Reviewer: xxEleyteria93
Date: 06/15/06 13:55
Chapter: Desperate Time

awwwwwwww.omg. i can just imagine
The handsome harry potter as a baby. awwwwwww.wen he whines it's so cute cause i can hear it and imagine it in my head!!!!!!

Reviewer: durr_durr_durr
Date: 06/14/06 15:05
Chapter: Detention and Desire

I thought it was immensely entertaining in the first 22 chapters, but 23 through 25 was choppy; seemingly thrown together. Even groan worthy.

Reviewer: stormy_lovegood
Date: 06/09/06 12:32
Chapter: Detention and Desire

The deepest most desired wish? Hmmm.... i saw that, havent read it yet. No offense, but this story really wasn't all that funny. It belongs more it dark/angst. So, while deprived of certain facts and laughs, this story certainly shows that with a good attention to details long neglected, you may be a great story writer. You already are, but I find that when you pay more attention to details, stories come out more realistic. I myself am (eventually) writing a fanfiction, and moaning over the fact that I have no clue how to actually get it on here. Thank you for reading my very common reviews! This was a good (albeit wrongly detailed) story. Goodbye!

Author's Response: Perhaps I merely pay attention to different details than you. True, Ron might be playful with a toddler for a best friend, but he is equally likely to be jealous of Harry stealing attention, like during the Triwizard Tournament. Despite your criticism, I thank you for reviewing.

Reviewer: stormy_lovegood
Date: 06/09/06 12:20
Chapter: Harry “Trouble” Potter

Oh yeah, and all 3 of them can fit under the cloak, asdone in Harry Potter and the Half Blood Prince.

Author's Response: Before reading Half Blood Prince, I did not think they would all still fit under it. They are getting older and bigger, and I did not know how big the cloak was. But I think it said in book 6 that Ron had to stoop low to keep all their feet hidden.

Reviewer: stormy_lovegood
Date: 06/09/06 12:18
Chapter: What Next?

I think it's allright to say who the Professor is. If it's a fanfic you can say whatever you want. But I still think Harry and ron should be the best friends J.K. made them. And what year is this? 6? Yeah, well, it's true Harry dates Ginny come 6, but in 5th year he liked Cho, not Ginny, still. So I'm guessing this is AU. But it's just not realistic with Hermionie and Ron not sticking around. Really in this situation, Ron would be amused and playful, happy around Harry and all smiles. Hermionie would be patient, but playful like his bestfriend was always a little kid.

Author's Response: The story takes place mostly in the summer after year 5 and partly into year 6. So Harry and Cho are already through. Also, I did put an AU warning on the story, as well as a Book 6 disregard, because I wrote this about six months before it was released. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: stormy_lovegood
Date: 06/08/06 23:17
Chapter: Harry’s Second Tantrum and Mrs. Wealey’s Punishment

It's a good story, but I'd rate it 3 out of 5. It has 2 faults. Hary's 4, he shouldn't like Ginnym that's just sort of strange. And Ron is his best friend, they shouldnt be cruel. Why do they hate each other, i think that's a little messesd up. And Hermionie and Ron need to be closer to Harry, they're the best friends. So all in all Hermionie Ginny and Ron(and sort of Harry ) kinda got whacked out. anyway its an ok story, but not really a fave. And here is suggested reading for you: The unseemly proposal. i think. Send u the real name soon!

Author's Response: Harry's only partly four. He goes through times where he is like a four-year-old in all ways, but also has times when he thinks like somebody his age. As I state at one point (I can't remember if it is before or after this chapter) Ron is mean to Harry because he is jealous of Harry getting so much attention from his own mother. Hermione is very close to Harry, especially in the chapters of 4, 5, and 6, or there about. She, like Ginny, even sticks up to Ron for Harry. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Harry4GinnyRon4Hermy
Date: 06/07/06 15:43
Chapter: Detention and Desire

Oh no! Itz ended! I loved it! It was really good, well done!!!

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: Harry4GinnyRon4Hermy
Date: 06/07/06 15:26
Chapter: Harry “Trouble” Potter

Wow I nv knew Hagrid would put Harry in detention!!

Reviewer: Harry4GinnyRon4Hermy
Date: 06/07/06 15:11
Chapter: What Next?

You should at least tell us who it is! Plus there's no sign of Draco!!!

Reviewer: Harry4GinnyRon4Hermy
Date: 06/07/06 14:30
Chapter: Going Back to Hogwarts?

So he's gona be a child all thru da story? gd grief!

Reviewer: Harry4GinnyRon4Hermy
Date: 06/07/06 14:15
Chapter: A Dark Plan, a Daring Plan

Ah, thatz so sad, though!!!

Reviewer: Harry4GinnyRon4Hermy
Date: 06/07/06 13:07
Chapter: Ginny’s Birthday

Oh my god what happened?! Why he'd forget everything! Oh dear I think my guess my b wrong!

Author's Response: Thank you for all your reviews. He passed out because he saw himself as he truly was, giving his older mind a chance to re-emerge. He forgot about Ginny's present because he, like all little kids, is a bit self-centered.

Reviewer: Harry4GinnyRon4Hermy
Date: 06/07/06 13:00
Chapter: The Joys of Childhood

Wow I liked that chapter, it was funny!!! Hehe

Reviewer: Harry4GinnyRon4Hermy
Date: 06/07/06 12:18
Chapter: Hogwarts Letters

hmm...i wonder wat happens nxt!

Reviewer: Harry4GinnyRon4Hermy
Date: 06/07/06 12:03
Chapter: Slipping, Sliding, Falling Backward

ye, tonks' punishment was a bit harsh, i mean shez normally very nice...i wouldnt imagine anyone punishing harry on anything, though, i mean itz not his fault hes in that state...etc.

Reviewer: Harry4GinnyRon4Hermy
Date: 06/07/06 11:49
Chapter: Faking Sick

b. becuz harry is very naughty, i doubt whether he will learn the lesson! plus it must be near term time now!!

Reviewer: Harry4GinnyRon4Hermy
Date: 06/07/06 11:11
Chapter: Surprises

Um, naughty Harry!!! Nice chapter by the way...

Reviewer: Harry4GinnyRon4Hermy
Date: 06/07/06 10:57
Chapter: Acting Your Age

hey, good of u 2 make harry n ron friends again! gd chapter

Reviewer: Harry4GinnyRon4Hermy
Date: 06/07/06 10:45
Chapter: Molly’s Request / Harry’s Request

Confusing now!!!

Reviewer: Harry4GinnyRon4Hermy
Date: 06/07/06 10:36
Chapter: Truth or Nightmare

ouch! that was SCARY!!!

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