I donít know how you did it, but that was a very well written battle. I am impressed. The command center and the students protecting the barrier, was something I would expect Dumbledore to do. Keep the students as close to him and as far from the thick of things as possible.
I liked that you gave the chimaeras wings. That was really good, as if they werenít scary enough. Having the goblins show up on the dragons was amazing.
Having it be a two-pronged attack was a surprise, and I was happy to see Harry staying behind. Everyone knew he wasnít ready and that he needed to think before he acted. When Voldemort saw where he was and chased him, I thought Harry would be dying in this great fic, but you had him possess Voldemort and then to feel pity for him? If there is one thing more than love that he canít understand itís pity. Great job.
The last line, about the magical reversal team was just too funny, and I canít wait to read the next one when you get to post it.
wow! I wonder what Memory Harry saw?? Good Job! One more chapter!!
Wow, you know how to write battle...I juts read the 7th book, and I have to say, your battle almost makes me hesitate, weather your's or JK's was better... Amazing, really amazing...
Wow this was one of the best chapter's i have read to date continue the good work Friend.
hey man, u rock! Rowling is only a little bit better! the story was great, i can't wait for the next chapter! do update it soon!
oh my god!! this is soooooooo good!!! i love it!!!
This is an awesome story! I love your plot line! Update soon!
"WOW"...my single word should suffice, to tell you what think....
nooooooooooo i cant wait i got to know waht happens, please update soon
Everyone was caught off guard with the assault, but I guess we should never underestimate Albus Dumbledore. He always seems to know when he needs a back up plan. Wanting to see the ritual in the pensieve later was really funny. I hope they paid close enough attention.
The ritual in the circle was really good, and I could clearly picture it in my mind. It made me wish there would be a movie of it coming out tomorrow so I could see it acted out. The centaurs and the goblins have the knowledge of the vows made in their blood but that doesnít mean they have to like it. Bane would never stand alongside humans and fight. Magorian is a bit more level headed and can see reason. The goblin, Dronok, seemed to want to be anywhere else but in that circle. He knows he canít turn away from the vow, but he hates standing with the humans and fighting with them.
Well Bane definitely did what I expected him to do. He shouldíve known that a vow like that couldnít be broken without paying with his life. Of course he probably wouldíve rather died than ally himself with a human. Even if the human was Wulfric Gryffindor. Iím glad the elves will be freed and I am sure Hermione will be over the moon about it.
Nice to see the students in the D.A. wanting to fight and not backing down when told what was going on. They knew the time would come and what they would be walking into. The whole point of the D.A. was to learn to fight Voldemort and the Death Eaters.
The answer to Remusí question was a good one. Fighting for revenge is never the right thing. Fighting for the future and what you want that future to be is better. Knowing that he can have a better future with all of his loved ones is what Harry will fight for. And what will help him win.
The giants are too magical for spells to make any impact. Remusí spell that had the giant sinking and getting stuck in the pavement was hilarious. I canít believe the Obliviators are worried about the muggles when there is a war going on right in front of them. And until the giants are gone they will continue to see them and need modification to their memories.
Voldemort sending messages to Harry through their link is a little arrogant of him. Iím hoping he is just trying to rattle Harry and hasnít got anything else planned that Wulfric and company canít handle.
What in the world is Tonks doing there? I guess Iíll have to wait until the next chapter to find out. Amazing job, but I didnít expect anything less. Iím hoping you get your wish to have all of it posted by DH, that way we wonít have that long to wait to read the rest of it. See you at the next chapter.
whoa ... that was a shocker, impressive, and I loved it!!!!!!! You have a natural talent for this, its great!! I hope there is a sequel with Harry taking Voldemort down. Thank you for this great story!!!
Great chapter, hurry up and update the suspense is killing me..........
Ron, Hermione, and Ginny blushed suddenly and looked at the floor while Harry watched her go. He couldnít shake the feeling that he had just missed somethingÖ you know hary really is thick, I'd start laughing if it was me, but its thick crazy Harry. Awsome story i love this one!!! its in my Top Ten of about 72 favs. Keep the awsome work up!
god hurry n update or i'l die with this suspense i love it
haha! yay Tonks!! I never suspected that! Good job with the battle scene, despite what you say i think you are actually very good at writing them. Can't wait for the next part!
brilliant! could not have done it better myself
OOOOH i finally caught up and i love it. I can NOT wait to see how it ends!
awww!!! i LOVE Ginny!!
NOOOOOO... I don't trust her...