Reviewer: maitulsa
Date: 09/01/09 1:28
Chapter: Chapter 1- The Unexpected Visit

136 thousand words I read until this disappointing cliff hanger. I love this fanfic to death and nothing can compare, but I really wish you would just put writing block aside, or whatever the reason is why you aren't updating, and just finish it! SOMETHING that finishes with "the end"
I mean, can you imagine JK Rowling finishing her story with "and then it happened" right as harry walks out to meet his death in teh 7th book? NO. SO PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE, I beg you with everything, FINISH THIS! Somehow, just finish this lovely story. Everyone is waiting, and eager to hear the end.

Reviewer: hplovex3
Date: 08/29/09 10:32
Chapter: Chapter 1- The Unexpected Visit

hiya sparks,
my guess as to why you arent updating is that you want to raise the hype for this story and get it real popular. YOU HAVE DONE THAT SO FEEL FREE TO UPDATE ANY TIME SOON!!!

Reviewer: Petra92
Date: 08/28/09 0:15
Chapter: Chapter 1- The Unexpected Visit

Sparx.
I doubt you will even read this.
But. if you do there a re a couple of things i want to say.
This was teh first draco and hermione fic i had ever read.
Since 3 years ago when i first read it. None have compared. NOT even CLOSE!

I wanted to let you know that it was you Sparx that got me into writing FanFiction.

I don't know where you are or what happened to you. but i don't think you are purposely not writing... you can't be. You have thousands upon thousands of fans and if you read just even a couple of these reviews you would know that they all wait for your return.

That is why i think it is not on purpose.

Did you get hurt?

did you lose your password?

Maybe somethingterrible happened to you and you can't go on anymore,

I don't know, and i dare not assume,

for all i know you could be reading these pleading reviews and laughing or you could be dead. i know not.

But if you are out there and capable of writing and able to fifnsh this story. I bed of you to do so...

i have gotten over 100 people to read this story and they all agree with me that if at all possible you will finish it.


I hope nothing terrible has happened to you and thats why your not writing. I pray that that is not the reason.


Please come back to us...

Don't be sirius black, where he fell through the curtain to never return and all that was left were the whispers.

I hope you are well. With all my heart i hope that.

Forever your Fan.
Petra Pershing

Reviewer: rangalover95
Date: 08/22/09 21:26
Chapter: Chapter 38- Pushing the Right Buttons

Hi I'm Georgia
I just added my first fan fic story about five mins ago , maby you could have a look at it. I loved your story so much , it was soooo good. My dad printed it out for me at his work and he was so embarresed because it just kept printing lol. anyway i really hope that my story can be as good as yours thanx xxx

Reviewer: rangalover95
Date: 08/22/09 20:37
Chapter: Chapter 38- Pushing the Right Buttons

Hi I'm Georgia
I just added my first fan fic story about five mins ago , maby you could have a look at it. I loved your story so much , it was soooo good. My dad printed it out for me at his work and he was so embarresed because it just kept printing lol. anyway i really hope that my story can be as good as yours thanx xxx

Reviewer: rangalover95
Date: 08/22/09 20:35
Chapter: Chapter 38- Pushing the Right Buttons

Hi I'm Georgia
I just added my first fan fic story about five mins ago , maby you could have a look at it. I loved your story so much , it was soooo good. My dad printed it out for me at his work and he was so embarresed because it just kept printing lol. anyway i really hope that my story can be as good as yours thanx xxx

Reviewer: accioquill
Date: 08/18/09 17:36
Chapter: Chapter 38- Pushing the Right Buttons

I've had an idea! I think that it wasnt Mr. Malfoy that gave them the love knot, I think it was dumbledore! Duhn-duhn-duhn! I dunno is that right?

Reviewer: moongoddess188
Date: 08/14/09 9:52
Chapter: Chapter 38- Pushing the Right Buttons

Im sad you will probably never finish this story :( I followed it for so long!

Reviewer: Starsmile
Date: 08/10/09 6:05
Chapter: Chapter 38- Pushing the Right Buttons

OMG THIS IS THE BEST STORY EVER
I CANT WAIT FOR THE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: cheesecakeparty
Date: 08/09/09 18:32
Chapter: Chapter 38- Pushing the Right Buttons

NOOOOO!!!! I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENEDD!

i cannot handle suspense like this!
:D

Reviewer: Starsmile
Date: 08/08/09 14:05
Chapter: Chapter 18- Pansy’s Outburst

UGH PANSY'S SUCH A BITCH!!!!!!!!
Awesome story btw
My favorite story EVER
Keep up the good work :D

Reviewer: mytydawn
Date: 08/06/09 16:43
Chapter: Chapter 1- The Unexpected Visit

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! i really love this story and i want to know how it ends! its been years since ive been able to read something new and i hate it

Reviewer: Muggleborn Slytherin
Date: 08/05/09 14:51
Chapter: Chapter 38- Pushing the Right Buttons

This is great! but, for the sake of my sanity, please keep writing and update quickly, i check to see if a new chapter is up almost everyday! i know, i know i'm using a lot of exclamation marks, it's just the way I am! lol

Reviewer: Lorelai Rose
Date: 08/05/09 10:19
Chapter: Chapter 38- Pushing the Right Buttons

I'm really sad that this hasn't been updated in 3 years. It's a really good story. And I'm almost heartbroken to say that it's terrible that this will never be finished. I hate not finishing a good story, especially one as this. I don't know how I would want it or expect it to end, as you have written it. Terrible shame it is that you've abandoned your brilliant piece of work. A real shame. :(

Reviewer: SiriuslyUnderRated
Date: 08/02/09 0:18
Chapter: Chapter 1- The Unexpected Visit

I dropped off the radar for the last year almost. The other day I was thinking about Hermione/Drace ship and remembered reading this story and patiently waiting for the update that never came. So I decided to come back and see if it had been completed yet - and it's still INCOMPLETE! I'm sad SPARZ please finish this FIC. Thanks

Reviewer: Aquila IlyTequila Shotz
Date: 07/30/09 7:54
Chapter: Chapter 38- Pushing the Right Buttons

I LUV THIS STORY!!!! itz AWESUMM but PLZ make the next chapter QUIK i cant STAND the cliffhanger any moreeeeee!!!

Reviewer: Atlei
Date: 07/29/09 20:52
Chapter: Chapter 1- The Unexpected Visit

AHHHHHh I hate this suspense! what if we just finished up the story for this author who has abandoned this mesmerizing story? So what happened? I agree that the Love Knot breaks off unexpectantly and then they seemingly start to become enemies again, but they secretly know that they still love each other and sooo... at the end, they run away from hogwarts together and get married (just so that Mr. Malfoy doesn't get what he wants).

Reviewer: Apple Fin
Date: 07/29/09 19:31
Chapter: Chapter 38- Pushing the Right Buttons

Oh the suspense! D:

I have a feeling the "something that happened" has something to do with the Love Knot. Maybe a reaction much like what happened when they fell off the broom...

Oh man! What if the Love Knot dettaches itself?! Maybe that was what's in the Journal? And since Pansy had it... No!

Update is in order!

Please? :)

- Deranged Apple Fin

Reviewer: Apple Fin
Date: 07/29/09 18:47
Chapter: Chapter 37- Making Sense of It All

Oh no! Something tells me there's going to be a lot of turmoil that's going to ensue.

Reviewer: Apple Fin
Date: 07/29/09 16:24
Chapter: Chapter 36- Feelings

Oh Pansy!! -angels hark- I knew it! Or I think I knew it... If I understood the last bit of this, it was Parkinson that did the ripping, wasn't it?!

Uhm, ehem, anyway. -laughs uncomfortably- On to the rest of this story.

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