Reviewer: SugarxSpunxQuill
Date: 04/08/07 16:56
Chapter: The Astute Decisions of Albus Dumbledore

ok, what on earth is going on??? Harry is very smart, but can't play chess, he can spells without a wand, Dumbledore has a scar the same as harry's, and something wierd is goin on in the death chamber.
i am very confused in a curious and intrigued way at this point in the game ;)

Reviewer: SugarxSpunxQuill
Date: 04/08/07 16:39
Chapter: The Dreaded Dream Depiction

hmm, wierd. Was that Harry going through the viel and seeing what was on the other side? You truly have me hooked now, you really are a gripping author!

Reviewer: SugarxSpunxQuill
Date: 04/08/07 16:18
Chapter: Conceited Counterparts and Chiding Chessmen

If he is so clever now, how come he didn't win chess??? i am v.confused...

'“Who you calling MEN, there Carrot Top?” cried the White Queen, in fury.'

I was doubled up laughing at that! Carrot top, lol!

Reviewer: SugarxSpunxQuill
Date: 04/08/07 16:05
Chapter: The Magical Menagerie and Mealtime Munchies

HOW IS HARRY BEING SO DAMNED SMART/OBSERVANT?????
i am dying to know here!!! i am shattered, but i can't leave my laptop until i know!
(great story, really... addictive!)

Reviewer: SugarxSpunxQuill
Date: 04/08/07 15:48
Chapter: Alleys and Amour

yay! Harry has a pensive, i always thought he should have one! Does the story have something to do with see'ers? I mean first his E on his owl, and now this Ms. Amanda person... im intrigued as to where his fic is going...

Reviewer: SugarxSpunxQuill
Date: 04/08/07 15:31
Chapter: Inside Weasley's Wizard Wheezes

Hmmm... something very fishy is going on with Harry here...
i wonder what it is, something isnt right..

Reviewer: SugarxSpunxQuill
Date: 04/08/07 15:19
Chapter: Gifts, Grades & Gryffindor

the story is really nice so far. Im kinda wondering where the its going, but i guess il have to keep reading! Liking it so far though ;)

Reviewer: SugarxSpunxQuill
Date: 04/08/07 14:58
Chapter: Promises and Pillow Fights

Bless them all, having a good time. Its so nice to see them having fun instead of the usual trauma after trauma! I can't wait to read the rest!

Reviewer: Mrs ginnypotter108
Date: 04/07/07 20:42
Chapter: Intuitive Actions and Innocent Alcoves

YAY!!!! THERE IS A SEQUEL TO THE SEQUEL!!!!!!!

Reviewer: h8Snape
Date: 04/05/07 17:39
Chapter: A Party, an Apology and a New Partner

I just read chapter 11... and while you can see by my name that i do not like Snape at all, i believe that you are a great writer and i can now genuinely see the connections between harry and Snape. i enjoy your book six almost as much as JK's. i look forward to reading any of your other works.

Reviewer: Psychosmatica
Date: 04/04/07 22:02
Chapter: Intuitive Actions and Innocent Alcoves

>.< oh my god this is great

this story is turning into one of my all time favorites
keep up the good work you rock
Please finish this story soon its killing me to wait

Reviewer: wertyu2
Date: 03/25/07 18:14
Chapter: Intuitive Actions and Innocent Alcoves

IT rocks

Reviewer: Izzy Radcliffe
Date: 03/16/07 22:50
Chapter: Intuitive Actions and Innocent Alcoves

this story is so sweet! post more soon!!!!

Reviewer: harry potter girl12
Date: 03/08/07 19:51
Chapter: Intuitive Actions and Innocent Alcoves

hurry up with the next chapter

Reviewer: harry potter girl12
Date: 03/08/07 19:41
Chapter: Predictions of the Last Potter

hahaha lord mouldy - shorts where did u come up with that one

Reviewer: bookworm0625
Date: 03/05/07 19:25
Chapter: Intuitive Actions and Innocent Alcoves

Awww.....how sweet! I love your stories!!!

Reviewer: liveonluna
Date: 02/17/07 18:50
Chapter: Intuitive Actions and Innocent Alcoves

AHH. What are greatt story. It is a clever one! I LOVE IT!!!! Great job the_bartender713!!! And keep up with the excellent work!

Reviewer: peggie
Date: 02/12/07 4:32
Chapter: Intuitive Actions and Innocent Alcoves

Great story-thanks, stayed up till 4 to finish reading. You have a real talent.

Reviewer: peggie
Date: 02/12/07 3:57
Chapter: Subconscious Repercussions and Secret Revelations

Wow! I can't wait to read the rest. How about:
A Step Towards the Light or
A Stitch in Time or
The 1000 Year Old Prophecy

Reviewer: peggie
Date: 02/12/07 2:44
Chapter: Alleys and Amour

creative chapter-I really enjoyed it.

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