WOW O WOW O WOW O WOW O WOW! Poor Sev. Poor Sevvy... *sniff*
Por favor terminalo!!!, tu historia es fantástica, me encanta, muy intensa también, no puedo esperar a leer el proximo capitulo!!! continúa escribiendo, tienes talento. your story is great, you have talent!!
Hi! Ms. Meriadoc Brandybuck (me) recently changed her username to Kestrel. You recently reviewed my story called An American in Hogwarts. I just wanted to let you know that it is now on the new username, and I'll update there. I'd love it if you'd re-review! P.S. I'm having a bit of trouble with it, so the online chapter's a bit different.
wow... i LOVE it... wow... *stares in awe* the only problem i hve with it thugh, would have to be the fact that there are not very many chapters:P keep on writing. you got some true talent.
"Author's Response: Hmm...perhaps you should have read, under genre, that it is a Snape and Hermione story. Wanna specify? Or can't you? Look, kid, if you're going to leave a review, please be more specific, and, for god's sake, READ THE F*$#ING SUMMARY!".....hey, calm down a bit killer. True, no one should review if they don't like the story, but please, chill. This story is pretty good, but i agree with others, it all happened a bit fast...like suddenly she was calling him Severus and kissing him. Oh and I think you said Hermione had bushy red hair...it's brown. I like the storyline though. Nice work.
Author's Response: Oh wow, that was a long time ago....yeah, I did kind of go off on that poor person but you have to understand, I rarely ever have bad days and that was just one of my bad days. I had probably just gotten my grades or something. *laughs* No, I really dont mind bad reviews. Hell, attack me if you want, but when they have no reason behind there attack, then it just becomes an empty claim. It should also be understood that I am always one to be up for an argument/ debate, but I can't stand it when a person says something and just repeats it without defense, you know? Also, he said I was sick for pairing the two, but it was him (not me) who clicked on that pairing and read the story. Thanks for your review, though. I swear I'm not a heartless bitch.
That's funny Hermoine chasing poor neville around the room. I can actuallyt see it. can't wait for her to snap out of it and let Ron have it.
This one was a little fast. I mean I understand student's having crushes on teachers. I went through that myself. But it just seems that Snape went from not thinking about Hermoine to wanting to carry her to quickly. I still like the story and am enjoying thoroughly.
I must admit I was intrigued by the idea of the relationship between these two characters. The day off from class did throw me off a bit nut not Snape's reaction. The story is well written, it's different. My curiosity is definately aroused and I'll be reading the rest. Good show.
Oh no, I just found this story and read it all at once. Its really brilliant, but you just -have- to update! You left me right at the cliff! *whines*
LOVE IT! update soon!
This story is so intresting. I like it alot, keep going!
NOOOO you left it in a cliffy!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!~~~ DEFN 10 -Krystal
ummm.............yea.... FIX IT
*breax down + criez* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Why?????!!!!!!!!! Why did u force hermione + snape to drink potions to erase their love?!?!?! WHY?!!!!!!!! Ur mean!! :P mor plze.
Cliff HANGER! Very good Voldemort perspectives, really enjoying, looking forward to the updates!
This is brilliant I love it! Keep up the good work!
I like the story! It is sweet. I never thought of Hermione and Snape getting together... Great!! update soon!!
I think you should take more time to progress the relationship between Snape and Hermione. I also think that 'Dumbledore's Free Day' is wierd and I didn't like it. Dumbledore has never interfered with the way the teacher's have taught in any of the books, so it seems a bit OOC. And since Snape is one of my favorite characters, I don't really like the drunk version of him. But who knows, I have only read the first chapter. I guess I will have to keep reading to find out. I like this so far, but my suggestion to you, and it's just a suggestion as you are free to write what you wish, is to stick to canon character traits and to make the plot line more solid with more background information.
Author's Response: I had a different plot, but I then found out that it was banned from the school. I wanted to keep the scene where Snape freaked out and could think of nothing else that Snape could say that would shock the students as much as it did. I'll admit, I don't spend a lot of time on my fanfiction mainly because I'm writing a novel. I write this story to keep away writer's block and to practice my technique, not to actually entertain. You see, in this story, I don't have to develop the characters, they're already developed for me. Anyway, thanks for the constructive critisism instead of just simply stating "This is disgusting".
hey, great fanfiction. At first, I wasn't really into the idea of Snape and Hermione, now I am. It was so bittersweet how he forced himself to forget it. As a writer, I thought it was brilliant, as a reader it made me sad, lol. keep it up, and please if you have any heart update soon! lol, jk.
This is disgusting.
Author's Response: Hmm...perhaps you should have read, under genre, that it is a Snape and Hermione story. Wanna specify? Or can't you? Look, kid, if you're going to leave a review, please be more specific, and, for god's sake, READ THE F*$#ING SUMMARY!