Reviewer: CelticWitch
Date: 07/16/07 23:54
Chapter: Prologue Part 2: The Story of Segam Merlin

Holy crap, that is really cool! i wish I could say something more artistic, but I can't!

Reviewer: black_ink
Date: 03/30/06 20:12
Chapter: Prologue Part 2: The Story of Segam Merlin

that was amazing!!! i love your ideas and how you mixed it, wonderfully btw, with harry potter!!!! your brilliant!! 10/10! your on mt favorites!! ~Sara

Author's Response: Thanks I try I try heh...anyway, yeah, since I've been getting good reviews I've decided to continue it (and because it is such an awesome story in my opinion), I'm about 1/2 way through Chapter 1: Butter-Milk....yup, the chapter is called butter milk, AND FOR GOOD REASON! I hope you guys will like it, it'll be up within the week (I hope), later~ Harry

Reviewer: black_ink
Date: 03/30/06 20:04
Chapter: Prologue Part 1: The Job

great chapter!!! loved it! will keep reading! ~Sara

Reviewer: Wendol
Date: 03/12/06 0:44
Chapter: Prologue Part 2: The Story of Segam Merlin

Clever working around the basic HP plot. Masterfully done. The part of Segam's sould residing into James and then merging with Lily's love was a little confusing, maybe I will need to do a re-read. The chapter was a little small, but that is no hitch. All in all, a good job.

Reviewer: Wendol
Date: 03/09/06 22:59
Chapter: Prologue Part 1: The Job

Ronin Peregrine, I loved the character. Well thought out. I expect the plot to intermingle within the magical and muggle world. As you said, the plot is unclear now, but I hope it will be cleared in the near future. I assume, Ronin is a kind of muggle cum wizard comfortably moving around both sides. The character seems to grow on you. I hope the next chapter will be out soon. Good Job again. P.S. Please R&R my fic, you can find the link from my profile. Its called Harry Potter and the Moor Monks.

Reviewer: I Love Severus Snape
Date: 02/24/06 10:53
Chapter: Prologue Part 1: The Job

I read this a few weeks ago and put it in my favourites. Then today, I looked in my favourites, opened up this story, re-read it, and now I'm here. Anyway, I love it! Very mysterious and intriguing, not to mention clever. The plot sucked me in, and the characters seem well thought out. I'd be thrilled if you updated sometime soon. Definitely a 10/10

Reviewer: NoxSomnium
Date: 12/08/05 16:18
Chapter: Prologue Part 1: The Job

Intriuging and fun, but mostly non-magical. Interesting.

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