Reviews For A Normal Life
Reviewer: readergirl166
Date: 07/25/10 19:03
Chapter: A Normal Life

That was so good. I drank in every word.

Reviewer: ronsbabiesmomma
Date: 10/09/08 1:01
Chapter: A Normal Life

wait... how can myrtle be ron's mom when it was over fifty years ago mathmatically she'd be in her 70s in this new present...

Reviewer: ronsbabiesmomma
Date: 10/09/08 0:55
Chapter: A Normal Life

wait... how can myrtle be ron's mom when it was over fifty years ago mathmatically she'd be in her 70s in this new present...

Reviewer: taytay
Date: 03/30/08 0:15
Chapter: A Normal Life

what happened to harry parents in the AU story?

great story by the way

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 11/23/07 20:50
Chapter: A Normal Life

What an excellent story, and it could have been put into the HP POA book because it happened after everything else. From now on I can pretend it was part of the book. Wouldn't it have been funny if Ron had remembered Myrtle being his mother? It'd probably give him nightmares, or maybe he'd feel more sorry for her. I love time travel stories, thanks. Keep Writing.

Reviewer: crazycaity94
Date: 08/03/07 5:46
Chapter: A Normal Life

i've only read the first few pargraghaphs but i cant wait to see what happends nexed

Reviewer: ravenclawhero
Date: 01/05/07 9:52
Chapter: A Normal Life

you made one big mistake. no offence. in the alternate world when harry, hermione and chris are in the common room. harry and hermione aren't supposed to be friends. harry, ron and hermione became friends when ron and harry saved hermione from the troll. if voldemort never existed, he never took over quirell, who never sent the troll to Hogwarts. other than that, great story!

Author's Response: Hi, and thanks for your review. That is a good point that the troll scene would not have taken place and H&C may not have been friends with Hr at that time, but my story also takes place over 2 1/2 years later, at the end of PoA, so it's plausible that any number of events could have taken place resulting in the 3 becoming friends.

Reviewer: ravenclawhero
Date: 01/05/07 9:39
Chapter: A Normal Life

you made one big mistake. no offence. in the alternate world when harry, hermione and chris are in the common room. harry and hermione aren't supposed to be friends. harry, ron and hermione became friends when ron and harry saved hermione from the troll. if voldemort never existed, he never took over quirell, who never sent the troll to Hogwarts. other than that, great story!

Reviewer: Big_Kelpie
Date: 12/22/06 9:59
Chapter: A Normal Life

Happy Holidays and happy Deathly hallows day!

Reviewer: Harry4GinnyRon4Hermy
Date: 06/27/06 11:09
Chapter: A Normal Life

I don't get that story. Sorry, but just too confusing and weird, I didn't like it.

Reviewer: pandafan81
Date: 04/07/06 23:38
Chapter: A Normal Life

I really enjoyed this fic. I was a bit confused by what Dumbledore was going to do to fix the situation, but it became clear to me as the events fell into place. This story really made me think about the consequences of such a seemingly small act. Chris was an interesting alternative to Ron. I actually thought it was rather amusing that Molly became the potions teacher and Chris' brothers had the actor's names.

The impressive part about this story is the choices Harry, Hermione, and Chris/Ron were forced to make. In the AU version Harry may have had a life out of the spot-light, but it wasn't the life he was meant to have. This was a very thought provoking story. Thank you!

Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I'm really glad Jo introduced the time-turner as it is very a very useful device to change the direction of the story. I wasn't sure anyone would pick up on the names of the actors. I couldn't resist one last twist.

Reviewer: joanna
Date: 04/07/06 12:47
Chapter: A Normal Life

This was indeed an original story. I bet you have given the possibilities of a defect Time Turner a good amount of thoughts, therefore nothing seemed illogical. And I really enjoyed where you took us!

You have also kept your characters in-character. Especially Dumbledore. I have noticed though some OOC-ness about Hermione. I think she would have reprimanded Ron for kicking a poor Grindylow.

I have noticed some typos, but they weren't disturbing at all. What most disturbed me were the names of AURon and the rest of the AUWeasleys. Naming them after the actors who play Weasley-characters didn't work for me, but it may be only me. Also, I think Myrtle would have been too old for Arthur, but nevertheless it was an interesting twist in the story!

Hermione, we’re not gonna be there long enough to take a breath, let alone alter time… I really liked that sentence. I knew there would be something about that! Anyways, you have a great story here and I would like to congratulate upon finishing such a hard task.

Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I agree that Myrtle was older than Arthur. I estimated 15-20 years his senior. I figured that since witches/wizards seem to have longer life spans it may be in the realm of possibility that they could have hooked up. Sometimes you just have to take blind eye to disturbing facts :)

Reviewer: kitkat2010
Date: 04/01/06 18:31
Chapter: A Normal Life

What a wonderfully original story. Your use of cause and effect was very well thought out, as well as interesting. Although I was a tad bit confused about the timeturner, I was able to figure out what had happened in the long run. You also had wonderful characterization. Dumbledore sounded like Dumbledore, Hermione like Hermione. Good job! Keep up the great work.

Reviewer: silver_tears
Date: 03/31/06 12:40
Chapter: A Normal Life

Well done for writing such creative and original work! The description is brilliant and I liked the way the whole story is like linked together in a way that makes so much sense. Reading this, it sometimes felt as though I was peeking in your mind. I'm glad this story contains no OOC, grammar mistakes and a very well-thought plot. Congratulations and keep up the good work! 10/10

Reviewer: Big_Kelpie
Date: 12/15/05 7:34
Chapter: A Normal Life

great storyy abit long , though 111/10

Reviewer: Gretel Potter
Date: 10/17/05 6:42
Chapter: A Normal Life

It's a bit confusing ... but it's still really good. I think it would be better if you could explain the scene taking place a bit more.

Reviewer: Everlasting
Date: 04/17/05 21:29
Chapter: A Normal Life

It was okay, a bit...repeated. I don't know what that's supposed to mean. It was good at first, but then it got confusing at the Dumbledore part. Really confusing. But it's still a good story, jeez why do you only have two stars??!!

Reviewer: strawberry_sparkle_lipgloss
Date: 04/17/05 21:24
Chapter: A Normal Life

it was really great and descriptive but when you think about it, it just went round in 1 big circle, but oh well it was detailed and quite harry potterish

Reviewer: Aquira
Date: 03/09/05 17:56
Chapter: A Normal Life

I understood something that had to do with timetravel! I feel intellegent. It confused me when Dumbledore explained what he was going to do, but I got it when he actually did it. Great story! ~Quira

Reviewer: jezzagoose
Date: 02/05/05 0:33
Chapter: A Normal Life

um i thought it was a bit confusing and i didnt quite get the point

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