Reviews For Am I Invisible?
Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 07/14/07 17:57
Chapter: Down the toilet?

Sorry, I completely forgot about this story until I went through my favorites. I really liked this chapter. Myrtle interests me. How did she widen the toilet? For that matter, how did she hold the pipe? Oh well, great chapter.

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 07/03/07 12:32
Chapter: The First day (a.k.a. Chaos)

Awesome job. I like how you pointed out Jillian's likes and dislikes, her strengths and flaws, just a lot about her. You gave it to us subtlely, which is very good. You didn't come right out and say it. She really does sound like me. :D

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 07/03/07 12:23
Chapter: On to Hogwarts

This is a really good beginning. I can relate to this, because I'm often overlooked at my school. I found two things wrong, though. Professor McGonagall would have called Jillian 'Miss Cole', not 'Miss Jillian'. And also, that last though at the end should be in italics. Otherwise, it's an awesome job!

Reviewer: HedwigsChristie
Date: 10/24/06 16:56
Chapter: On to Hogwarts

Hiya great story just enough romance and not over-killing it well done
now i feel like being annoying is that ok? hope so
well 1) the expeliarmus charm (sp) doesnt throw someone just disarms naughty naughty too much tv
2)Myrtle cant hold anything or touch anything

but then again this is your fic and soz if people have already said this

anyway great story cant wait for next chapter i think this will be 9/10 just finish it please i need the ending lol well done!

Author's Response: Oops! Thanks for telling me so I don't (hopefully) make the same mistakes again. Thanks for both the nicely stated criticisms and the praise.

Reviewer: halfbloodprincess22
Date: 10/20/06 18:41
Chapter: Finding A Way Out

awesome chapter! i love jillian's character, she is very believable. update soon!!

Author's Response: You are sooooo nice! I like to think that I'm somewhat like Jillian - except without all that magic. *sigh* shame, shame, shame.

Reviewer: LilyPotter
Date: 10/20/06 13:40
Chapter: Something Evil

Wonderfully amazing chapter : )
No, no, I'm not dead. My computer broke.

Author's Response: Thank goodness - I though you'd dropped the story because it took me waaaaay to long to update. Sorry 'bout that.

Reviewer: Ezzcomo
Date: 09/17/06 9:50
Chapter: Something Evil

Hey guys, I just thought of something cool. Well, sorta. As you can imagine, it's actually hard to keep a PFC website going. I can only update it when I visit my gramps, which I hardly do anymore. Anyway, what I'm getting at, what if I made a myspace group for it? What do you guys think of that?

Reviewer: halfbloodprincess22
Date: 09/03/06 14:01
Chapter: Something Evil

did i enjoy? of COURSE i enjoyed!! awesome chapter, PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: halfbloodprincess22
Date: 09/03/06 13:58
Chapter: Hey, wait, what's happening here?

YES!!! THE KISS!!! good chapter, 10/10

Reviewer: halfbloodprincess22
Date: 09/03/06 13:56
Chapter: Christmas Day

awesome story!! its so good, im adding it to my favorites...i love peter's character

Reviewer: Sweetpal
Date: 07/30/06 1:24
Chapter: Something Evil

You Know Jillian, she sounds a lot
like me sort of thats why I like this story
and I will expect more chapters soon.

Reviewer: sunshine
Date: 07/23/06 19:51
Chapter: Something Evil

Thank you for updating!!! Oh, poor Jillian. You put me in so much suspence...
Keep it up : )

Reviewer: sunshine
Date: 07/03/06 13:10
Chapter: On to Hogwarts

JIllian is me exactly! (Only she is one of 8 sisters, I think it was, and I'm one of 6 sisters.) I love the way she thinks-I saw a lot of myself.
I like that it isn't fluffy. PLEASE NO BROOM CUPBOARD!!! (sorry for shouting, but I detest an excess of fluff-it's ok in moderation, but broom cupboards...shudder)
But anyway, your story is THE BEST and to say you are talented is a mere understatement.
Please update quickly; it's been too long.
: )

Reviewer: LilyPotter
Date: 06/27/06 21:41
Chapter: Change

Heyyy that wasn't very fluffy.... it was supposed to go "Oh peter I've always loved you but I've never realized it til now...wanna go snog in a broom cupboard??"

Ah, I suppose you call that 'unoriginal', huh?

SSSPJ! : D

Author's Response: "snog in a broom cupboard" hehe - maybe I'll use that idea. I dunno. I'm sorry it wasn't fluffy, but I'll get back to the fluffy stuff soon. I promise. I just have to get past all the serious crap and the end of the story, then I'll see if they can snog in a broom cupboard or not. Hmmm, maybe I'll make it a sad ending. I dunno - I guess I'll see when I get the "inspiration" hehehe

Reviewer: LilyPotter
Date: 06/27/06 21:34
Chapter: Hey, wait, what's happening here?

YES! HAH! I KNEW IT!

they kiiissseeeddd hahahhahhahahah....

: )

Reviewer: LilyPotter
Date: 06/27/06 21:16
Chapter: Christmas Day

Oohhhh....mystery-ness

Reviewer: LilyPotter
Date: 06/27/06 21:11
Chapter: Dreaded Night

Oh! and he also wiped proffessor kilicus's memory because he's in love with her and didn't want to see her suffer. : )

Author's Response: That's an interesting idea. Hmmm. Maybe. hehehe

Reviewer: LilyPotter
Date: 06/27/06 21:10
Chapter: Dreaded Night

"He started to scream, a high pitched, extremely unmanly scream..."___hahaha

"Peter thought for a few seconds before smiling. I forgive you as long as you never do to me what you did to Lucian. ___Hahaha

...Peter rubbed his chin thoughtfully then nodded. Ill come, but Im not going to let him see me.___I know now! He sneaked into her history class invisible so he could stare at her becasue he is obviously madly in love with her!!!

She grinned up at him, but he only stared at her. She stepped away. Whats wrong, she asked...Nothing else, just the desk......Yeah.___Yeah, he's so infatuated with her...how sweeet : )

Reviewer: LilyPotter
Date: 06/27/06 21:09
Chapter: Dreaded Night

"He started to scream, a high pitched, extremely unmanly scream..."___hahaha

"Peter thought for a few seconds before smiling. I forgive you as long as you never do to me what you did to Lucian. ___Hahaha

...Peter rubbed his chin thoughtfully then nodded. Ill come, but Im not going to let him see me.___I know now! He sneaked into her history class invisible so he could stare at her becasue he is obviously madly in love with her!!!

She grinned up at him, but he only stared at her. She stepped away. Whats wrong, she asked...Nothing else, just the desk......Yeah.___Yeah, he's so infatuated with her...how sweeet : )

Author's Response: LOL - you are so cute. I love you're reviews. They make me remember why I actually wrote it. Thanks for all the support.

Reviewer: LilyPotter
Date: 06/27/06 21:01
Chapter: Panic

HAH. I found something to nitpick. Your utmost pefection could only last so long! ( I mean that in the nice way)

Jillian shook her head, and carefully go up off the bed. You mean, Im in Slytherin House? How did I get here!?

"got up"

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