Reviewer: mickeypotterfan88
Date: 01/29/09 13:22
Chapter: Intuitive Actions and Innocent Alcoves

Awesome story! I've been reaing alot of fanfiction and very few have made me cry. You are very talented! Keep up the good work. Off to read the sequal!

Reviewer: harrypotter9600
Date: 08/21/08 13:05
Chapter: Conceited Counterparts and Chiding Chessmen


Reviewer: Jaime Archer
Date: 07/25/08 17:31
Chapter: Intuitive Actions and Innocent Alcoves

Omg, I refrained myself from commenting up until now, but I can't wait for the sequel!! This is absolutely amazing!

Reviewer: maryweasly
Date: 06/27/08 11:15
Chapter: Intuitive Actions and Innocent Alcoves


Reviewer: Stephaninny
Date: 06/02/08 22:46
Chapter: Promises and Pillow Fights

ehh it was okay but i think the mysterous letter was much much much better than that chapter

Reviewer: HannahBabes
Date: 05/27/08 8:15
Chapter: Intuitive Actions and Innocent Alcoves

write more please =]

Reviewer: Ginnygirl7
Date: 05/11/08 13:21
Chapter: Intuitive Actions and Innocent Alcoves


Reviewer: Ginnygirl7
Date: 05/11/08 11:32
Chapter: Conceited Counterparts and Chiding Chessmen

Funny chapter. I liked how Harry got all traumatized over a game of chess, but keeps his cool against Voldemort.

Reviewer: cedricdigs
Date: 05/10/08 23:27
Chapter: Discussions with Dumbledore

I was laughing so hard!

Reviewer: magyk_killer
Date: 05/09/08 22:34
Chapter: Intuitive Actions and Innocent Alcoves

That was sooo perfect! Are there anymore? I'll look!

Reviewer: Laleigh Rocco
Date: 04/04/08 17:29
Chapter: Intuitive Actions and Innocent Alcoves

How is that R rated???

Reviewer: Laleigh Rocco
Date: 04/04/08 16:13
Chapter: Conceited Counterparts and Chiding Chessmen

That's HILARIOUS!!!! My grandmother's giving me odd looks because i keep laughing. Great job!!!!!!

Reviewer: pygmypuffgurl
Date: 03/01/08 10:59
Chapter: Intuitive Actions and Innocent Alcoves

How sweet! They're so cute together! *sniffles*

Reviewer: pygmypuffgurl
Date: 02/24/08 19:17
Chapter: Predictions of the Last Potter

That was...erm...interesting. Let me just say, Hermione's mind is much more twisted than I would have guessed. That just doesn't seem like something she'd come up with. And if she did I think she'd be a little more shy about it. And I can't imagine that she'd be doing it until she was much older. Okay, disturbing mental image! Badthoughtsbadthoughtsbadthoughtsbadthoughts

Reviewer: pygmypuffgurl
Date: 02/24/08 12:53
Chapter: Discussions with Dumbledore

LOL! Bunny slippers. That is SO Dumbledore-ish. Harry's gift is awesome! I never would have thought of a pheonix. Now I have to find out its name or I'll go crazy!

Reviewer: pygmypuffgurl
Date: 02/24/08 10:48
Chapter: Subconscious Repercussions and Secret Revelations

I feel bad for Harry, no one ever listens to him. Great chap, though! I loved everyone's reactions to him floating by the ceiling. But what in the world was Fawkes doing in the bedroom?

Reviewer: pygmypuffgurl
Date: 02/21/08 15:39
Chapter: A Party, an Apology and a New Partner

LOL! Woolen socks. Ya gotta love that guy. Anyhoo, Snape and Harry coming to an understanding is a nice thought, but highly unlikely in my opinion. Great chappie!

Reviewer: pygmypuffgurl
Date: 02/21/08 15:24
Chapter: Secrets, Sorrows and a Solemn Vow

Hee hee, Ginny's so bossy. I think everyone's reactions to the prophecy were a little dramatic, but good chapter anyway.

Reviewer: pygmypuffgurl
Date: 02/21/08 14:53
Chapter: Birthdays, Brokenness and Betrayals

OOoooOOOoohhh! So he's finally telling themthe prophecy. The whole thing about Ron and the brains changing his personality is a little weird, though. He's very OOC. Ginny seems a little off, too. She's usually not that sympathetic with her brothers. Anyhoo, great chappie!

Reviewer: pygmypuffgurl
Date: 02/21/08 14:32
Chapter: The Astute Decisions of Albus Dumbledore

Uuhhh... that was a little weird. I mean, If Albus Dumbledore, most powerful wizard of his time and all that, had gotten into some kind of duel bad enough to end up with a sscar EXACTLY like Harry's, donchya think someone might know about it? I don't imagine that would be an easy thing to keep a secret for however many years Dumbledore's been alive. You said it yourself, the guy's pretty old. And If Harry is so smart all of a sudden, why was he acting so dumb, telling him he's got blue eyes and glasses? And why'd he pick that moment to show it to Harry if he didn't want to explain it? Also, I don't think he would freak out like that. It's still a great story, but this chap was not my fave.

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