That was really incredible! You're a good poet!
I really liked it. there was a few minor mistaked with the rythem, but that may have just been in my head.
"...Feel just like a child... Like you want to hide from them... They make your mind go wild" Excellent rhyming - you don't use words just because they rhyme, when there are better choices. (One of the worst mistakes a poet can make, I think.) VERY COOL.
Very cool! (u may notice that I am reviewing almost all of ur poems!) I like it! It's PERFECT!!! 10! 10! 10! 8!::shoots down jugde who showed the 8:: 10! YAY!!! ALLL JUDGES SHOW TEN!!!
Very eerie...I like it!
Wow! Really great poem! I'm jelouse i can't write poetry for crap! You're really good! Please review my story Hogwarts Runaway. Thanx!! keep writing! :)