Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 12/08/06 0:24
Chapter: "Father William"/ or, "Professor Snape!"

best one yet!

Reviewer: HermioneGinnystwin
Date: 11/26/06 14:37
Chapter: The Raven

Funny and still poetic.This was already my favorite poem ever but now i have an entirly different perspective of it

Reviewer: RiddleHatred
Date: 10/07/06 19:06
Chapter: "Trees"- by Sergeant Joyce Kilmer



Reviewer: WizardsKid
Date: 08/10/06 20:00
Chapter: "Father William"/ or, "Professor Snape!"

Clever change of words. I find myself putting it in my favorites, CONGRATS!
Good luck and happy writeing!

Reviewer: kumydabookworm
Date: 06/26/06 21:10
Chapter: The Raven

I could clearly see the structure and the rhyme of the Raven. I thought this was slightly funny, actually. I kept imagining the dark mood and scenery in the Raven, and then putting in the HP made for some amusing pictures.

I take it from this poem that Harry AND Ron loved Hermione? I mean, Poe supposedly wrote this about "Eleanor" the girl he loved, so...does this kind of, sort of ship Harry/Hermione? (Yes, I'm an obsesso shipper, haha)

Anyway, I loved how you managed to keep the rhyme and rhythm but also replace words within the poem.

Totally HP, totally Poe. Hard thing to pull off. I applaud you. :)

Great work.


Reviewer: gobletoffire
Date: 02/17/06 15:21
Chapter: The Raven

GREAT! I GIVE THIS A TEN!!! YES, TEN!!! (though the randomness one should be longer)(This is one out of only two that I've given a 10 so far)

Reviewer: Air Elemental
Date: 02/04/06 10:30
Chapter: Twas the night before Mystery

An interesting version of 'Twas the night before christmas' there. I really your style. It's fast and punchy! And Dumbledore as Santa Claus is a novel idea! You have a slight typo in the first stanza. You have two capital Ns. But apart from that, great work! I really enjoyed it!

Reviewer: RavenKath
Date: 08/17/05 21:13
Chapter: Over the rainbow

awww how sweet. Don't we all wish we could fly over the rainbow to where we aren't muggles anymore?

Reviewer: RavenKath
Date: 08/17/05 21:08
Chapter: "Sympathy" or "Bullying is bad"

I just happened across this poem, and the others, today, and I really liked this one so I thought I'd leave a review. I don't know the original poem, but I'm sure you did an excellent job in putting Neville into it. Neville is one of my favorite characters! Well, thanks for the poem. 9.5/10

Reviewer: padfoots gurl
Date: 03/12/05 22:27
Chapter: The Raven

the raven is one of the few poem's that i know really well, i loved what you did with it!

Author's Response: YAYAYA! THANKS!

Reviewer: Firebolt_91
Date: 02/24/05 0:52
Chapter: "Trees"- by Sergeant Joyce Kilmer

Wow. Nice poem of the Whomping Willow Tree! 10!

Author's Response: THANKS A LOT!

Reviewer: Firebolt_91
Date: 02/24/05 0:51
Chapter: "The City in the Sea" or, "Randomness Takes Over"

Nice random poem, Azrael! 10!

Author's Response: ANOTHER TEN! I MUST FRAME IT!

Reviewer: Firebolt_91
Date: 02/24/05 0:50
Chapter: Over the rainbow

What a great song! Of course, we muggles couldn't fly! Except me, because I'm a Firebolt! Just kidding! 10!

Author's Response: NICE FIREBOLT, THOUGH!

Reviewer: Firebolt_91
Date: 02/24/05 0:47
Chapter: "Sympathy" or "Bullying is bad"

Very, very good! I was bullied by hearing insults from bullies. Anyway, I really like this poem...10!

Author's Response: YEah, me too. It was nasty. THANKS!

Reviewer: Firebolt_91
Date: 02/24/05 0:45
Chapter: "Father William"/ or, "Professor Snape!"

Oh!!! That was weird! Draco a young man, while Snape an old man? Great poem, though...10!

Author's Response: Yup, A TEN! YEAH!

Reviewer: Firebolt_91
Date: 02/24/05 0:44
Chapter: The Raven

Good poem

Author's Response: -YAYAYAYA U ROCK!

Reviewer: skittlz4life
Date: 02/23/05 21:49
Chapter: "Trees"- by Sergeant Joyce Kilmer

Wheeee! Loved the parodies! Hyper brains are good, my doctor told me, after I got my monthly catscan *10*

Author's Response: YEAH, I guess so...

Reviewer: Potter_freak0515
Date: 02/21/05 21:25
Chapter: The Raven

The Raven is my favorite poem!!!

Author's Response: YEAH, It's mine too. GLAD TO MEET SOMEONE WHO FEELS THE SAME.

Reviewer: Kelsid
Date: 02/21/05 16:23
Chapter: "Trees"- by Sergeant Joyce Kilmer

Ha ha! That poem (the Tree one,) was on our poetry test. I think I'd rather have had the Whomping Willow one. :) *10*

Author's Response: YEAH...A SHINY TEN? FOR ME? YAYAYAYAY! THANKS! *wipes tears*

Reviewer: Diamond Quill
Date: 02/21/05 13:58
Chapter: "Trees"- by Sergeant Joyce Kilmer

Lol. Even though I hate the films, I Love the bit where the Whomping Willow eats the birds.

Author's Response: Yeah. That was funny. I hated the film, too. It was rushed, and the time didn't match. BUCKBEAK WAS supposed to be "executed" in summer, DAMMIT!

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