that was a good story, but i was kind of hoping that it would be ron that hermione loved. but everyone to their own, of course. i actualy like how it didn't turn out to be dm/hg
i can't believe it's a one-shot. i find it very depressing, but the characters are likeable.
I liked the desciribtions of the characters. I couldn't recognise who was Hermione's married friends untill I read the end of the story. No need to take it as a concern, I liked that side of your story. Good plot, esspecially for a one-shot.
Well,it is very good,I should admit it.Is this the first and last chapter? It really is a lesson for us,it`s like what Dumbledore said in the third movie of HP:"Happines can be found even in the darkest of times;only that somebody should remember to turn the lights on".