Reviews For Am I Invisible?
Reviewer: LilyPotter
Date: 06/27/06 20:54
Chapter: Lost Invisibility

Aww how sweet... : )

Reviewer: LilyPotter
Date: 06/27/06 20:49
Chapter: THE LAST NAME!!! Bwahahahahaha

should have a theme song

Author's Response: LOL!!! I so agree. You should make one up. JK - that'd be so funny!

Reviewer: LilyPotter
Date: 06/27/06 20:43
Chapter: Spots and Secrets

You know, the red eyes and blue hair wouldn't be so bad if it wasn't for that weird acne-like thing.

Reviewer: LilyPotter
Date: 06/27/06 20:35
Chapter: Into the Forest? For protection? You're mad!

I remember why I loved this fic so much : )

Reviewer: LilyPotter
Date: 06/27/06 20:29
Chapter: Detention

Muahahahaha I know his name : P : )

If they didn't remove the rating system I'd totally give you a ten.

Reviewer: LilyPotter
Date: 06/27/06 20:23
Chapter: Meeting of Strangers (again)

Ah, how romantic, slumping into someones arms.

“You are smaller than I and unarmed, yet you still ask question.” I think it should be 'questions' or 'a question'.

-Your favorite nitpick : )

Author's Response: love how you signed it

Reviewer: LilyPotter
Date: 06/27/06 20:16
Chapter: Down the toilet?

Hey, wait a sec... I don't think I'd want to swim in the lake if the toilet's plumbing lead into it... eeeewww : )

Reviewer: LilyPotter
Date: 06/27/06 20:00
Chapter: The First day (a.k.a. Chaos)

Hello, once again! You know, this rmeinds me so much of when I was invisible. 1) The teachers liked me (they still do, of course) and 2) Books were the only thing getting me through the day. Brilliant chapter, of course.

"This was her favorite subject because she could actually do it. This and Charms were her favorites." You might want to try rephrasing that, it sounds a bit confusing. Try like "Along with Charms, this was her favorite subject because she could actually do it."

Sorry for being a nitpick : )

Author's Response: That's a good idea. Sorry to confuse you. I should probably go and change it, but I'll forget after I read the rest of the reviews. Crap. Sucky memory, and I'll try not to get so many mistakes next time. Don't worry about being a nitpick. It makes me happy that people are actually reading it and giving reviews. I like that you tell me what's wrong. Thanks.

Reviewer: LilyPotter
Date: 06/27/06 19:32
Chapter: On to Hogwarts

I'm sorry!!! ::throws self at feet::

I totally got distracted with school, but I'm back now! I'm re-reading and leaving you a new review for each chapter....

Poor invisible Jillian....


Oh, and : " “Reparo,” she whispered under her breath, and it was sewn nice a neat. A way better job than she could have ever done. "

It should be "nice and neat", I think.

Author's Response: oops, I must have been so exciting writing a story that I typed too fast and made a typo. Sorry

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 06/14/06 7:55
Chapter: Change

good chapter

Reviewer: lily_evans34
Date: 06/07/06 16:07
Chapter: Change

Wow, I had completly forgotten about this story until I got the notification email, and honestly, I thought it was a glitch in the system, as I get false notification emails all the time. I can't believe you've updated!


Great chapter!!! I really liked how Jillian just realized that she could change in the end. UPDATE!!!!! (Please...)

Reviewer: Ezzcomo
Date: 06/07/06 9:05
Chapter: Change

*gasp* DUN DUN DUN! Update update update! I wanna know what happens! *is still bouncing around* 10!

Reviewer: Pottergirl
Date: 05/21/06 19:56
Chapter: Hey, wait, what's happening here?

*Wolf Whistles* Nice Chappie!!!!! 10/10 UPDATE!!!!!! lots of fluff

Reviewer: fireflower
Date: 04/13/06 13:13
Chapter: On to Hogwarts

WICKED!!....i now how it feels to be, well, invisible. I love your writing style though, its really simple yet detailed and jam packed full of everything!

Reviewer: Andromeda Black
Date: 03/25/06 18:36
Chapter: Hey, wait, what's happening here?

Hey I read this a long time ago before I got my account and I really like it! I hope you continue it, it's been a month since you've updated. . . Ah well, they kissed! How sweet!

Reviewer: harryandginnyxx
Date: 02/28/06 6:20
Chapter: Hey, wait, what's happening here?

Hey wait what's happening here? It's been ages since you last updated. What's happened to you?!?! Panecki! (where did you get Panecki from?)

Reviewer: Ezzcomo
Date: 02/14/06 17:51
Chapter: Hey, wait, what's happening here?

I just realized that I didn't put why I said finally. It wasn't cause the chapter is finally out, it was cause they finally kissed. I didn't make it that clear in my last post.

Reviewer: Ezzcomo
Date: 02/11/06 12:50
Chapter: Hey, wait, what's happening here?

Oh my GOSH, FINALLY! :D *sings a weird song froms choir that goes like this:* And all the people re-joh-oh-oh-oice... :D What was the other part of the club called? The SSSPJ or something? Idk. As for the website, I'm trying to figure out a way to update from my computer. I don't get to see my Grandpa much anymore, seeing as gas prices are so massively high. (Massively is my new word.) ;)

Author's Response: Massively - what a nice word. hehe. I'm glad they finally kissed too. JK I'll update, you just have to be patient

Reviewer: neville_is_my_hero
Date: 02/10/06 14:50
Chapter: Hey, wait, what's happening here?

tee hee. i love my name 2!! :D anyway... cool chapter!

Reviewer: halfbloodprincess22
Date: 02/06/06 14:50
Chapter: Hey, wait, what's happening here?

just 1 word-UPDATE!!

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