Reviewer: HedwigsChristie
Date: 02/17/07 6:58
Chapter: Chapter One

You have some imagination
it was quite good but would have been better if, instead of someone telling us what happened, we went through the time with them up until the court case
A very strange idea

Reviewer: tufgurl
Date: 10/21/05 0:14
Chapter: Chapter Two

i have only one thing to sayy: wat happened to harry?

Reviewer: hello sanity
Date: 01/31/05 15:50
Chapter: Chapter One

Awesome awesome awesome! You're such a great writer. you add such amazing detail and believablity to your work. Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'll try to get the next chapter up soon, but it's taking forever because it's curently considered "too unrealistic".

Reviewer: chrislupin025
Date: 01/22/05 10:21
Chapter: Chapter One

i like this UPDATE

Reviewer: dark_soul
Date: 01/22/05 10:20
Chapter: Chapter One

Omg that is so good. You have to update. Please do it soon. I love when you saw Ginny came in pulling a relunctant Draco. HAHAHAHa that is great. This is a fantastic story. I was hooked from that start. I really do hope that they save Hermione. I couldn't imagince her doing something like that. And since when did Fred and George care about Percy. I mean yeah he was their brother but still. They spent their lives trying to torment him as much as they can. Anyways i love it very very much! update soon.

Author's Response: It'll be updated soon, I promise! Thanks for the kind review. I rallt liked that part with Ginny and Draco too. :-P

Reviewer: School owl
Date: 01/22/05 9:11
Chapter: Chapter One

I found one small error- "You [i]WHAT?[/i]" Fudge bellowed in spite of if himself.- You need to put "You WHAT? " Fudge bellowed in spite of if himself. Other than that, it's good.

Author's Response: Yes, I suppose I should have. I didn't put in any codes, mainly bacuse I forgot. ;) I submitted the other chapter (this story was short by most standards) and it should be up soon. :-D

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