I decided not to read this last chapter. If you continued it, this story would have been something else (not that it already is but everyone loves an ending). I'm sure I'm not the only one but I am highly disappointed you stopped here. I admire authors who never stop putting heart in a story. Thoughs that just keep writing and writing until they know their heart is content. No guiltiness from a nagging incompletion because they've made sure their story is completed and they feel thoroughly satisfied how far they've took it. It was a great story, one of my favorites. It's an awful shame you stopped here. With your writing talent you could've kept going but apparently you weren't altogether dedicated to your wonderous work of literature whatever your reason. Thank you at least for sharing your imagination thus far.

wait a minute, (yeah yeah my THIRD review in 5 minutes) but u havent been on this thing in 6 years?!?!?!? (maybe 4 or 5 i already forgot) dude come on its the #1 MOST read story on fanfiction u can at least say that it is "completed" i guess its easy to forget a story that is SOOO hard to continue on, i get that, but at least tik the box saying 'completed' if u rnt going to update it =/

ur so mean its not even funny -.-
it was smart of u to do something like this, tho, n i understand how hard it is to write on to continue with it, but seriously? man ur mean! =P haha but i respect u for it..even tho id really like to know what happened, i bet its hard to live up to expectations and end such a complicated plot. u wrote such a great story and i really enjoyed it! i did feel that some of the earlier chapters were a little redundant, but i enjoyed the drastic character development as it grew and yet stayed so accurate to their characters of what u interpreted them as and how jk rowling portrayed them. it was perfect to me. a few typos here n there, but very good. loved it. =)

I love your story its really cool. But could you please write a little faster please?

i wonder if sparx will ever update...it's driving me INSANE!!!!!!

Wow so good! I can't believe you ended it like that but I was hoping for more romance between them.. Are you going to write more? :)

as much as i love u for writing this amazing fanfiction... i am super hating you for not updating!!! please please just please update i;ve been waiting for 4 years!!!!! please update

ok beach! LISTEN TO ME STRAIGHT! U BETTER BE IN A STUPID COMA OR BE DEAD OR SOMETHING BECAUSE IF YOU ARENT YOU SOON WILL BE! O NO SPARX IM SORRY I REALLY DONT MEAN THAT IS JUST THAT YOUR KILLING ME HERE! I WAS 12 SPARX 12!!!!! DO YOU UNDERSTAND? I WAS 12 FREAKING YEARS OLD! THEN THE LAST TIME U UPDATED I WAS 13!!!! DO YOU UNDERSTAND? I MEAN DO YOU COMPREHEND DO YOU KNOWWWW HOW IT FEELS LIKE? NO YOU DONT! U EVIL! IM 18! IM 18 SPARX!!!!!!!! IM A DESPERATE HUMAN BEING! A NERD! I COULDVE JUST MOVE ON U KNOW! BUT I COULDNT IM IN COLLEGE AND IM ONLY WAITING FOR THE END OF THIS STORY SO THAT I CAN GROW! SO THAT I CAN MOVE ON! DO YOU UNDERSTAND? YOU R MAKING ME SICK!
I LOVE YOU
I WISH YOU THE BEST
BUT ONLY IF YOU FINISH THIS STORY
YOUR LOYAL FAN MUGGLENETBABE

Pure bottled awesomeness!!! XD write more!

WHEN.WILL.YOU.WRITE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!