Reviews For Am I Invisible?
Reviewer: LATMC
Date: 02/10/05 20:03
Chapter: Into the Forest? For protection? You're mad!

Good story! Whenever I'm stuck with names, I think of a word that describes it and I find that word in a different language. Like, this boy seems sort of mysterious, and one of the words for mysterious in Latin is "arcanus". Just a suggestion.

Author's Response: ooh, good idea! I like Arcanus. It could fit him, thanx! I'm still gathering suggestions, so it might be a while. I'm glad you like the story, though.

Reviewer: Diamond Quill
Date: 02/09/05 10:05
Chapter: Into the Forest? For protection? You're mad!

Peter Panecki!!!

Author's Response: Panecki!? Very interesting. Hmm, let me think about it. I don't think I'll use his last name until a little later until I can get all the ideas from my reviewers. Thanks for the um...unique last name. I think I actually like it, though. *deep thought*

Reviewer: dave 049478
Date: 02/08/05 20:17
Chapter: Into the Forest? For protection? You're mad!

Smith it is a common last name. I love the story so far? Peter as in Peter Pettigrew??? 10/10

Author's Response: Definitely not Peter Pettigrew! My Peter is waaaaay too cute. J/K I think I like Smith, but I'm going to see if I get other ideas before I decide. Thanks for giving an idea, though. Love, me

Reviewer: Diamond Quill
Date: 02/08/05 12:44
Chapter: Into the Forest? For protection? You're mad!

Do you need a completely new first name or one from previous books? Im luvin the story. Your such a good writer. Please will you review my poem? i wanna know wat u think. Dis is Rlllly goood. write more soon pleeeeeease.

Author's Response: I just need a last name because I'm really bad at English last names. Help! I'm really glad you think I'm a good author. I really would like to read your poem and review. I'll have the review up. Thanks for the awesome review. *sigh* this must be why everyone writes fanfics. Reviewers!

Author's Response: Another response about your poem. I really liked it, and I think that anyone who reads this should look up Diamond Quill's poem. It was short, sweet and chocolatey - or however you spell the word - everything I like in a poem/story. Yum!

Reviewer: magic_pen
Date: 02/07/05 18:06
Chapter: Into the Forest? For protection? You're mad!

WE love you too. I'm very bad a last names, so I won't bother. If you want you can go into the beta forums and ask there under general help. by the way, I love the suspense. Hurry up with the next chapter!! *10*

Author's Response: *Sigh* Alas, I can only go as fast as my teachers will allow. Darn that homework!

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 02/04/05 21:53
Chapter: Detention

As we all tap our feet impatiently... good story.

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 02/04/05 21:48
Chapter: Meeting of Strangers (again)

interesting mystery.

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 02/04/05 21:40
Chapter: The First day (a.k.a. Chaos)

Nice story. Lots of little clues that I can't put together yet.

Author's Response: Yeah, it does have all those little clues that we can't put together - even me! It's still a mystery to me to see how it all turns out.

Reviewer: magic_pen
Date: 02/04/05 17:29
Chapter: Detention

Hurry, I want to know if she get's hurt by the dragon *anxious glance* and the Slitherin's name *grins* Keep it up, this story rules!!!! *10*

Author's Response: Well, the dragon isn't going to hurt her, but it might have some important roll to play *innocent smile* keep reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Diamond Quill
Date: 02/04/05 16:12
Chapter: Detention

This is so good! Update soon!

Author's Response: The next chapter should be up soon - I hope.

Reviewer: Diamond Quill
Date: 02/04/05 16:06
Chapter: Down the toilet?


Author's Response: I like that word. Just say it, wow. Interesting what words we can come up with, huh? Well, that was random. Have a nice day!

Reviewer: Diamond Quill
Date: 02/04/05 16:02
Chapter: On to Hogwarts

That is amazing. You are a natural author. With an exception of some of the authors on this site, you will probably be one of the only ones who turn out to be a proffesional author. It was really well written and showed Jillians character so well. Im commenting on your first chapter because i havent read all of them yet. you get 11/10 from me.

Author's Response: I'm glad you think I can be an author because I actually want to write books and publish them. It would be awesome! Thanks for the wonderful review!

Reviewer: dave 049478
Date: 02/04/05 11:22
Chapter: Detention

Yeahhhhh I am first this time. Great story I wonder what his name is???

Author's Response: Oh, the suspense! This must be how I keep all my readers: the unamed. J/K - I'm going to tell his name in the next chapter, most likely. Keep reading and reviewing! I love my reviewers! :)

Reviewer: dave 049478
Date: 02/01/05 19:59
Chapter: Meeting of Strangers (again)

I love it

Author's Response: me, too!

Reviewer: magic_pen
Date: 01/31/05 17:19
Chapter: Meeting of Strangers (again)

this is a great story!!! Who is that guy? Will she get her broom back? Why am I asking so many questions. Hurry up and update so these and many more questions can be answered. *10*

Author's Response: The next chapter will have most of those answers. Thanks for the great review!

Reviewer: potter black
Date: 01/30/05 22:09
Chapter: Meeting of Strangers (again)

yay! i thankyou gratefully for updating this story! i love it!

Author's Response: you are very welcome

Reviewer: Saphire_Mist
Date: 01/28/05 16:30
Chapter: On to Hogwarts

That was AMAZING!!! You're writing skills are so cool, I'll be looking up on how to write like that. Then again, talent is rare, and you have talent.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the compliment. I makes me want to write this as fast as possible for you guys. I love my reviewers. You guys are awesome.

Reviewer: Kerian
Date: 01/26/05 17:36
Chapter: The First day (a.k.a. Chaos)

Its a good story, Ive always read to stories about other student's lives at Hogwarts now that we know what Harry gets up to, and there are stories about the Marauders everywhere. Update soon!

Author's Response: My reviewers are sooooo nice!

Reviewer: The Pheonix
Date: 01/26/05 17:03
Chapter: The First day (a.k.a. Chaos)

Constellation, hurry up and write more please! I love this story! You are a way good writer! (At least a lot better than me!) Of course, that doesn't really say much.

Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment and I'm going as quickly as possible!

Reviewer: The Pheonix
Date: 01/26/05 17:02
Chapter: On to Hogwarts

Hey! I know you! You're my cousin! Hah Hah! Funny. Well, anyways, I like your story a lot. Hurry and write more. Luv Ya Lots!

Author's Response: My cousin! Ah, I know you, too. Isn't that weird? Thanks for the good review

You must login (register) to review.
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.

We have stories and authors in this archive.


Choose Theme:
Makers of Fine Wands by CanisMajor 1st-2nd Years
Ollivander of Croton arrives in Athens in 382 BC with big dreams, noneof which...
James and Me by Northumbrian 6th-7th Years
Annabel is having a bad day. Her sudden and unexpected meeting with a face from...
Tom Riddle and the Cave of Living Waters by alittletiefling 6th-7th Years
What would happen if Tom Marvolo Riddle had been adopted by well-meaning squibs?...
It Takes Two to Tango by lucca4 3rd-5th Years
They cannot keep doing this; it is only a matter of whose resolve will break...
In The Heat Of The Morning by welshdevondragon 3rd-5th Years
Summary: In the heat of the morning, Katie and Leanne lie in the grounds...
Can't Fight the Moonlight by Acacia Carter 6th-7th Years
A life-changing disaster at work drives Neville Longbottom to seek aid from...
The History Teacher by iLuna17 6th-7th Years
Maybe he didn’t just love history, maybe he loved being a history teacher.
white on white by Padfoot11333 6th-7th Years
Three vignettes about scars, love, and sex.