Reviewer: fanpire1721
Date: 02/22/10 11:34
Chapter: Chapter 38- Pushing the Right Buttons

Ok..I saw this story on here and so I went over to and read. When it was finished at ch. 27 I went back to mugglenet. But now we are at Ch.38 and it's still not over. And it has been a while. Are you going to update? I love this story. It is one of the best HP fics I have ever read. Please post the rest of the story! :)

Reviewer: Alice-Olivia
Date: 02/11/10 19:29
Chapter: Chapter 38- Pushing the Right Buttons

Hey Sparx!
I love your story. It is so funny and really sweet. I was wondering, when was the last time you updated THE Unseemly Proposal? The website said 2006. And, when will chapter 39 come out? Chapter 38 is such a cliffholder. Love your writing! -Alice-Olivia

Reviewer: yup
Date: 02/10/10 21:03
Chapter: Chapter 38- Pushing the Right Buttons

i really enjoy reading your story. i think it's really funny and cute. i hope you will be able to finish this because this is such a good story. so plsssssssssss do finish it..i really luv it.

Reviewer: Grey_Lady
Date: 02/06/10 23:05
Chapter: Chapter 38- Pushing the Right Buttons

Oh My GOSH!!! You HAVE to update soon!!!! I love love LOVE this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

Reviewer: Grey_Lady
Date: 02/05/10 18:10
Chapter: Chapter 25- The Four Cloves

I love it! But I do have a question about the love knot, how do Hermione and Draco get dressed? I mean, with the knot extending from each of their wrists, wouldn't it be impossible to get their arms through shirts or jackets? Or does the knot act like it did with the shower curtain a while back? I can't wait to read more!!

Reviewer: freefallenangel
Date: 01/30/10 2:19
Chapter: Chapter 38- Pushing the Right Buttons

oh my god!!! this story is so awesome!!! i can't believe you ended the chapter like that though! you haven't updated in years!!! please update! please please please! oh yeah, like i said, awesome story. i'm just a crazy english student though so some of your grammar mistakes drive me crazy but apart from that, i can't stop reading. literally. i just read the whole story today!

Reviewer: ravenclaw48
Date: 01/18/10 7:50
Chapter: Chapter 1- The Unexpected Visit

I must say the first is really good but they mentioned dumbledore being alive and im confused on who's in ravenclaw?is it hermione ?

Reviewer: Wmaster
Date: 01/03/10 23:08
Chapter: Chapter 38- Pushing the Right Buttons

"and then something happened."
You can't just leave the story like that! It was getting really good, and then it just ended!!! You have to submit the next chapter now, before I explode at seeing another great story get left in the dust! :0

Reviewer: Summer Highland Falls
Date: 01/02/10 23:32
Chapter: Chapter 20- The New Rule

First off, I love this story, I remember finding a prinout off this in the school library probably four years ago, when there were only eighteen chapters, and never getting furthur then that. I have just rediscovered it, and it's superb. I do, however, have one little bit of criticism. I don't think you've edited the story well enough, I'll be reading, totally engrossed in the story, when some gross grammatical error will jump out at me, disturbing the flow completely. Otherwise, I'm engrossed, hope to finish it tonight, Thanks-
Marlon Ettinger

Reviewer: jeswren
Date: 01/02/10 22:47
Chapter: Chapter 1- The Unexpected Visit

This is the funniest and most entertaining FanFic I have ever read. I was reluctant to read it because it doesn't appear it will ever be finished, however I am so glad I did and I will just imagine my own ending.

Reviewer: jeswren
Date: 01/02/10 22:46
Chapter: Chapter 1- The Unexpected Visit

This is the funniest and most entertaining FanFic I have ever read. I was reluctant to read it because it doesn't appear it will ever be finished, however I am so glad I did and I will just imagine my own ending.

Reviewer: Summer Highland Falls
Date: 01/02/10 21:58
Chapter: Chapter 4- Dancing Sheep and Pink Pompoms

Sorry for being nitpicky, but it's Draught of Peace, not Draft

Reviewer: GingerSnaps102
Date: 12/31/09 6:00
Chapter: Chapter 38- Pushing the Right Buttons

I just started reading this fanfic less than two days ago and I couldn't seem to pry myself from it! It's wonderfully entertainging that happens to emit all the right emotions a story needs to capture an audience! I have thoroughly enjoyed reading this story up to it's current point. I must say in Chapter 38 though, I was immensely saddened at the course Draco and Hermione took... D: But none the less, the story is not over yet. I really hope things get better, I don't know if I will be able to handle it if things just fall apart like that with them! But Kudos to the creativity of yourselves and those who have helped you throughout your story; Great Job!

Reviewer: PotterGirl714
Date: 12/29/09 23:11
Chapter: Chapter 38- Pushing the Right Buttons

What Happend i read this all in one day!!!!!!!!!!!!! I want them to fall in love!!!! Please post more soon!

Reviewer: Draco_always
Date: 12/26/09 15:26
Chapter: Chapter 38- Pushing the Right Buttons

This is the third time I'v read this. Hoping that there is going to be another chapter, but every time i'm let down.
You havn't writen in like, 4 YEARS. You have abandond this story, let down your readers. This story can only be finished by you. Only you! If you don't finish this story everyone wanting to read it will come to the end and be disapointed because one of their favorite stories is not ever going to be finished! I hope your happy.

Reviewer: speshall_girl
Date: 12/24/09 13:36
Chapter: Chapter 1- The Unexpected Visit

"Once again, a reminder that this story is NOT HBP or DH compatible! I also wanted to say that I love you guys. =) Thanks for EVERYTHING so far!" written by spax in her last chapter.
Sounds like a good-bye to me.
That makes me want to cry. :(

Reviewer: speshall_girl
Date: 12/23/09 19:11
Chapter: Chapter 1- The Unexpected Visit


I found mugglenet's fanfiction site 3 days ago, and I found your story in every top ten, so I read it. I have now finished what you have written and I am hooked with your story!
I am afraid that something has happened, and I find this very sad indeed, because you have left a lot of people waiting for the next chapter. Please, tell us, make an announcement, or do something to let everyone know what has happened, or when you will update again.
I hope you're well, and finish this story if you can.

Reviewer: Aquila IlyTequila Shotz
Date: 12/16/09 20:27
Chapter: Chapter 38- Pushing the Right Buttons


Reviewer: dreama
Date: 12/11/09 1:07
Chapter: Chapter 38- Pushing the Right Buttons

why would EVER abandon such a brilliant story ?!!

Reviewer: GeorgeWeasleyisMine
Date: 12/03/09 17:58
Chapter: Chapter 38- Pushing the Right Buttons

For years now, I've just been frustrated that you haven't updated. This is one of the best fanfictions I've ever read. Seriously! By far! But now I'm just concerned. It's not all that often that such an intricate story such as this one that has been going on for a year just suddenly stops. I hope that nothing bad has happened to you, and if there has been that sort of event, then I am deeply sorry.

I almost regret re-reading it again because of the lack of a continuation, but now that I think about it, that's ridiculous. I can still enjoy the chapters that are up, which are marvelous, by the way, even though I'm disappointed that it hasn't updated. I really want to see the end! (Although, I have my own speculations...)

You probably won't read this, but I just wanted to say that your story is awesome, and I'll still check for updates, despite the low likelihood of that. Please update if you can, and thank you for what is up now!

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