Reviewer: enliventhelivid
Date: 10/16/10 17:24
Chapter: Chapter 1- The Unexpected Visit

The ideology behind the chapter is astounding, however there are the factors that Dumbledore is rather deceased, any accident preformed Mr.Smithers is unlikely due to the assumption that Mr. Malfoy is without the power to injure or rather have others injure without being severely punished.

Reviewer: LunaLover203
Date: 10/13/10 12:07
Chapter: Chapter 38- Pushing the Right Buttons

PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: butterbeerniffler
Date: 10/04/10 20:07
Chapter: Chapter 1- The Unexpected Visit

I really loved this story. You are an amazing writer and I love you! haha no but seriously. you need to keep writing this story. do you know how many fans you will or have already lost? Please, PLEASE keep writing!

Reviewer: ZoeyHP
Date: 10/03/10 6:14
Chapter: Chapter 38- Pushing the Right Buttons

Omg, I love this story and ... and YOU HAVE ABANDONED IT?! I feel like crying.

Reviewer: maebernadette
Date: 10/03/10 1:58
Chapter: Chapter 1- The Unexpected Visit

next chapter please!!!!! it has been 2 years or so!! please please, don't abandon this story...

Reviewer: x Dark Lady x
Date: 10/02/10 2:24
Chapter: Chapter 38- Pushing the Right Buttons

Wow. I am completely and utterly speechless. When I came across this website (courtesy of intense Facebook references) I did not expect this. Wow. Amazing. You have outdone yourself.

Reviewer: mma1997
Date: 09/27/10 16:06
Chapter: Chapter 1- The Unexpected Visit

Look, I know you probably don't read these anymore but your story was just so amazing you really, really have to finish it. I MIGHT DIE IF YOU DON'T!!!! I just love it sooooooooooooooo much. You are just such a genius. I really hope you remember your unfinshed book and come back to add a few more chapters because IT'S JUST SUCH A BEAUTIFUL STORY!!!!! I LOVE IT SO MUCH!!!!!!

Reviewer: Deem21
Date: 09/24/10 12:12
Chapter: Chapter 1- The Unexpected Visit

2 YEARS? ITS BEEN 2 YEARS?

I think I just died a little.

Reviewer: Anya Summers
Date: 09/14/10 1:12
Chapter: Chapter 38- Pushing the Right Buttons

Oh. My. God. This story just keeps getting more and more amazing. Thank you so much for writing it and please, please, PLEASE update it soon! The only thing I wanted to say is that I believe Hermione's middle name is "Jean" not "Jane". Other than that, keep up the great work!

Reviewer: Anya Summers
Date: 09/13/10 2:02
Chapter: Chapter 16- Dropping In

I love this chapter! And all the ones before it for that matter. It's hilarious! I keep laughing out loud and reading passages again. I can't wait to see how it turns out!

Reviewer: adoubletn
Date: 09/08/10 20:14
Chapter: Chapter 38- Pushing the Right Buttons

omg omg omg love it! i hope the next chapter comes out soon! this is the most amazing story ever!

Reviewer: deathlyhallows7643512
Date: 09/05/10 17:40
Chapter: Chapter 38- Pushing the Right Buttons

Please update!! Im dying to know the ending. Everyone should just email all the muggnet staff to see if they have the info to contact sparx and tell her that they need to finish the story!! Maybe then she will see how badly everyone wants her to finish it...

Reviewer: missevans7068
Date: 09/03/10 11:25
Chapter: Chapter 38- Pushing the Right Buttons

UPDATE!! SOOOOONNNN!! PLEASEEE

Reviewer: Bastet
Date: 08/31/10 13:32
Chapter: Chapter 38- Pushing the Right Buttons

Oh please, please, please finish this!!! I'm dying to know what will happen next!!!!
Kudos to you. This fic kept me glued to the screen!!!!
Please update soon.

Reviewer: LeeMH
Date: 08/31/10 11:21
Chapter: Chapter 38- Pushing the Right Buttons

I can't believe you haven't updated for four years! Leaving us with those four damn words: 'And then something happened.' WHAT????? I boiled up after I found out the last time you've updated..why did you left it like this?? C'mon, we're waiting; your FANS are waiting! If you needed support, there's always a big one from us! Remember, we'll always be there for you...so pleeeeeeeeaaassseeee updateee *sniff*sniff

Reviewer: lifewhatever
Date: 08/30/10 9:17
Chapter: Chapter 1- The Unexpected Visit

Does anyone know why this author stopped updating?

Reviewer: shanshine
Date: 08/29/10 14:39
Chapter: Chapter 35- Break-Times

Awww there so cute! Haha that's the first time I've used that adjective to describe malfoy. Lol

Reviewer: bcakez
Date: 08/29/10 4:44
Chapter: Chapter 38- Pushing the Right Buttons

JOIN THIS ON FACEBOOK!!! MAYBE SHE WILL SEE IT ONE DAY!!!


http://www.facebook.com/group.php?gid=60770620793

Reviewer: bcakez
Date: 08/29/10 4:13
Chapter: Chapter 38- Pushing the Right Buttons

i agree with xxlightningboltxx, i have also been here since the beginning. This was the best fanfic i have ever read and its such a shame that it has not been completed and will never be completed. I think if finished it couldve been a huge fanfic and would become even more well known. I myself would have referred this story to everyone i knew...but have held back as i dont want anyone to be disapointed as i have been with it not being completed...and on such a horrible cliff hanger...i will always remember this story as i have not forgotten it for well over 4 years. i hope one day the author decides to come back and read the reviews from her loyal fans still awaiting an update...but to no avail.

R.I.P. THE UNSEEMLY PROPOSAL

Reviewer: bcakez
Date: 08/28/10 19:14
Chapter: Chapter 38- Pushing the Right Buttons

and then something happened!!!??!!?its been well over 2 years!!!

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