the whole harry fancying Ginny. Didn't even get to see Ron or see what kind of actions he would imbue on Harry. The chapter started out allright, but it just seemed like a run-on after that. I understand that some material you have to build up history, but this one was a bit too much. Hope the next chapter is brilliant though.
Loving this chapter. Keep up the good writing,
awwww harry loves ginny & i love this story!