Reviewer: dumbledorerocks
Date: 08/06/07 10:25
Chapter: A New Beginning

I say it again, you are an extremely good writer. JK beat you by very little(and that's saying something!). i was hooked onto your story! Legacy, indeed! I have written a similar review a few weeks ago. but just in case you missed it, here's one. if you ever plan to continue(which i pray you will!) or write another story, please do email me @ aswin_sg@hotmail.com.

certain points i loved about the story
1)you made everyone seem human. for example, HP is not a selfless guy who has infinite patience or genius.
2)Your wizard battle was superb! really vivid description!
3)Really intruiging story, deeply complex!

sorry for the bad english, i wrote this at 4 am, when i finished your last chapter!.

BTW i'm a college english professor
nitwit! blubber! oddment! tweak!

Reviewer: harryandginny1165
Date: 08/04/07 0:18
Chapter: A New Beginning

listen i know that u dont want to make a sequal book 7 but i must insist that u take it inot considernation. what u have here is a story half finished i will be extremely disappointed in u if u dont make another story on top of it. i mean most people would now have read the deathly hallows but it is alway good to have someone elses pointon how the final battle may take place, even after the book has been published. so plez plez plez do a sequal...

Reviewer: safetywitch
Date: 08/02/07 22:47
Chapter: A New Beginning

good one- I waited for each chapter! Thanks for taking the time from your busy schedule to write - keep it up! Hope the little one grows to love Harry as much as the rest of us.

Reviewer: reedy0611
Date: 08/02/07 10:04
Chapter: Potter's Cove

Great story...

Reviewer: the_wind
Date: 08/02/07 6:23
Chapter: A New Beginning

It's a pity you aren't going to write a sequel, because I need something to occupy me since Deathly Hallows has been released. While I'll admit that no-one could compare to the great JKR, that's not to say that this story doesn't come close.

I'd seen this story a fair few times in the Recent Stories section, but I hadn't been a fan of alternate universe year 6 fics. One day I was a bit bored, so I gave it a shot and loved it. I've followed it since and I wasn't disappointed by the ending. I've seen a very small collection of excellent fics, and this is one of them. Looking forward to any other stories you write!

Reviewer: Ginny5282
Date: 08/02/07 4:02
Chapter: A New Beginning

Great ending. I was waiting for the end of this story just as eagerly as I was Deathly Hallows. Now I suffer from double the sadness that both stories have come to an end. I'm sorry you are not going to write another, I would have loved to have known your thoughts on how Harry would beat Voldemort. Thank you for making the wait for book 7 more bearable and I wish you all the best in whatever you decide to write next. You certainly have the imagination to create your own world as attested by the way you took Jo's world and adapted it flawlessly. Good Luck.

Reviewer: whitesamurai313
Date: 08/02/07 0:09
Chapter: A New Beginning

Great story. 5 stars. I like that it kept you occupied until Book 7 came out, as that is pretty much what it did for me, so thank you for keeping me from going insane from waiting. I look forward to any future writing from you, so if you ever write a different story, I'd appreciate it if you emailed me at whitesamurai313@yahoo.com with the details. Thank you and good luck.

Reviewer: datbard
Date: 08/01/07 21:55
Chapter: A New Beginning

wow. hundreds of thousands of words later and still wanting more. That is the mark of good author, and you are definitely one of them.

Reviewer: pammiez_x3
Date: 08/01/07 20:47
Chapter: A New Beginning

great story! it really came it to have a lot of similarities to deathly hallows. hope to see a sequel!

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 08/01/07 19:04
Chapter: A New Beginning

If you can’t find them to modify their memory, it makes sense to put out a story that makes their account of what happened, if not quite believable, then at least plausible. To muggles that is.
Firenze is forgiven now? Hypocrites. If they hadn’t banished him in the first place, they wouldn’t have to apologize now.
Elves asking for payment? Wonderful! I think Dobby is still going to have a lot of coaxing to do to get them caught up to his mentality.
It’s nice to see I wasn’t wrong about Nott. I hate the way he died though. Having his own father kill him, and from behind in a sneak attack was despicable. Wulfric got the revenge for Theodore though, great job Wulfric.
It does seem strange to have Dumbledore in the hospital wing and Harry not, for a change. Hagrid shouldn’t do that, of course when I was in the hospital, I made everyone sneak me food too.
Ginny found a way to fight, and argued that Harry would’ve done the same thing. I knew I liked that girl, and I figured she would’ve found a way to be there if possible.
All of that time as a phoenix, and now he will die in less than a month? He really seems to look forward to it too. It is amazing that the really old can in fact welcome death as the next great adventure. Feeling sad is kind of hard to do when the person that is gone really is at peace. (Been there)
I am glad they put Rowena in the place of honor in the office. I’m sure the other portraits will be in awe for several centuries.
Even with Voldemort still out there, you ended this one in a wonderful way. I loved the gathering at Potter’s Cove. Having your ‘family’ around is the best way to look forward to the future, and I am glad the ‘family’ he has is so supportive of him. I knew it was Tonks and I mentioned it in several reviews, didn’t I? If I didn’t, I meant to.
You wrote Dumbledore in a way that actually made me like him. I haven’t liked his character for a long time in Jo’s version, but you changed my mind. Thanks.
I hope that you do keep writing. You are very good at it and I would hate to see you stop, just because this story is over. Thank you for the mention in you’re A/N, it wasn’t necessary, but was definitely appreciated. I found your story when you were almost done, but I still enjoyed every word of it. Good luck on your next writing adventure. RHM

Reviewer: Ginny Guerra
Date: 08/01/07 17:26
Chapter: A New Beginning

Good story! Thanks for sharing it with us!

Reviewer: clabbert2101
Date: 08/01/07 16:15
Chapter: A New Beginning

i've been following this story since the beginning, and it's a tad upsetting that Legacy is finally through. I suprised how well this fits with Deathly Hallows, and it could very well have been the sixth book.

Reviewer: wodcdre
Date: 08/01/07 14:55
Chapter: A New Beginning

I've been an addict of this story since first reading about it in the fanfic abuot this time last year. This story has made my day. Granted the ending was picturesque and fitting, some part of me wanted to see a "finishing off" of voldy at the end. Out of all the fanfic's I've read, this one was the best! There were times when I thought the story dragged, but that was just a part of the meat of story in which in later chapters made my ideas kinda moot. I applaud you for making a well versed, excellent story! If you ever change your mind about making a sequel to this one, I will log it into my favorites and dance for joy while reading!! Thank YOU for writing a truly epic piece of fiction!

Reviewer: Ginny Guerra
Date: 07/26/07 15:25
Chapter: Destiny Fulfilled

Good one!
I wouldn't want to work for that Department.
Update soon, please!

Reviewer: Snoopygonewilder
Date: 07/24/07 21:59
Chapter: Destiny Fulfilled

I don't think Voldy is dead, they said he rushed out when they arrived... but I don't think Voldemort was supposed to die in this story, I sthink from what I know, it's all about setting him back, so Harry can detroy the Horcruxes, and then kill Lord Voldy....I'm really interested to see how this story finished, it had been so amazingly well writen.. I wouldn't mind putting it in my shelf, and very few books go on my shelf, im very picky...

Reviewer: Snoopygonewilder
Date: 07/24/07 21:59
Chapter: Destiny Fulfilled

I don't think Voldy is dead, they said he rushed out when they arrived... but I don't think Voldemort was supposed to die in this story, I sthink from what I know, it's all about setting him back, so Harry can detroy the Horcruxes, and then kill Lord Voldy....I'm really interested to see how this story finished, it had been so amazingly well writen.. I wouldn't mind putting it in my shelf, and very few books go on my shelf, im very picky...

Reviewer: Snoopygonewilder
Date: 07/24/07 21:58
Chapter: Destiny Fulfilled

I don't think Voldy is dead, they said he rushed out when they arrived... but I don't think Voldemort was supposed to die in this story, I sthink from what I know, it's all about setting him back, so Harry can detroy the Horcruxes, and then kill Lord Voldy....I'm really interested to see how this story finished, it had been so amazingly well writen.. I wouldn't mind putting it in my shelf, and very few books go on my shelf, im very picky...

Reviewer: sweety54321
Date: 07/24/07 16:21
Chapter: Destiny Fulfilled

when will you get the next chapter out???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

Reviewer: baby b
Date: 07/24/07 5:43
Chapter: Destiny Fulfilled

so he's dead????
hurry and update

Reviewer: dumbledorerocks
Date: 07/24/07 3:25
Chapter: Destiny Fulfilled

bloody hell! that was one hell of a battle! i read the 7th book, and it makes me wonder if your's or JK's was better. no, honestly, nice ideas with the chimera wings. also, one request. can ypu PLEASE make harry stop doing "stupefy" and more powerful and non verbal curses. it just gives the notion that harry is not a powerful wizard (no offence). anyway, congrats! you just rivalled JK in writing a battle!

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